Mortals Cultivating Immortality in Shushan Mountain

I was persuaded to quit when I saw that the protagonist didn't want to become a disciple As I analyzed earlier, I had no backing and was beaten everywhere. I can only accept it as a coward when facing the disciples of the big sect. If you want to say that no one has ever liked you, forget it. Later, there is a plot about the opportunity to become a disciple of a big sect. You don't like either Qingcheng or Emei, good guys. You just like to be Long Aotian. If you can't stand it or if you don't like it, you won't go. You are the one who rejected them all. Which one of you and the protagonist is schizophrenic?

What would it be like for ordinary people without a sect in the Shushan world who want to practice? Huanzhu Louzhu has already written: There are two ordinary people who want to practice and become immortals, but they can't find a sect and a senior master who is willing to accept a disciple. After more than ten years of painstaking search, they finally found the inheritance left by a swordsman from Shu (Sichuan area) who had ascended in the Tang Dynasty. It included his cultivation techniques and his experiences and insights during the cultivation process. Logically speaking, it was enough to just put the food in his mouth and chew it down, and then these two unlucky guys planned to get up and practice. As a result, the two unlucky men found that they could not understand it at all. As mentioned earlier, this master was a swordsman from Shu during the Tang Dynasty, so his inheritance was also written in the Shu dialect during the Tang Dynasty and was a Taoist terminology that had been encrypted twice. After receiving the inheritance, these two unlucky guys have been practicing hard for decades without even touching the edge of a hundred-day foundation. And there are not many secret books under the Shushan world view that are written in simplified Chinese or traditional Chinese characters. The typical writing languages ​​are dragons, chapters, phoenixes, heavenly books, talismans and other texts. It is impossible for ordinary people to translate them word for word. You must be able to understand it, and it is easier to get direct access to the masterless inheritance in the Shushan world: Guangcheng Immortal Book (a mixture of official script from the Qin and Han Dynasties, flower and bird seal scripts from the Spring and Autumn Period, dragon chapters and phoenix inscriptions, and oracle bone inscriptions from the Shang and Zhou Dynasties). Hesha Qishu (compiled from the oracle bone inscriptions of the Shang and Zhou dynasties and the dragon and phoenix inscriptions of the Jin and Jin dynasties). To sum up, if ordinary people want to practice in the Shushan world, they have no choice but to find a reliable apprenticeship. (If you say that you have various cheats on the game system in the Shushan online game world, just pretend that I didn't say it).

The first thing Shushan does is to cover up the secrets of heaven. A bunch of people won't ascend, and a bunch of Bodhisattvas and Arhats won't leave. Moreover, every thing has its own owner.

Less than ten chapters into the game, the protagonist has already encountered many life-and-death crises, all relying on the protagonist's halo to survive. Such a protagonist without any B-level skills is quite useless.

I felt relieved when I saw that everyone was trolling the author.

It is almost impossible to write the "fixed number" of Shushan. The reason is also very simple. There is a spiritual world in Shushan, and the two worlds are separate. Immortal Chizhan often went to the fairy world to visit friends, and the giant tree god came from the fairy world. The master with long eyebrows is also an immortal descended from the immortal world. . .

Why are there quarrels in the comments section? The author uses the world of Shushan Swordsman. But I definitely haven't read the original work, and I haven't understood its background and setting. Then the writing method of Xiaobai's time-traveling Long Aotian was still used, but the original work was a classical fairy tale. Many of the people who came to see it came because of the Shushan Swordsman reputation, but they ended up selling it as dog meat. Isn't this a scolding!

Isn't this just Long Aotian's apprenticeship? No need, I have an author; sect members support each other? No, I have the author; the knowledge of words and secret language required to read Taoism? No need, as long as the author says it's okay; does the boss give you blessing? It's even less necessary, as long as there is an author, that's it. Simply click on it for free, and all you see is the unlimited "author" function. There is no attempt to construct the reason for the protagonist's success. Everything can be directly pushed to the author. Normal novels will at least try to make the novel "reasonable" and give as much evidence as possible for cheating. Instead of deliberately writing that the protagonist relies on "himself" for everything, he is actually the author.

The main storyline was poorly designed and fell into the original plot line, focusing on fighting swords without even looking at how much weight I had!

Big poisonous weeds, big garbage, work and life are annoying enough! I felt even more uncomfortable after reading this book! !

I made a post before and pointed out the author's problem, but the author deleted the post. Come on, little brother, if it weren't for your writing about Shushan, I wouldn't even bother to say anything. Shushan is such a good IP and has so many loyal fans. Even if you plagiarize the original work, your subscription will not be so low. I wrote another book about Shushan at the same time as you, "The Road to Shushan Walks Alone". Please read more and see what other people wrote.

Does the author understand Shushan? The great power of Shushan is capable of pinching and calculating! The arrangements of various causes and effects over thousands of years are clear! What the hell are you writing!

No wonder you are so confused: 1. At least look at the original work. Many places have been changed randomly. Some of them cannot be calculated well, and some simply rely on Baidu to write the book without knowing anything. 2. The protagonist is in the world of cultivating immortals, and he does not become a disciple until later. There is no reason. You can ensure that you are in the best condition at all times. As long as it is the world of immortal cultivation, Han Li has to rely on Huang Maple Valley, not to mention that the whole book Shushan talks about backing 3. The protagonist is really unsophisticated in some places. You don't have to be sophisticated, but you can't understand. You feel like a student who has never been out of society.

The protagonist is too obsessed with death. He has such a low level of cultivation and doesn't practice well. Instead, he wanders around everywhere. Without the aura of the protagonist, I don't know how many times I have died.

Originally, everyone liked the whole Huangdi Neijing + Fantianyin, but it turned out that it was superfluous and added a five-color divine light to Fantianyin. The readers objected to such an operation and the author decided to go all the way to darkness. Ok, then you can also take the route of the original crusher. In a worldview without heavenly arithmetic, casual cultivators can walk sideways even if they have reached such a great level of cultivation. Everyone likes to see this. However, the shameful operation came again, forcing the protagonist to benefit from the two most powerful magic weapons in the movie version, Haotian Mirror and Nanming Lihuo Sword, returning to the previous Shushan novel that took all resources. But, if you are given a powerful magic weapon and you are not allowed to use it, you will be left hanging. The battle is back and forth with the three major swordsmanships, and the routine is "killing randomly in the same level, encountering a strong enemy whose level is crushing you, and coincidentally, a senior expert with whom you have a good relationship protects you." I am tired of aesthetics. It's better to think clearly about which route to take, and to design the protagonist's growth curve and plot to make it more interesting. If you can't think of where to write it, you just feel "this is good, let's add it in".

As we all know, if not all opportunities in Shushan are nailed down, at least 98% of them are nailed down. If you inherit the inheritance, you will have to follow the cause and effect. Fortunately, some famous sects have people above them who will not cause too much trouble. Rogue cultivators basically have no way to survive unless they mess up.

Really, there are a lot of non-human things here bb. This book may be a bit unsatisfactory in the eyes of some people, but it is indeed top-notch among Shushan fans. I don't know what the shady people are behind those who say poisonous weeds. I hope the author will work hard and not be affected by these things. It has been a long time since Shushan fans saw good quality.

Although I have not read the original text of Shushan, I roughly know one thing, that is, the Patriarch of Emei said that Emei was prosperous before his ascension. The Patriarch of Emei helped others crazily before his ascension. Some of them followed the ascension and left some magic weapons in the cave, and some of those who did not ascend were just short of ascending and were preparing to ascend by relying on the Thousand Years Catastrophe and Emei Daxing (I am not sure about luck or luck). Buddhism has left a bunch of Bodhisattvas and Arhats who can ascend but do not ascend to help Emei prosper. The story unfolds like this.

This is China's authentic classical cultivation of immortality. Many authors do not understand our country's Taoist cultivation culture, so they draw on the settings of Western magic and fighting spirit to write fantasy cultivation novels, which are nondescript.

The author writes well. I have been a bookworm for 20 years. It is worth recommending.

🐔Bamao, take the Baiyang diagram and be driven away by Emei Qi Lingyun and Ling Yunfeng in an arrogant and domineering manner and destroy the secret book. Save Qiu Zhixian but Zhu Wen and Zhou Qingyun come up and say a shameless monster and destroy the magic weapon. It's a misunderstanding, an understatement and not taking it seriously 😒😒 It doesn't look good, yet so many people are bragging about the best Shushan fan 😒😒

The author is too difficult. I think it is quite good. The article says this is unreasonable and that is unreasonable. I feel a little sorry for the author.

Emei is domineering, but he is only domineering towards those from the side sect and the demonic path. He has never taken the initiative to hurt ordinary people. Why is it that the book is full of descriptions of Emei fighting and fighting with swords without caring about the lives of the people around him? Emei hurts the innocent, and the protagonist saves the innocent. This bloody scene has appeared more than once in your book, right? The original work has millions of words, is there any place like this? Black is not that dark.

An abusive main article that is n versions behind?

The writing is quite good, the writing style is very good, it breaks away from the setting of the original work, and it feels like a parallel world in The Legend of Shushan Swordsman.

Why don't you write it? In fact, the writing is okay.

In fact, the author's writing style is not bad, but he wrote it himself, but all the readers ran away.

The author will continue to write new books, and he can also practice writing. It just depends on luck and he will be able to take off.

Rubbish novel 🤭 Techniques of hip-pulling, plot of hip-pulling, character description of hip-pulling, protagonist even more hip-pulling

After "Shu Mountain", this book ranks among the top three in the Shu Mountain series. Although there were some ups and downs in the mid-term, the flaws were not concealed. The most ideological one is "Shushan: The True Sect of the Demon Sect". I became enlightened immediately after reading it. . Ha ha. Come on, author, and become a great master soon! ! !