American TV Series Fatty Immortal

The wife is old and ugly, and the daughter is despicable and dissolute. What is there to write about this kind of character? Who can have a sense of immersion in this kind of protagonist and feel happy? Abnormal?

The writing style is a bit too serious and serious, and lacks a bit of humor. I remember the protagonist's wife was very playful, and the character design was too upright.

The setting is that the protagonist does not know the plot of the film and television, and does not recognize the characters in the film and television? ?

Even a SM and a guy who doesn't tie his pants can write so seriously. I'm convinced. If I hadn't seen it before, I would have thought he was a good person 😅

It's not that cool. I originally thought that there was immortality mixed with evil forces. Marvel, the protagonist would become a character like Deadpool, but first he was entangled by a clown doll, and there was no way, and then the devil came and there was no way. Now even the little gangsters from the Milkovich family who robbed the store didn't dare to empty their magazines. If the immortality is so cowardly, why don't you move away and hang out with the Shameless gang?

After reading part of it, I wonder what the author thought? Since it's a time-travel movie and the protagonist doesn't know the plot at all, what's the point of time-travel? It would be better to write about a native. In addition to Golden Finger, when traveling through ancient times, you need to use modern ideas to influence ancient ideas. When traveling through movies and TV shows, you need to know the plot in advance to take advantage, etc.

The male protagonist's design is quite strange. He wakes up with a wife and daughter. Fortunately, the wife at least helps him cook and teach him how to read and do things, but the daughter is actually willing to raise her and wants to help her go to college. It would be okay if this daughter is a caring little cotton-padded jacket, but this daughter is a bitch. She talks evil and hates herself. Not to mention that the original owner of Shameless was so angry that normal people would want to create a new one.

The title of the book shows that the protagonist is a fat man rather than a handsome guy, and the introduction also states that he is a middle-aged man with a wife and daughter, which clearly introduces the general style of the book. Don't you already have a rough idea of the general style of the book? Why are there still a lot of people complaining about the lack of a sense of substitution, and complaining that they don't like the middle-aged fat protagonist? You really don't like this genre. You should just click on the upper right corner when you see the introduction. If you don't like this genre, you click on it, and then you complain that you don't like this genre. This behavior is really incomprehensible.

The protagonist is old and ugly, and has no sense of immersion. What's the point of writing about demons and the like? Isn't the city beautiful?

The protagonist is just like a native, and he doesn't know all the characters' plots. What's the point of doing a time travel? Even if you have never watched the TV series, you still understand a few basic things from the starting point. However, in the end, you don't know all the protagonists, and you feel like a fool.

I came in confusion, I left in confusion, I don't know what to write, they are all disgusting characters, no one is normal.

It's quite interesting, but I can't stand the updates every day. There's no plot yet.

Indeed, this plot TV series is particularly outrageous. The heroine has been talked to for 100 times, and that beautiful girl, holy shit, it's so despicable. Anyway, this TV series challenges all kinds of human moral bottom lines. I remember the fat policeman died the most miserably. He seemed to have collapsed and jumped into the river to commit suicide.

Goldfinger, 6666, only came out after a few chapters. The author probably wrote this book just for fun. Wouldn't it make readers finish it?

Today I watched the Karen part of Shameless Season 1 again. Frank was really born. The part where Karen takes a bath is amazing. Her breasts are really beautiful.

He talks about loving his family. He goes out for a few days and doesn't ask about his family. He's not very capable and he still likes to mind other people's business. The key is that you develop several stories at once. The protagonist even appears in person. This is too messy.

Personally, I suggest the author to go to female videos and get good results.

I haven't seen the show, and I don't know the people. After reading more than 20 chapters, I felt no satisfaction at all. I thought there would be some kind of twist, rejuvenation, immortality, fat guy turning into a handsome guy. Knowing that there is Stark Group, there is no reaction or action. But my writing skills are pretty solid. After reading the comment section, I can't understand the author's psychology. Why is the starting point of writing so tricky when the foundation is good?

，， Many characters in Shameless are suitable for time travel. At least you can find someone young and handsome who can have a sense of empathy. Like Lip, the policeman who likes Fiona, or my eldest sister's first serious car thief boyfriend, many characters are suitable for writing, and these are more suitable for the protagonist to participate in the plot. And this kind of world is not suitable for involving too much. Originally, I was wearing a daily American TV series. The ones you participated in such as "The Big Bang Theory", "Broke Sisters", "Friends", etc. Are quite good. As a result, there are so many supernatural worlds. Even a world like Marvel, which often has global crises, has it. You can treat other supernatural worlds as a copy and travel through them every once in a while. It would be good if the main world is a world of daily leisure. And I'm speechless if I don't know the plot at all, and I'm even more speechless if I don't even know about Marvel.

Start a new book! I really can't stand this book anymore

I came here for Shameless. The plot of Shameless in the first 60 and 70 chapters is quite good, but I feel it is completely off track in the later chapters. Chapters 890 to 200 are directly exorcism stories. The proportion of wives and children is pitifully small. I roughly flipped through the following chapters. Not to mention Marvel, even Conan did it? I really just wrote it for myself. Even if I am writing about a fan of an American drama, I would not be so jumpy. At least I would add together several worldviews with little difference in combat power. This is just random stitching.

Leomon's Journey has been removed from the shelves?

The writing style is really good. As long as the author is willing to cater to the public's taste and create a refreshing setting, the results will be great. I can only say that it is really unique.