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1. 1 路 After Bystander A Bound to JJ Literature City 路人甲绑定JJ文学城后 Chirp Chirp King啾啾大王Danmei (BL)1.4M WordsOngoing [Updates before midnight. If I don't update, I'll post a leave notice] One second, Yu Zhi was half-listening as a friend complained that the protagonist of some novel was a bloodthirsty, unhinged psychopath. The next, the novel's plot became reality. The apocalypse arrived, and pollution transformed the whole world. Some people were contaminated, mouths growing out of the tops of their heads. Others awakened and gained supernatural abilities. Yu Zhi: What the hell?! Bad news: He had never paid 86.4kFavorites99.6kClicks/ch201.7kGifts

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   The main character is a heavy smoker; I don't want to watch it. It's just another one of those talk-no-jutsu stories, pretty boring.

2. 2 哥 Brother, You’re Not Allowed to Hit My Husband!! 哥你不许打我老公！！ Liu Chu流初Danmei (BL)606k WordsCompleted [Signed with Jinjiang for the Simplified Chinese edition + an unabridged Traditional Chinese edition. Currently collecting suggestions for the print title and bonus chapters… Leave a comment in the Weibo Super Topic for “Bro, You’re Not Allowed to Hit My Husband,” or search for @LiuchuGugu. I’ll read them all! Anyone whose suggestion is chosen will receive a signed copy!] [I’ve finally finished revising the novel. The author is only responsible for the official Jinjiang edition. Please don’t con 198.1kFavorites177.3kClicks/ch241.4kGifts

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   I was lured in by the copywriting, but found out the male lead is a bit low-class.

3. 3 非21+ The Atypical Group Darling 非典型团宠 Wind Through the Squirrels风入松鼠Danmei (BL)2.2M WordsCompleted 150.2kFavorites211.7kClicks/ch1.4MGifts

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   I only saw the beginning of the park, and I felt that Gong Chaoxiong was low-class, so I stopped watching.

4. 4 诸 Descendants of the Gods 诸神后裔 Gathering Moonlight拾月光Danmei (BL)807k WordsCompleted ※ End-of-the-world wasteland setting, ABO. ※ A story about a sweet little puppy who turns into a great villain, then kidnaps his heartless older brother and devours him whole. A powerful couple, with the younger one pursuing the older; they love and fight each other. Ye Zhan is an Alpha, a handsome and capable one at that. He thrives in the apocalypse, living life to the fullest. Until one day, he discovers that he is transforming from an Alpha into an Omega... As if things weren't bad enough, 11.1kFavorites12.2kClicks/ch8.1kGifts

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   I like the world-building. I don't usually like stories with love-hate relationships because poorly written ones feel like a silent, resentful couple, and indeed they are. You hide eight secrets from me, I hide nine from you, one second we're hating each other, the next we're back to being friends. The reader is just another part of the protagonist's story. Getting back to the setting, this grand world-building wasn't developed much in the early stages; it was only briefly mentioned before returning to political infighting on a small map. This kind of love-hate relationship would have resonated more with readers later on as they delve deeper into the protagonist's perspective. This world is so mysterious and captivating, why wasn't more developed? I was really itching to read more, and I didn't want to be forced into descriptions of the protagonist's family troubles before I knew anything about it. There weren't many characters, and the other bloodline characters weren't shown—no character development, no personality traits, no ensemble cast. Fans of ensemble casts will be very disappointed. 😂 Some of the protagonist's actions are also hard to understand. That's it. I might go back to this when I'm looking for something to read.

5. 5 全 Enemy of All Worlds 全界公敌 Yao Yue Kong妖月空Danmei (BL)2.8M WordsCompleted The thirty-first century, after the Great Silence. Soldiers are symbols of wealth, honor, and power. Grandpa often sighed, “Alas, our Wu family hasn't produced a soldier in ten generations.” Wu Hai thought, I'll be the first. Aiming to be number one in the world, but his love interest ends up the world's public enemy! A lazy, charismatic powerhouse from another world x a hot-blooded Earth boy · Futuristic fantasy, mainly set on Earth, leveling up in another world, older seme, mainly from the 44kFavorites94.5kClicks/ch114.1kGifts

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   It feels like the bottom is constantly licking...

6. 6 收 How to Handle a Team Invitation from My Arch-Nemesis 收到了宿敌的组队邀请怎么破 Fourteen Continents一十四洲Danmei (BL)401k WordsCompleted [Revising continuously, so earlier and later parts may not match. Don't read] Theme: 63.7kFavorites85.4kClicks/ch23.6kGifts

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   I like the premise, but the bottom is just a simp, and the top doesn't seem to have any romantic feelings for me. All the heart-fluttering moments are in the author's little skits 😂

7. 7 毒 The Poisonous Continent 毒行大陆 SISIMODanmei (BL)424k WordsCompleted For everyone else, this is just a game. For him, it’s a matter of survival. · An overpowered golden finger and a satisfying, level-up progression story. No angst, entirely fictional, no need to nitpick the details, and there may be plot holes… Please forgive the author for letting her imagination run wild so often T_T · This is a full-dive online game novel. Note: It’s not a full-dive version of Jian Wang 3, but an original full-dive game set in a Western fantasy world. · The male protagonist t 43.7kFavorites167.1kClicks/ch22kGifts

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   Perhaps it's because I'm getting older and don't like this kind of scheming, backstabbing interpersonal relationships that resemble elementary school children fighting cocks.

8. 8 在 Am I the Only One Farming in the Apocalypse Game? 在末日游戏种田的只有我？ Gentle Young Master公子柔Danmei (BL)634k WordsCompleted Dawn Break is a wildly popular apocalypse survival game where players battle each other, fight zombies and monsters, and craft equipment and weapons. Jian Xingyi was dragged into playing by a friend. With his clumsy hands, he gets pummeled by other players in competitive matches and kicked around by zombies in dungeons. So in this combat game, Jian Xingyi has no choice but to become... a farming and management player. While everyone else risks their lives fighting monsters, he unlocks recipes a 33.5kFavorites46.1kClicks/ch19.8kGifts

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   The protagonist's cheat ability is so powerful that the pacing is too fast, making it feel like a pointless, rambling account. The protagonist's organization is so righteous it's almost evil, too idealistic, and the time-travel and rebirth trope feels a bit cheesy in this story...

9. 9 末 Surviving the Apocalypse 末世之绝地求生 He Daren何大仁Danmei (BL)1.8M WordsCompleted [The story is complete! Please leave a five-star review~] *The author can’t remove ratings after a story is complete. Please contact customer service by phone to confirm. Space + cultivation technique + spirit spring + crystal core setting Also known as “After Raising a Dog, I Was Never Afraid of Zombies Again” This story has undergone major revisions several times, so it differs greatly from what’s on pirate sites. Please don’t read a pirated version and then come here to question the plot. (An 194.8kFavorites364.9kClicks/ch334.4kGifts

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   Pure dislike of portable space

10. 10 全 The VRMMO Grunt 全息网游之苦力 Su You Bing酥油饼Danmei (BL)540k WordsCompleted After getting out of prison, Guan Mian found a job that didn't require leaving home or having any professional skills: A grunt in an online game. Now that's some seriously hard work! The Playful Otherworld series: Dream Continent series: Theme: 27.3kFavorites90.3kClicks/ch11.4kGifts

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    I don't know who the seme is. I was already discouraged by the character's idiotic logic before he even appeared. I didn't like either of the two suspected seme characters I saw before I left.

11. 11 在 Jumping Back and Forth Between O and A 在O与A中反复横跳 Mu Yulu沐裕鹿Danmei (BL)767k WordsCompleted [A story about an Earthling who transmigrates into an ABO world, keeps picking up other people's pheromones, and gets mistaken for an A or an O] [A romance-obsessed world, but with a career-driven protagonist.] 1. Chi Guizhou transmigrated from Earth to another world, but he had no idea what ABO meant. Due to the effects of certain fluctuations, words related to the ABO setting were blocked and censored from the very beginning. Chi Guizhou, a genuinely ordinary person who had no clue what kind 167.3kFavorites269.8kClicks/ch132.1kGifts

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    The story is idiotic, with both the supporting and main characters having awkward misunderstandings and not aligning with each other's tropes. Lin Aoquan's personality is even weaker than the weakest. Moreover, judging from the synopsis, the protagonist's forced misunderstanding will continue for a long time. I really don't have the courage to continue reading.

12. 12 失 The Ex-Boyfriend Who Lost His Memory 失忆后多了的前男友 Concubine in Shanyang妾在山阳Danmei (BL)1.7M WordsCompleted [I've enabled paragraph comments for this one! Come join the fun! 80% anti-piracy. Please check the content warnings.] When Ye Sheng was five, his father died and his mother ran away. He grew up in the mountains, relying on each other for survival with an old con man of mysterious origins and a secretive past. At eighteen, Ye Sheng set off for college with the items the old man had given him. But on the train to school, he got caught up in a supernatural incident and met a lunatic. He though 567.1kFavorites603.1kClicks/ch1.4MGifts

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    I gave it four stars purely for the early game. I quite liked the storyline, but I deducted points because I didn't really like the protagonist's personality. Many settings felt forced and overly dramatic, like unnecessary angst, which made me feel detached throughout the reading experience. I didn't empathize with the protagonist's past experiences; I just found it boring and childish.

13. 13 重 Reborn: A Sudden Awakening 重生之豁然 For Some Reason缘何故Danmei (BL)783k WordsCompleted There are always people who start with a decent hand, only to end up playing it into total disaster. After losing so much, Lin Jingzhe returns to the age of eighteen, before he failed the college entrance exam. It's the nineties, when the economy is taking off and business opportunities are everywhere. This is his best age, and his chance to start over. A short story about being reborn. Some regrets from the past are worth making right. Don't let the blurb fool you: this is actually a feel- 271.5kFavorites542.3kClicks/ch458kGifts

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    Actually, the writing is alright, but I really disliked all that "Boss XX" and "Boss XX" calling each other that. It felt awkward, especially since they're not that old. And speaking of making money so easily, I wish I could make money too (referring to the money-making aspect in the text).

14. 14 稳EN I Keep Going Crazy [Interstellar] 稳定发疯[星际] A Fox of a Thousand Years有狐千岁Danmei (BL)1.1M WordsCompleted For upcoming stories, check my author page: The God Only Wants a Vacation and My Sword Started Spreading Rumors Like Crazy After I Died. Story description: Xu Qingran was originally the villain in an apocalypse novel. After he died, the System pulled him into the world of another interstellar novel about a miserable pr 83.5kFavorites121.8kClicks/ch88.8kGifts

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    The characters are well-developed, but the world-building is incredibly weak.

15. 15 规 Guidelines for Role-Playing Rule-Based Strange Stories [Unlimited] 规则类怪谈扮演指南[无限] Moon Crossing the Cold Pond月渡寒塘Danmei (BL)5.6M WordsOngoing [The exploration of Haining Cat Island is complete. Check out my upcoming story: Those Who Leave Me] [The cover is a special birthday illustration for Metal. See @Yuedu Hantang Bu Han Tang for the previous 16 covers.] Bai Jinshu, a man consumed by obsession and incapable of feeling emotions, joined a strange foundation. The foundation catalogued countless unknown spaces with bizarre rules. Their job was to enter these spaces and figure out the rules. The foundation was full of talented people, a 285.3kFavorites343kClicks/ch1.8MGifts

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    I clicked in and looked at it a few times but couldn't continue. I really dislike this kind of endless flow story that relies on empty talk and clever wit; it's really lacking in technical skill...

16. 16 染 Dyeing Your Pheromone 染上你的信息素 Qi Huannian漆环念Danmei (BL)489k WordsCompleted [Complete, enjoy!] Luo Xingyun is a straight Beta, an utterly ordinary background character whose only interests are math and physics. Two seats away from him sits Pei Yan, a top-tier Alpha, the handsome campus heartthrob of the South City campus and an all-around academic powerhouse. One day, Luo Xingyun witnesses Pei Yan being cornered by the school bully in a deserted place. He silently pulls his mist-blue turtleneck over his head, grabs a crowbar, and clubs the bully from behind, securing Pe 343.5kFavorites538.5kClicks/ch378.5kGifts

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    Although the uke helped the seme, it's strange that the seme treated the uke so specially from the beginning... It feels like the author forced a plot, rather than a naturally developing storyline...

17. 17 金 Gold Medal Coach (Esports) 金牌教练（电竞） Spirit of the Butterfly蝶之灵Danmei (BL)972k WordsCompleted A legendary player named Wing once competed in the King of Guns professional league. His sniper rifle never missed, and he led a third-rate team all the way to the championship, becoming the greatest underdog in the league's history. But after winning the title, Wing suddenly announced his retirement. Online, everyone speculated about why he had quit. No one knew he was an Omega suffering from “pheromone dysregulation syndrome.” . Five years later, the King of Guns World Championship ended in di 226kFavorites296.3kClicks/ch609kGifts

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    I don't like this story because I think the male lead has a low level of charisma and is rather immature... Ahhh, sorry, I'm just a country bumpkin...

18. 18 地 Earth’s Redemption 地球赎回中 Qingqiu Qianye青丘千夜Danmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted In the year 2222, Earth is blocked from view by the stars. Without the sun, it stops turning, and the whole planet faces an extinction-level crisis. Earth’s people have only one chance: Pandora’s Box. They must take part in the games inside, find what has been lost in the box, and redeem Earth. So humanity goes mad. Ning Bu Wen, a dramatic, money-loving man, opens his own Pandora’s Box. He gets a beginner’s gift package of his very own: a Shiba Inu. From the start, he has a dog, and getting thro 169.2kFavorites317.4kClicks/ch165.4kGifts

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    The romance between the main characters isn't sweet at all, but the plot is pretty good.

19. 19 穿 Transmigrate to Cultivate Immortality 穿越之修仙 Clothes Falling into Flame衣落成火Danmei (BL)3.0M WordsCompleted Beneath the Immortal Realm lie nine thousand great worlds: three thousand in the upper realms, three thousand in the middle, and three thousand in the lower, along with countless small worlds. Xu Ziqing was frail and sickly in his previous life. In this life, he had hoped to spend his days at ease among mountains and streams, but at the age of thirteen, his life changed in an instant. With a spiritual root, he had no choice but to embark on the path to immortality. If he didn't want to become a 155.7kFavorites317.4kClicks/ch97kGifts

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    I used to really like cultivation and leveling-up stories, the world-building is quite vast, but the protagonist is too upright and gentlemanly, which is disappointing.

20. 20 他 He Is the Mud That Defiles Treasures [Quick Transmigration] 他是污染珍宝的泥[快穿] Lighting the Lamp灼灯Danmei (BL)2.4M WordsOngoing [World Five complete] At the beginning, the System told its new Host: “Every little world has a central figure, someone born to be cherished by all and lifted up to the clouds. But for a time, they will be covered in dust.” “You are to be the dust on them, the mud that sullies a treasure. Only when you are washed away will that treasure shine all the brighter.” Su Baiqing agreed readily, and the System thought he was up to the task. After all, Su Baiqing was an unromantic blockhead, and quite t 72.1kFavorites134.7kClicks/ch199.2kGifts

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    It feels chaotic everywhere.

21. 21 神 Divine Realm (Full-Dive) 神域（全息） Azure Phoenix Nine Heavens青鸾九霄Danmei (BL)900k WordsCompleted Blurb: In 2140, the fully immersive online game Divine Realm, with a realism rating of 99.9%, burst onto the scene and caused a huge sensation. In 2145, strange monsters invaded Earth, turning it into a living hell. The apocalypse had arrived. Then the government suddenly announced that Divine Realm was a real world and directed the surviving humans to migrate there. Mu Chuan died five years after migrating to Divine Realm. When he opened his eyes again, he had returned to 2140. Level system 45.9kFavorites111.7kClicks/ch40.8kGifts

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    I liked the game's setting, but the whole story felt like a diary entry, and the male lead was like a complete idiot with no class. I gave up after about 20%.

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