The Journey of the Lion Beast

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw that she was transformed into a white woman. Your book is clearly well written at the beginning, and the group portraits are also very good. But from time to time, he would speak in a pornographic voice with unknown meaning for no apparent reason, and the wine would suddenly break open. Then the closer you look to the back, the more poisonous and heaven-defying spots you see. Let me just say this: the protagonist's son has such a strong ultimate physical combat power, and the protagonist has just made a breakthrough in some aspect and is able to suppress his newly resurrected son. Then he directly purified his son's soul, turned him into a good man, and threw him into another world. The protagonist of "The Ghost Lion Who Stirred the World" relied on his IQ to come to this world to recruit reinforcements because the bosses in the original world were too strong and there were too many. Then his rescuer was inexplicably found. He had no physical contact or emotional foundation, and he had a pure unrequited love. He didn't even know it, a chaotic and extremely evil "wife" who killed his second brother and a bunch of relatives and friends. Inexplicably, he developed feelings for her. The son also suddenly resurrected and turned dark without any foreshadowing. Then the mother and son monster sharks brought in a large number of reinforcements that could have been moved, and then you, the one who brought the reinforcements, didn't stop you and threw such a strong son into another world. He has obviously been completely cleansed and turned into a pure and kind person, and his combat power is already controllable, yet he is still doing this. My second brother's other "wife" who was also extremely outrageous had some relatives and friends injured and disabled by the pure evil BOSS described before, and then he forgave her. Brother, tell the truth, how did you develop feelings for a palm-sized little pure beast fox that you have only been with for less than a year? Are you a furry person? No, you are a furry yourself. And this is just one of the unnatural points. Forget it, let's not talk about it. You can write so well, but you have to write blindly. And the writing is so outrageous.

It would be dangerous if the chosen children do not evolve to the ultimate level of visual visibility before they enter the digital world. The ultimate form of Leomon in the original work is just a mess. . . . It's still the state of the ultimate body that can be used for lunch. . . How dangerous is it before reaching the ultimate body? . . Not even Demonmon's mind control can be stopped. So at least you have to reach the Ultimate Body before you can afford to wander around.

After reading the first dozens of chapters, I gave it a try and discovered a few toxic points: 1. The main character is abused in this article, the same kind of abuse that is used to sell the heroine. 2. The routine is not deep enough to foresee the subsequent development. 3. No continuity outline has been found yet. 4. The writing style needs to be improved. 5. It is not good at liking and returning the favor.

The first one is really poisonous. If you write that the protagonist is hit by a car while playing on his mobile phone, it would be better than saving others.

This lion has been neutered. He is always beaten and abused. The aura is too strong and the dog is too weak.

Author, in fact, King Arthur's Britain has perished, and what is handed down now has been occupied by the enemy. The people in modern Britain are actually the descendants of the enemies of King Arthur's Britain. So you are mistaken!

Generally, those who write about abuse are people who have been abused and oppressed in reality and have developed abnormal hearts. The more his protagonist is abused, the happier he becomes.

Author, where did the lion beast offend you? Why are you either in a coma or on the way to a coma? It's not as good as the original work. You die early and are reborn. Do you feel very happy? You like the feeling of abuse and watching people dying. Author, there is something wrong with your psychology. Go see a psychological counselor more often.

It's really stupid. No wonder the results are still like this after more than 2,000 chapters. It's stupid, stupid, and can't be described clearly.

1. If you still have plenty of money, don't raise a mistress, but secretly raise a few students from impoverished mountainous areas, and you will definitely feel comfortable; 2. When you meet someone who sets up a street vendor at night, buy as much as you can, and don't bargain, as everything is not expensive. Even if the family is better off, who would set up a street stall at night in the cold weather? If you meet a student who is working as a student, especially a middle school student or a young girl, just buy some of what she sells. If she does not have family difficulties and it takes courage to go out to work, encourage her; 3. If you find the wallet, find the owner. If you are really short of money, leave the cash. If you call the owner, say you found it in the toilet. If you return your credit card, ID card, and driver's license to others, most people won't care about money anymore. Write down people's addresses in your notebook, and when you get rich later, go to them to apologize and return the money to them; 4. When someone asks for directions, if you happen to know the address, take the initiative to tell them. Don't be embarrassed, no one will laugh at you; 5. If there are broken glass, pins, blades, etc. In the thrown garbage, please wrap them with tape and wrap it in as many layers as possible. This reduces the probability of cleaning staff or garbage pickers being injured. Most of them are disadvantaged groups without medical insurance. Be considerate and considerate to them. Good people will be rewarded. 6. When you encounter lost children, old men and women, you can take them home if you can. 1. If you cannot take them home, you can also put them in a car or take them to the police station. Make a phone call for the elderly or children before leaving. You won't be short of the two phone bills anyway; 7. When it rains, snows, or is cold in the evening, and you meet a vegetable or fruit seller, and you don't have much left, and you can't go home, buy them all if you can, and if you can't buy them all, buy one portion. Stand up and use your body to block other people, leave an empty seat for those who need it, and then pretend to get out of the car and walk away. There are too many people and you can't go far. Smile when people express their gratitude to you; 9. If you have plenty of time, copy these sentences. Whenever you post a comment, no one talks about you.

Self-righteous, the protagonist, the evolution of a digital world is the process of data filling, and each evolution fills in a piece of data. The author also wrote about how difficult it is to upgrade in flesh and blood! I can't even fight with my children. I dig holes everywhere but don't have the ability to fill them. It's so difficult to fight every game. It would be better for the children to live the same life without the protagonist if they don't get much exercise with the protagonist! I gave up the book, it was so hard to read!

It always feels like the same old 2008 routine with a new layer of skin: danger, rescue, breakthrough, and then even greater danger, garbage.

The setting is entirely your own. The digital world is the online world. Still bleeding. . . I would be embarrassed to death if I didn't embarrass myself. Everything on the Internet is digitized, right?

🙄🙄🙄 It's not good. I'm abusing the main text. Not long after the start, the protagonist was knocked unconscious, and his companions were beaten back to their original form, and were captured by the Clown King for experiments. It looked like a piece of abuse at first glance, bye bye.

I thought it was a cool novel, but it turned out to be a tragic novel, with the protagonist being tortured all the time! No fun, withdraw!

The Ultimates I know: SteelGaruru, BattleGreymon, Vampiremon, GoldenLeomon, SteelGyromon? Steel Seadramon, Puppetmon, Mechanical Evildramon, and Clown King. That's it. It should not have been missed.

This book has good intentions, but it is too contrived. Totally contrary to the readers, you said my name is poisonous? The author plays this poisonous point very playfully. You mean the abuser? The author specializes in how to torture. After reading so many books, this is the first time I have seen this kind of deliberate and anti-reader behavior. Go against the readers, awesome!

I have read more than 400 chapters so far. I have experienced the world of Digimon and the world of Slippery Ghost Head. It gives me the feeling that it is a harem within a harem. I don't know how many women will appear after reading it. I guess there are three or four in each world. I have no love for the harem, so I have withdrawn.

There is a reason why it only has over 500,000 clicks for more than 3 million words. When writing about Digimon, just write about Digimon properly. People who jump around don't know what you are writing. Not only did the author fail to make a detailed outline, he probably didn't even write an outline. The first hundred or so chapters have reached the pinnacle of maturity, and you can fight against the general perfect body. Then after two thousand chapters, yes you read that right, after two thousand chapters, you can fight against the Four Kings of Darkness. Progress is extremely slow. I also love the mindless and sadistic protagonist, and some plots are completely meaningless. The title of your book clearly shows that it is a book that only Digimon fans will read. Aren't you seeking death by writing so many comics? If you really want to write a comprehensive comic, you can completely finish this book, make an outline that only talks about Digimon, and use hundreds of chapters to write the story clearly. Then I started a book and wrote a comprehensive comic, and now I can just take a seat and time travel, and the universe is so annoying that Warcraft has developed a time travel. It gives me a headache just looking at it. If you want to watch a comprehensive comic, you won't be able to find it. If you want to watch Digimon, you will be disappointed.

A water king level author! Basically, each chapter begins with a few hundred words of author's remarks! I have to write more after the end of a chapter

You can meet the Clown King at the beginning of the chapter. I was convinced too.

Naruto shouldn't be as strong as Digimon. The world of destruction in Naruto is Kaguya, and it's just hypnosis. In the digital world, there are many more. The ones I know of include Dilimon, Lucemon, and Crystalmon. Needless to say, Vajramon, Royal Knight, Olympus God, Fifth Captain, Four Great Dragons, Yellow Dragonmon, etc. In the fifth volume, BanchoLeomon is able to carry the Digital World on his shoulders alone.

Therefore, I think things like Digimon are completely perverted products.

The whole tragedy, the table full of glasses.

The beginning of the story is very weak, and it's completely embarrassing to have two identical plots. It's enough once, but it's boring to do it a second time. It's boring and not sad. This old routine

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It's too outrageous, too forced, and too NC.

A bunch of levels were written wrong. Is it troublesome to check it? Scribbling here. Also a lot of OOC. The pumpkin beast was reduced from the complete body to the mature stage, and the ore beast was upgraded from the growth stage to the mature stage. And when did these two characters become so murderous? The same goes for Crazy Leomon, who was forcibly upgraded to a complete form during his maturity.

I really can't stand taking any more random pictures.

I just couldn't get in and was censored. A little frightened. I thought another good book was going to be banned.