Rebirth of One Piece: Vice Captain

This kind of stallion text is really unacceptable. The key point is that you, an adult soul, don't even let go of a teenager who has never seen a woman? After reading more than 30 chapters, I just can't stand it anymore! Farewell

I have read about a hundred chapters, and I will share my understanding with the book friends who come later 1. The emotional drama of One Piece is difficult to write, especially when it involves the empress Robin and others, not to mention that you also added several women who were not in the original work. (The daughter of the down payment fell in love with the protagonist to the death in one day? The empress is fine with this, but the empress' emotional description is also very inadequate, which is very explosive.) The reborn person who was also popular in the book review section embarrassed a ten-year-old girl. 2. The setting of the strength system, emmm, I suspect that the author has not read the original work carefully. What does it mean that the overlord-colored domineering power is the strongest domineering power? The domineering power of a Qing soldier is only used to prove the qualifications of a king. Any time a brigadier general's strength is put aside, it will be suppressed. Moreover, such things as the qualifications of a king are almost impossible to exist in the navy (except for the special Garp, I don't know if it exists, other existing generals and marshals cannot have it). The early strength has improved too fast! (But the author uses the strongest genius in the navy to explain that it is acceptable) I don't know about the subsequent changes in strength because I haven't seen it, but I saw many people talking about this issue in the book reviews, and I guess there is something wrong with it 3. Characters, speaking styles, thinking patterns, and logic. Bad review! (Mainly logic) Do you have to praise a protagonist in just a few sentences? Why is this kid special? This kid is interesting and has a future. I'll do it! All in all, I only read about a hundred chapters. Within this range, it is recommended that a few people watch it, and others can leave 1. Those who have basically never read the original work, only read some fan fiction 2. Those who read the book basically without thinking (not in a derogatory sense! Just lazy), just enjoy the fun 3. Emmm In fact, I think people above high school age should not read it (unless you read ten lines at a glance). There are often some dialogue logic problems, and it will be very awkward to read. Of course, my suggestion excludes most readers, but this is the feeling that this book has for more than a hundred chapters, otherwise you will have a high chance of being poisoned.

It's a little bit poisonous. You're a reborn person, you don't know the plot at all, and you're still crazy about cheating.

The first few chapters are eye-catching, but after a few chapters you'll understand. What kind of SM novel?

I recently fell in love with Doflamingo, so I imitated his steps, made Kizaru's expressions, smoked like Smoker, and said to everyone: Give me face and be my son. So I have the left hand of red hair, the calf of Aokiji, the front teeth of Blackbeard, and the eyes of Fujitora.

The more poisonous the world becomes, the more novels are written. Many of the good novels are about eunuchs.

Readers who want to read the book can read it. I only read the first thirty chapters to tell you my feelings. Strange strength value. Before time travel, I was a 19-year-old ordinary person, and then I traveled back to a 10-year-old body. I was taught by Garp for one year and mastered two of the six naval postures. To be honest, I feel ashamed for CP9 and others who have lived in the pirate world since they were young and have been used to life and death for many years of training. In one year, you will have the strength of a colonel at the Navy Headquarters. Smoker, you should commit suicide by committing seppuku. It's so shameful. (Note that the strength of the colonel here is because the protagonist does not use fruit abilities. He can be 50-50 on par with the colonel just by relying on body postures. This is the body of an 11-year-old. I am afraid he is not a muscular brother with giant genes) Then there is the name Lin Tian, ​​but it is not a big problem. If you really want to read a book, you can still ignore it. Then the most terrifying thing comes. I am a nineteen-year-old adult. Even if I am now an 11-year-old child, my mind should be more mature. After all, I am a person who has passed the rebellious period. I actually forcefully pick up a little girl in her early ten years. I don't know what kind of mentality this is. I can at most see these ten-year-old lolita as cute as little sisters.

It's so toxic, I don't understand that these people who write the same story nowadays are so talented in character design, but they turn out to be useless as soon as they come into contact with the plot. Others get stronger as they practice, while the protagonist in the novel becomes more useless as he practices. Don't brag to me that Luffy is the protagonist. You have traveled through time and the protagonist is not you? If you weren't the protagonist, could it be a fanfic written by Oda? The combat power is also up and down. When I was a navy, I wandered around. When I became a pirate, I became timid without restraints. It was weird.

Have you accepted the aunt? Confiscated and not read

This book is so outrageous that Nami, the Robin Girl Emperor, should be renamed Reincarnation of One Piece: Teddy Reincarnated

It's so rubbish, it poisoned me to death. I gave it up decisively after reading about 100 chapters. Now I have read 50 more chapters. I'm just going to kill this rubbish book. It's a waste of my youth.

I've already fought Whitebeard, and even came here to hang out with Luffy. I only looked at the chapter list, but I have no desire to read on.

Being a dog for the protagonist? What else are you doing? Don't watch anime?

Another novel where the main character is a dog!

I have read about a hundred chapters, and I will share my understanding with the book friends who come later 1. The emotional drama of One Piece is difficult to write, especially when it involves the empress Robin and others, not to mention that you also added several women who were not in the original work. (The daughter of the down payment fell in love with the protagonist to the death in one day? The empress is fine with this, but the empress' emotional description is also very inadequate, which is very explosive.) The reborn person who was also popular in the book review section embarrassed a ten-year-old girl. 2. The setting of the strength system, emmm, I suspect that the author has not read the original work carefully. What does it mean that the overlord-colored domineering power is the strongest domineering power? The domineering power of a Qing soldier is only used to prove the qualifications of a king. Any time a brigadier general's strength is put aside, it will be suppressed. Moreover, such things as the qualifications of a king are almost impossible to exist in the navy (except for the special Garp, I don't know if it exists, other existing generals and marshals cannot have it). The early strength has improved too fast! (But the author uses the strongest genius in the navy to explain that it is acceptable) I don't know about the subsequent changes in strength because I haven't seen it, but I saw many people talking about this issue in the book reviews, and I guess there is something wrong with it 3. Characters, speaking styles, thinking patterns, and logic. Bad review! (Mainly logic) Do you have to praise a protagonist in just a few sentences? Why is this kid special? This kid is interesting and has a future. I'll do it! All in all, I only read about a hundred chapters. Within this range, it is recommended that a few people watch it, and others can leave 1. Those who have basically never read the original work, only read some fan fiction 2. Those who read the book basically without thinking (not in a derogatory sense! Just lazy), just enjoy the fun 3. Emmm In fact, I think people above high school age should not read it (unless you read ten lines at a glance). There are often some dialogue logic problems, and it will be very awkward to read. Of course, my suggestion excludes most readers, but this is the feeling that this book has for more than a hundred chapters, otherwise you will have a high chance of being poisoned.

He was obviously a time traveler, but in the end he acted as if he didn't know anything. He was startled and looked like a fool. He was so stupid.

Seeing Qing Zhi say hello to him who was still a lieutenant general, Garp nodded secretly, which shows what kind of character this boy has. That's all.

Let's put it this way, when Luffy is preparing to go to sea, the protagonist immediately becomes a general, and then he fights three generals alone, seriously injuring two of them, and then runs away to Luffy's place and gets on Luffy's ship. At this point, there are only more than 200 chapters, and then he can't hold on anymore.

So what is the fruit power of pig's feet?

How should I put it? Nothing changed in the battle on top. Whitebeard and Ace are still dead, and Red Dog is still alive. One of the things that everyone wants to see most in One Piece fans is that he saved Ace and killed Red Dog in the battle on top. However, you didn't do both. It's really frustrating to watch. The only thing that changed was that Blackbeard didn't have the ability to get the Shock Fruit.

The writing is really speechless. Sometimes he is terrible, and sometimes he is so strong. Is his strength the equipment? When it is turned on, it can be used. If it is not turned on, it can do nothing. Can he be more stupid if he loses the key somewhere?

The book review area directly persuaded me to quit, thank you all for your profound experience in drug testing.

There are too many jokes, the character's behavior does not match the prototype, and the dialogue is very poisonous.

The early stages were pretty good, but the plot later was basically the same as the original. Although the protagonist was very strong, nothing changed, and Ace still died.

The book has been abandoned, removed from the bookshelf, and no longer read. It just doesn't have a blacklist function, otherwise it would definitely be included.

. . . It feels quite weird, the tone of dialogue and titles are too dramatic (hasn't the author watched One Piece?), The ability setting and the behavior of flirting with girls have a bit of a dick flavor (I still don't understand what it is like to spank a girl directly by someone I don't know yet). And my intuitive feeling is that after reading eighty chapters, I am a little confused about the protagonist's abilities and skills. And the description of the hair with "Three Thousand Black Hairs", the title of "husband" feels a bit confusing. What a show

Well, if it sounds disgusting to me, congratulations, it was a success.

This book is highly toxic, with all kinds of typos, and even the name of the protagonist is occasionally wrong.

It has the characteristics of "glorious, poor writing, boring plot, and inconsistent logic". For example, the protagonist goes to sea for the first time. As a navy, he receives a distress signal from pirates on the sea in the middle of the night. In the original work, I didn't remember that the phone bugs could call for help indiscriminately. I won't mention this setting anymore. Just where is the protagonist Jiahao? He was the only one who heard the caller's breathing steady and judged that it was unreasonable for the caller to ask for help late at night. The reason was that pirates also had to sleep and would not rob in the middle of the night. After arriving on the island, the protagonist saw no one on the street, and immediately judged that the lack of nightlife was controlled by pirates. He saw two pirates chasing a little girl, which further confirmed this. I just want to complain - is it possible, a more worry-free way, to kill all the residents of the island? An even more reasonable explanation is that the islanders and pirates are in a cooperative mode? And have you ever lived in the world of One Piece? You just said that there must be nightlife on an unknown island? In poor places, lighting requires careful budgeting. Where do you get business lighting or even public lighting such as street lights? In short, this book gave me the feeling that an author with a low IQ and no common sense really wanted to describe a protagonist with a high IQ. In fact, this point was revealed from the beginning of the book, where the author set the protagonist to be an orphan + the top scorer in the college entrance examination. According to my experience in reading online articles, the higher the IQ of the protagonist is set, the author often has no understanding of what high IQ is like. The protagonists in their works often show a high IQ like shooting an arrow first and then drawing a target. What is worse is that they are smart and regard some common sense as the protagonist's performance of high IQ. Ha, this book does not break my stereotype of this kind of characters. This book can be said to be the type that is so terrible even in a novice novel.

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, I felt like I just didn't know what to do. The character of the protagonist was not clear enough and there was no sense of immersion. Moreover, the emotional writing was as good as Long Aotian's, so I won't complain. In terms of the plot, it is a bit far-fetched like the previous novels. It is forced to be pretentious and can solve the troubles that must be caused quickly and neatly. Sometimes the plot is inconsistent. For example, it is said earlier that Rayleigh cannot solve all the general-level officers at once, so the protagonists need to deal with the school-level ones for a few more minutes. Later, it is written that Rayleigh's domineering domineering power directly beats almost all the school-level officers in seconds. The overlord's domineering power is so powerful that a general-level officer can be seconds away if he is a domineering person. The author's writing style is also very different. Generally speaking, the narrative is straightforward. The author likes to narrate in flashback, writing the results first and then going back to write about the process. For now, I feel that this novel is not very good, the setting is not too reasonable, and the characters are not very vivid. It cannot show the world of pirates. Compared with the several pirate novels I have read before, it is still far behind. Unfortunately, this novel has been written and there is no way to change it. Otherwise, it can be used as a reference.