Flaws Do Not Cover up Strengths

1 庇 Patron Lips Dead and Teeth Cold 0Danmei (BL)16k WordsCompleted 273Favorites2.7kClicks/ch12Nutrition

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So I started to read the early works of Lip Death Tooth Han again. Here's the look and feel: The plot is complete and echoes from beginning to end. The characters are basically well-established and the plot design is quite satisfactory. It is a short and concise work with relatively simple content. It is suitable as a medium between long-form reading and long-form reading. It can also be regarded as a bedtime reading. It's no surprise to see Bai Mao, and the battle damage plot adds one more star. I still prefer to read the free works of masters, and I feel intoxicated with the XP matching rate as high as 10 billion%.

2 秘 Mystic's Legacy Lips Dead and Teeth Cold 0Danmei (BL)605k WordsCompleted 29.8kFavorites43.9kClicks/ch21kNutrition

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[This book contains a lot of jokes about "Sherlock Holmes" and "Harry Potter". There may also be "Lord of Mysteries" mixed in, but it's impossible to say whether it's subjective or objective. It is both a rehabilitation work and a work of accumulation. You can easily find elements in "The Rules of the Silent Gentleman" and "The Dating History of Blood Tribes in the New World" by the same author. The author's XP is as good as ever, and I feel as happy as ever while reading it. 1. Characters: The author sets up a mysterious organization as usual, but this time there are more descriptions of specific characters in the mysterious organization. It would be better to say that all the characters appearing in the article have more or less promoted the development of the plot, especially the development of the team battle plot. No character who appears is a simple tool person who appears and goes away. All of them have been reused twice or even multiple times. The characters are set up as tightly as a sophisticated secret mechanism. I was already stunned by the author's powerful creative ability. (Omitted here) 2. Plot: My favorite chapter is the final part of the team fight. It is so exciting that I am willing to be knocked unconscious and re-read it a hundred times. The author admitted frankly that rehabilitation caused the plot to get stuck in the early stage, but perhaps it was due to the emotional bonus, and I didn't feel too many jerky parts. The whole book has the tight framework and tight rhythm of "The Blood Tribe" and the ups and downs of "The Silent Gentleman". The battle section contains quite a lot of damage, especially the one where Duan Feizhuo is in coma, and there is even a section where he enjoys being attacked to death and goes crazy. Master, how do you know that a layman like me likes to eat this! (Omitted here) 3. Feelings: As a reader who read four free books by the author in a row before reading this book, I almost burst into tears when I read the emotional line in this book: Oh my God, Bard Exorcist Master, when did your emotional line skills develop to such an extent! In the past, the master was only good at writing settings and climaxes, and turning points relied entirely on blank spaces and blunt inferences. In this book, many writing techniques were consciously used, which showed me how moved the author was about painlessly developing emotional lines at zero cost (hey). The CP pairing in this book is still the "soul mate + comrade-in-arms affection + long-lasting love" that the master is good at. Several times when the two people fought side by side and supported each other, they did not forget to deliberately write some emotional interactions. Although there was some embarrassment in the early stage of "excessive force but in the wrong direction, which caused the audience to think of Chu Zhongtian as a vertical version of Lin Dan", in the middle and later stages, once you are immersed in it, it becomes very exciting and touching. Yes, this is because the author finally started to "carefully" write the emotional line. Before, he was only at level A and now he finally uses elemental combat skills! Although the author is occasionally arrogant, please read the most sincere and touching emotional description section in the full text - Z's reasons for falling in love with Duan Feizhuo and the pull of his inner emotions: "He once had a ridiculous dream. He dreamed that he had been walking alone in this world for a long time and finally met someone who could express his sincerity. That person has the gentleness of a doctor and the fortitude of a warrior. It looks like a finely carved gem on the outside, but it is burning with fire on the inside. When he walks through the dark night with a lamp, people can't help but want to kiss the shadow behind him. (This echoes the previous article, implying that the two have a hurt&comfort relationship) But it's all a scam. It's all an illusion. " [Full version, see the comment area]

3 嫉 Envy Lu YipiDanmei (BL)5k WordsCompleted 648Favorites24.6kClicks/ch13Nutrition

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[This rating contains serious spoilers for the content of the novel] Writing exercises imitating Wang Xiaobo's writing style should appear in magazines instead of here. After reading the entire article, I felt as if I could turn it into a Chinese language test paper and elbow high school students by deleting relevant fragments. It made me want to rush through a hundred reading comprehension questions. You need to "appreciate" this work with the mentality of literary and artistic works, especially artistic works, otherwise it is easy to read two lines and be filled with questions. When I looked at it, I felt like I was reading the magazine "Sprout" for the first time. When I was a middle school student at the time, I felt that the meaning of the magazine articles was unclear and I could only feel that the author's writing was good. I finished reading it in a daze, but I had no idea what meaning the author wanted to express or what story he wanted to tell. After a few years of living, my reading ability has improved slightly, but I still feel like I read this book every now and then. The difficulty of writing about positive emotions is that lack of details will make people feel like they are floating in the air and cannot land. The difficulty of writing about reverse emotions is that too many details will make people feel depressed and unable to finish reading. The perspective of this novel is that of a poet (that is, M/Ma Lele), who has his own professional filter and a tendency towards mental illness. It gave me the feeling of a gay version of "Diary of a Madman". The writing is actually not obscure, and you can come back to it after chewing it twice. But as the name suggests, the article has a sour taste. After reading too much, I can't help but want to take a break from the sweet taste.

4 清 Idle Travelers in Qingdu Iiyama Is Too ThinNo CP9k WordsCompleted 269Favorites575Clicks/ch554Nutrition

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[I originally planned to add this book to the "Endless Aftertaste", but after seeing the introduction saying that this book is a dark history, I decided to respect the author's wishes and assign it to "Flaws do not hide the faults". It is understandable that the author thinks that this novel is a dark history. After all, it is an imitation in nature. Many plots in the article directly use Chinese and foreign historical allusions. Some of them are well integrated, and some of them seem to be copied mechanically. However, I think the highlight of this book is that the author is able to attach the source of the allusions accurately and does not mislead uninformed readers, which is good. It can be seen that the author's literary and historical literacy is quite good. Even if it is a copy, he has basically established the characters and told the readers the life, death and love of historical figures through more than 60 short stories. The author has marked these short stories as a collection of jokes, and some of the chapters are indeed hilarious to read. But behind these "jokes" are connected one after another vivid characters (after all, it is a group portrait memoir, so there is no single protagonist). After seeing the endings of these historical figures under the guidance of a non-linear narrative framework, I still can't help but sigh. I believe that every book with a non-linear narrative requires at least two readings to understand, and this one is no different. After reading it carefully for the first time and re-reading the first chapter again, after seeing some funny stories in the first chapter, you will definitely have a completely different feeling than the first time. There are many chapters in this book that made me sigh after reading them. They are basically related to family and friendship. However, if there is a character with the most appearances, the richest characterization, and the most impressive impression, it is the Prince of Donghai. After connecting the stories of his life together, as the author said... It's quite sad. Ps: It's really difficult for you to use Lujiang. The paragraphs and comments of this novel are all misplaced.

5 我 Mr. Chang and I HehuaDanmei (BL)20k WordsCompleted 202Favorites952Clicks/ch131Nutrition

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The author's ability to create characters is very strong, and this article is written in the first person, which reflects this even more. Lin Peiwen's words and deeds are highly consistent with his identity and the background of the times. Between "perfect character" and "real character", the author undoubtedly chose the latter. Readers can feel how bad and dissolute this pampered young master is at the beginning of the story, how weak and arrogant his thoughts are, how naive he is, and how susceptible he is to the influence of "role models". This is a common growth characteristic of teenagers in adolescence. In the last two chapters, Lin Peiwen has grown up rapidly under the hustle and bustle of the times. Although he has only just begun to grow up, he is already significantly different from before. This is a dynamic character, this is a person written to life. Another character in the story is in the narration of "I" (Lin Peiwen). "I" know very little about him, so this character seems thin, one-sided and hazy. In "my" narrative, "Mr. Chang" is so beautiful and magnanimous. He is "my" guide on the red road and a true "teacher". I particularly like what he said to Lin Peiwen in the article. The excerpt is as follows: "Peiwen, you have to look outside. Even if you look boldly, the world is big and beautiful, and life is short. If you can fight for the cause you love, it is worth it. You should not stick to this small world. When you really look at human civilization, you will find that many things are too small, and only faith is eternal. Go, Peiwen." This passage also reminded me of Yu Zecheng's words of consolation to Mu Wanqiu in "Latent", which are excerpted as follows: "Think about it, late autumn! You stand in a majestic team, stride forward, and sing war songs to change the whole of China. What kind of momentum is that? A little Yu Zecheng is just a person on the roadside. See you off. We waved and passed, and there is a more meaningful life. Isn't it just a little bourgeois moaning? Sometimes, if you look further, you can have everything! The character creation is so real and natural, and there is no need to say more about the style of writing, the smoothness of the plot, etc. A thousand words can't praise it enough. The last two chapters sacrificed some logic in order to maintain the overall style of writing, but this is completely understandable and acceptable, and I also agree with the author's approach.

7 金 Gold Shiny Winter Melon Tea FairyDanmei (BL)19k WordsCompleted 451Favorites2.3kClicks/ch215Nutrition

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A very enjoyable reading experience. This is a bedtime story in the style of a Western fantasy, with both attack and pain going in both directions, and the characters are great, and they are cute to get along with. Although it is a bit cliché to use the plot of princesses competing in martial arts to recruit brides as a tool to promote the development of the plot and character relationships, it is a fairy tale structure after all and it is reasonable to have some classic fairy tale elements. In addition, the plot is complete, the writing is smooth, the shaping is in place, the progression is reasonable, and the reversals are natural. There are almost no shortcomings. Overall, it is a very good bedtime story. The content perfectly fits the subject matter, and the look and feel is relaxing. It is suitable for leisure time, and can also be used as a break between reading long articles.

8 新 The Chronological History of Blood Clans in the New World Lips Dead and Teeth Cold 0Danmei (BL)219k WordsCompleted 3.4kFavorites4.3kClicks/ch644Nutrition

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[The classification setting of this article is wrong. The two CP pairings in the article are actually "George Burns→Adam Flamel" and "James Burns→Edgar Cinderella (Edgar Burns)". Among them, Adam Flamel is the clue-type protagonist, and the remaining three are important supporting roles. My three major XPs (battle damage, human beings, tyrant) are satisfied at once, paying tribute to the legendary exorcist master 0! The framework is very traditional and straight-forward, a "reincarnation" setting that is now commonplace. The background is a mixture of modern British and American history, covering historical events such as the golden years of piracy, the War of Independence, the Civil War, World War II, and the World Cup (?). Maybe it's because I've been involved in APH and eaten a lot of fandom, so I feel quite emotional when I see these scenes. The character setting is actually not that new today, but fortunately, the author is very good at depicting the character's first appearance in the comic storyboard style, so he can quickly establish the character and strengthen the character shaping in the process of advancing the subsequent plot. The main character, Adam Flamel, is a clue-type character. Since the story in the first few chapters is not narrated from his perspective, his character traits are not fully revealed at the beginning. You need to read the full text to understand where he came from and why he was born. The important supporting characters James, Edgar, and Isabella have distinct personalities and vivid images. I personally like the settings of these three people, especially the "leader + comedian" hybrid character of the captain; the author repeatedly emphasized Edgar's kingly character, which also made me enjoy watching it. This book can be divided into unit articles in terms of framework, so the plot lines are also discussed separately. My favorite is the first chapter. The magnificent chapter showed me the tip of the iceberg, the "temporary protagonist group" gathered together by chance, the mysterious and powerful supporting force, pirates, vampires, the New World... Characters with different personalities, humorous writing style, everything is so fascinating. The Revolutionary War and the Civil War highly overlap with American history, but the former story seems to be just for the brief meeting of the two characters in the plot, and the weight is slightly inferior (even if it is supplemented by the natural heaviness of history, the look and feel is still the same); the latter story revolves around Adam's adopted son, and lacks Adam's personal appearance, so I was not interested. In this part of World War II, Edgar returns, and I also get a glimpse of the sadomasochism of a pair of marine versions of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl. The plot of the two being together is not detailed, making the turn of the couple's relationship somewhat abrupt. But I have to say that it's very enjoyable before and after the twist. Don't leave this paragraph blank. Author, please write another million words of extra chapter (just kidding). At this time, Adam is still a young and cute version. The last chapter is a supplementary chapter, mainly to fill in the reasons for Adam's time travel, and there is no plot that can be analyzed in depth. I'm not surprised by Adam's character in his early days as an android. What surprised me was that his time travel was actually accomplished in a very short period of time. Before, I guessed that he might have traveled for hundreds of years... This book has no shortcomings for me. I have to say that because I was too partial to chapter one, the perception and interest in subsequent chapters gradually declined. There was a feeling of "the first chapter is already perfect and there is no need to (write too much)...".

9 救 Savior? Qin Shihuang! Qinglin ZhenliuNo CP499k WordsCompleted 19.3kFavorites17.8kClicks/ch52.4kNutrition

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Many years ago, when Shi Tong was waiting for the rise of the Qin Empire, he ate a lot of spiritual food from his fellow fans. He dreamed of playing the role of Qin Shihuang when Weng Huang waited for him to grow up. From here I gained enlightenment and began to study history and empires. After going round and round, I found that the one that best fits the definition of a young tyrant is the Qin Dynasty. Some words in the article are very familiar to me, such as king, prime minister, promoting narrowness... It seems that I have returned to the time many years ago when I didn't know that I would embark on this path in the future. There is nothing to say about the plot line. I have already memorized Ying Zheng's life, so it seems to be no surprise. I only picked a few interesting ones to read in the copy. In terms of maintaining plot advancement or plot logic, this book uniformly chooses to maintain plot advancement. The processing in some places may seem logically strange, but after thinking about it, it is understandable that it is all for the purpose of advancing the plot. There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. It is difficult to say what kind of character Ying Zheng is. I had pushed past the true feelings in the early years and now it has become a warm one. I wanted to say for sure that it was at least a hundred times better than the one in "Da Qin Fu", but I felt that it was not that bad, so why should I compare it with it? So let's compare it with the Shi Tong I have read. After reading various historical texts over the years, it can at least be said that the Ying Zheng in this novel is relatively close to the level of "excellence" in my mind. Part of the plot of this book obviously relies on the superposition of Ying Zheng as a heartthrob + a hater. I feel that the level of control is okay, and the audience who likes this book will have a good time reading it. As well as writing this title and subject, of course I have a preference for Ying Zheng, so I won't comment on the characterization of other characters. In a sense, it is a novel that makes up for the regrets of historical figures. Although it is easy to predict how to make up for the regrets and how the characters will react, it still brings tears to my eyes when I read the corresponding paragraphs because of my feelings for the historical figures who failed to realize their dreams.

10 我 My Right Hand World Smoke Lock PoolNo CP330k WordsCompleted 11.5kFavorites27.1kClicks/ch10.3kNutrition

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[Reading Tips: This book should be read slowly. If you want to get the best reading experience, it will take you at least three days to read it. Reading it in one go can easily cause fatigue, and reading four or five chapters in one day is most effective. This is the second healing fantasy novel I have read on this website. The content of the novel is indeed consistent with the subject matter. It is very comfortable to read, quiet and comfortable, like taking a bath in a hot spring. However, after soaking in hot springs for a long time, you may feel chest tightness and dizziness. The same is true for this book, so you need to wait for a while before reading it. Role: Jiang Chengzi's character design and shaping also fit the theme very well. He is pure, unambitious, and easily satisfied. Although he is only twenty-six years old, he is nicknamed Uncle because of his laid-back mentality. The character setting of this book has some Japanese fantasy elements. For example, Jiang Chengzi has a magical setting of "frequently encountering others and dropping things". It is precisely because of this that he got the system and can open the Pure Land world with his right hand. The setting of "open the door" sounds a bit like "Mr. Jiang Chengzi comes to knock on the door", but in fact it is a completely different story from "Journey to Suzuya". The setting and shaping of the human supporting characters are also very Japanese-style, especially the language description. The Pure Land world (this book assumes that the Pure Land is alive, so it is also classified as a character here) is somewhat similar to the natural and gentle fantasy creatures in the style of Hayao Miyazaki. Although because of the large number, most of them just show their faces and will not appear again, but only one appearance can leave a different impression on people, and the distinction is very high. Plot: In fact, there is almost no plot in this book. After all, it is a healing novel. More than 95% of the book is about the protagonist pushing open the "door" with his right hand and entering the Pure Land world for live broadcast. The description of the scenery takes up a large proportion. What surprised me most about this book is that, as a "natural scenery brochure", it did not use any writing skills when describing natural scenes, but purely told them in a straightforward manner. However, if you think about it carefully, this way of writing is consistent with the intention: no matter how you describe the "magnificence" of the natural scene, you are just using human eyes to enchant it. Why dress it in fancy rhetoric? No seasonings are added, the original taste is maintained, simple words and simple feelings make it easier to appreciate nature itself. Of course, it wouldn't be wrong to say that there is no plot line at all. This part of the content is concentrated in the last few chapters of the book. I think the only "Hot-Blooded Battle Chapter" is very simple and touching, with a feeling that even warm water can burn blazingly. This feeling can only be obtained after a long reading and careful experience of each pure land world, so there will be no spoilers here. Intention: "Environmental protection" is also a cliché, but it is relatively rare in novels to deepen the concept by purely introducing natural scenery instead of cramming sermons or bloody battles. I think this is more moisturizing and silent, which is better than the latter. Healing novels must heal, and this book does just that.

11 窥 Peep Smile FadedNo CP11k WordsCompleted 3.9kFavorites14.1kClicks/ch1.5kNutrition

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This new variant of epistolary novels guides readers to infer the development of the plot by directly laying out scattered information such as the character's bills, online and offline chat records. Originally, I was not good at suspense reasoning, but when I saw the author saying, "If you understand, I will see you in the next chapter, but if you don't, I will see you in the next chapter." I immediately became more motivated. What do you mean, I kept reading, don't believe me, I don't understand! (It turns out that reading the entire text does not require any complicated reasoning, and a reasoning fool like me can completely understand it. The author has written it in a relatively concise and easy-to-understand way to take care of the readers, and is very kind.) The theme of revenge is not uncommon in suspenseful mystery novels, and Wang Miaomiao's method of revenge is not groundbreaking. However, the author started with such an extremely objective subject, and the perception seems calm, restrained, and original. From the unlucky student outlined in a somewhat uneasy atmosphere in the first chapter, to the last chapter where Wang Miaomiao is "revenged" seven years later and heading for a better new life, the author gives the character a gentle and satisfactory ending. In the early stages, I was worried that the pregnancy might be forced, but after reading the full text, I felt relieved. Even if "Mr. Wang" really has bad intentions, Miaomiao still has the strength and means. Although this book has certain interactive links that require readers to infer the development of the plot on their own, the author is also very considerate and clearly explains the answers in the later stages. Therefore, even if the early stage can't keep up with the rhythm and the feeling is foggy, the final chapter will definitely make it clear.

12 烂 Rotten Apple HehuaNo CP49k WordsCompleted 9.4kFavorites9.9kClicks/ch8.6kNutrition

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I really like it... I really like it... The author's writing skills have been applied to the realm of ingenuity and ingenuity, and it can be included in a collection of short stories and published as paper media. The rhythm of the writing is also very comfortable. Whether it is the description of life-like language or the occasional humorous description, reading it is simply a kind of enjoyment like taking a bath. The character creation is even more amazing. Mei Hong's perseverance and never giving up as a grassroots protagonist are written as if they come to life. The scene that reveals how the name Mei Hong was born made my eyes wet. Alas! Although the setting of Zhou Xiulan's character is relatively stereotyped, the portrayal is equally vivid, especially the part where she is mentally insane and abuses her daughter, which is completely brilliant. The author's words and sentences are as good as his fingers, and his ability to mobilize emotions and senses and lay out the sense of the scene is very powerful! Although the brilliance of Ren Nan and Ren Feng's portrayal is not as good as that of Mei Hong and Zhou Xiulan, they are equally lifelike. As for the leader, he is a typical NPC, but such people are also very common in life. I have read three suspense mystery novels with a millennium background, and this one is the most naturally integrated. The author does not pile on the suffering plot to describe how much misery the protagonist has experienced, and how "innocent" or "evil" the murderer and accomplices are. However, through the description of just 50,000 words, it is easy to feel how many twists and turns this "accident" has brought to the protagonist's life, and to see her tenacious vitality. There are only people in this world who like plum red and people who don't know plum red! When I read books, I prefer plot flow, and I also agree that characters can only be better shaped if they are put into the plot. Of course, some people have such a charm that even if there is no long-term plot, even if it is just a "slice" of the plot, a description of words and deeds, it can immediately attract the reader's attention. Mei Hong is such a person. So although the plot of this book tends to be more clichéd, and both murderers are not sent in in the end, it doesn't hurt me.

13 首 Primacy Effect Pointy Hat DogNo CP9k WordsCompleted 4.2kFavorites7kClicks/ch1.1kNutrition

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Japanese-style mystery novel, the writing is smooth and natural, and the rhythm of the writing is well controlled. I didn't predict the twist at the end, but even if I knew the ending from the beginning, I still felt that this was a very sophisticated and compact novel. And finally, there is the classic breaking of the fourth wall writing method, which is well received. Because this book does not have much suspense atmosphere and the highlights are all in the reasoning part, I will not reveal too much about the content of this book.

14 小 Sketch Queen Water Meets BlueRomance468k WordsCompleted 10.4kFavorites9.6kClicks/ch8.6kNutrition

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It's so amazing that the author took a bunch of labels that I'm completely uninterested in and stir-fried them into a dish that I love to eat. Infidelity, female non-female, drama, workplace, bear male protagonist, rotten male supporting actor, pornographic jokes... Picking any one at random would make me frown, but in this novel it seems natural. A queen-type protagonist like Ni Pin has her own charm. It is true that her character is not "perfect", but her portrayal is convincing: even if you don't like her character and behavior, you have to admit that she is vivid and real. This is what I have always admired: "putting the character in the background to create the character." Indeed, the background of this inner fish is completely rotten, with rotten people and rotten things happening one after another. Ni Pin is not considered "innocent" when he is in it, but he is different from others, doing something and not doing something. As the saying goes, two or three times should be separated, but a highly "three-dimensional" character like Ni Pin does not need to abide by this law. Even if she flashes the third dimension to open the platter, the seats should be full. This is the biggest highlight and the most admirable aspect of this book: Ni Pin is a protagonist who is destined not to be liked by everyone because she is not "innocent" enough; but no one can deny that her portrayal is not consistent with the theme of the work and does not meet the positioning of the "protagonist". Ni Pin and Jiang Ting are also the most perfectly matched couple I have seen in the movie this year. They get married first and fall in love later. As a media person, Ni Pin is hot on the outside but cold on the inside. He can't help but act on his own words if he doesn't mean it, yet Jiang Ting is so sincere. I originally thought that Xi Xi and the boxing champion were so incompatible, how to pair them up, but after reading the full article, all my doubts were cleared up. Although I can't understand the way the two fell in love in the article, I must admit that they are indeed a good match, they are indeed attracted to each other, they do enjoy it, and they do enjoy it. This is an emotional novel. The plot line mainly describes the relationship between two people. The content is simple and lively, and the atmosphere is light and funny. There was a heavy past, but I skipped reading, which did not affect the reading experience. It is indeed a delightful perspective, and there are so many jokes that I kept laughing throughout the whole process. The plot of entangled with the bad male supporting characters is a bit bloody, but after reading it, I will not feel that the author's writing is not good enough or realistic enough. I will feel that the overall environment is so incompetent that it is really hopeless. The author's writing style is also very smooth and natural. The characters' words and deeds are consistent with their own identity. The frequent accents and real place names also add a lot of intimacy to the novel. In addition, the concept of this book also resonates with migrant workers: "Be true to yourself." "Water Child" says that a child can become an adult only by going to places he doesn't like, doing things he doesn't like, and helping people he doesn't like. So, "Can I not do it?" At the end of the full text, both Ni Pin and Jiang Ting had their own answers. I think readers who have read this book will also have their own answers. The way I judge whether a novel is good or not is not only based on whether the background, characters, plot, and writing are coordinated and unified, but also whether the book serves its intended audience well. If I were to define an appropriate audience for this book, I think it would be people who like to see real modern settings, real characters' words and deeds, and who don't mind the "flaws" of the characters. I must say there is a shortcoming in this novel, and that is that after the main CP changes, it will become epic and difficult to defeat. But when you have nothing to do, you can change the role of the protagonist, so this book is perfect for its audience.

15 不 A Country That Does Not Exist Jiang ShuishuoNo CP16k WordsCompleted 1.8kFavorites7.2kClicks/ch207Nutrition

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It is a short, superb, and interesting science fiction short story that discusses a lot of philosophical speculations. It is similar to Borges's "Tron, Uqbal, Orbis Tertius", but this one is more popular and easier to understand than Borges's one. Narrated from a first-person perspective, the author describes "my" psychological activities in detail. Many times I resonated with the protagonist. It's also interesting to choose "I" as the narrator of this story. "I" has a mediocre experience and is isolated from the world, but I can raise issues that interest everyone and take action. To a certain extent, the process of everyone gradually perfecting this "non-existent country" is a bit like a group of OC enthusiasts building an OC world view, and it is also like a group of ancient Greek gods creating a small world. Halfway through, I even wanted to put the book away and look up to the sky and sigh "Jiuzhou Piaomiao Lu". If you all work together as one, there is no need to worry about failure! Anyway, I don't read enough god-type protagonists, and this one was refreshing for me. In addition, 17,000 words can also produce a powerful tail kill, which reminds me of the experience of watching mud-fighting videos many years ago.

16 年 The Overseas Relative of Shi Wen's Cannon Fodder Is Back HutuRomance2.1M WordsCompleted 86.8kFavorites183.3kClicks/ch292.6kNutrition

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The author's control over the rhythm of writing is so perfect that once you read the first chapter, you simply can't stop. As a fusion novel about slaps in the face, the protagonist is charming but not tooly, the supporting characters are lifelike, and the ending of the target of the slap in the face is also applauding. The career line is very readable, and it is very fulfilling to watch the protagonist become richer and richer step by step. The plot of Dihua is also just right, refreshing but not embarrassing. The shortcoming is the emotional line, which is as bland as water, better than nothing.

18 [ [Quick Wear]gold Medal Shark Hand A Mountain Hook MoonNo CP161k WordsCompleted 48kFavorites61.6kClicks/ch28.4kNutrition

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A classic work on the theme of fast-traveling and sadistic scum, the novel world has its own short video literature. In just 160,000 words, he has written the fairy tale, martial arts, modern, ancient, interstellar, supernatural, western fantasy, criminal investigation, fusion and other small worlds. He is worthy of being a gold medal shark player who puts efficiency first. It is a refreshing novel that easily breaks away from the genre, and the rhythm is well controlled. Among the ten small worlds, except for the interstellar background, which is slightly less refreshing (only compared to the other nine worlds), the other backgrounds are equally enjoyable and enjoyable. Let's talk about characterization first: the protagonist is a idiosyncratic type of radio wave type, with a very charming personality, high execution ability, never internal friction, dedicated and professional, with a unique brain circuit, and at the same time follows his own unique set of rules of conduct. All in all, he is a character with a distinct and impressive personality. The system is a complainer, and is positioned as the protagonist's partner in the novel. How can the two of them walking hand in hand through ten small worlds not be considered a kind of fighting side by side? This mouthful of cb is delicious. Let's talk about the plot: the plot is smooth, has a beginning and an end, and does not appear top-heavy or anticlimactic. What I especially want to mention is the beginning of this novel, which is very well written. The first sentence sets the tone of the protagonist's personality, and the character image is established in the first half of the chapter. After the protagonist shows a few small highlights, the system comes late. The appearance design is very layered, and it is well received. It is easy for revenge and scumbags to become homogeneous in the middle and later stages, but this one controls the length of the plot very well. It basically ends in six chapters, which is very consistent with the positioning of fast travel. The protagonist also uses thunderous methods, leaving no room for scumbags to change, resulting in "seeming to be a little unhappy". It is very satisfying. At the same time, the protagonist has his own moral standards and will not make me feel uncomfortable because of being too curious (for this sub-audience, for example, I think it is okay, but the system feels curious). The best thing is that there are no heavy memories or hair cutting sessions. It's a cool article just like a cool article! One thing I have to mention is that this is actually a free article. I tried to pay for it many times but couldn't find the payment page at all! This novel also has some harmless logical loopholes: the plot arrangement is reflected in the "different speed of time". For example, the protagonist often stays in the small world for decades or hundreds of years after the mission, or even for several months. It stands to reason that his life experience has already covered the first twenty years of being a shark hand, but the protagonist's ability to perceive time clearly presses the fast forward button. Until the last small world, he still adheres to the shark hand principle of "I am doing things, you can rest assured". Although it is incredible from the plot logic level, it can be understood from the creative logic level - it does not matter how many years you have played, what is important is that the rhythm of this part is slow, which is equivalent to giving readers an emotional vacation, instead of following the plot all the time; in terms of character creation, except for the protagonist, the IQs of other characters are below the average standard, and there are no strong enemies that make the protagonist feel troublesome. This part is easier to understand. After all, it is a refreshing novel. The writing and ink should not be given insurmountable difficulties, nor should it be written with too many plots and brain-burning narratives. Even in the last small world with a steep increase in difficulty, the protagonist is still able to complete the task with ease. Finally, it ends with a sentence that appears in the article: "Thank you, Mr. Refrigerator Killer."

19 我 We Traveled Through the Scenic Area Yu Xuan WRomance332k WordsCompleted 9kFavorites10.3kClicks/ch10.7kNutrition

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This is enough for the group travel system Dihualiu. I never expected that there would be such a beautifully written book on this kind of template subject. The elements are warm and bland farming infrastructure, and the highlight is the impact of modern artifacts (service industry), technology (industry and agriculture), and culture (mainly novels) on the ancients, mixed with some martial arts elements for embellishment. In terms of plot framework, the first chapter twelve is particularly exciting, the flaws are not concealed until chapter forty-eight, the writing is smooth before chapter seventy-five, and the next few chapters are rushed to the end. I cannot say that it is unfinished, I can only say that the pace becomes faster in the later period, and the impression gradually declines. But this book has many advantages that can make up for this shortcoming: 1. In terms of plot arrangement, the narrative is overall smooth and has many memorable points. The number of appearances of the ancients responsible for the reaction process is not so large that it becomes unforgettable and becomes a shaping-level NPC, nor is it so small that it is difficult to enjoy the game. The Dihua part allows specific characters to take on one or two highlight reactions based on the system, artifacts, technology, and culture. The layers are clear and you will not get bored by repeating routines; 2. In terms of character creation, the group portrait roles are just right, without overshadowing the host or being the camera, and the appearances are detailed and strategic. The protagonist shows a lot of intelligence, emotional intelligence and military highlights, and the memory plot used to enrich the degree of shaping is only a small amount of narrative description without disturbing the rhythm too much. However, due to the acceleration of the plot framework in the later stage, some characters could not be described in detail, which is a bit regretful; 3. In terms of emotional lines, the old husband and wife trust each other and have a tacit understanding at the beginning. The employees of the scenic spot are also envious + bless the young couple. The childhood sweethearts are really reflected and not just set up. The emotional line only appears occasionally as an auxiliary ingredient, which is sweet but does not feel like industrial saccharine. It is very reassuring and suitable for readers who like to read about childhood sweethearts. The sub-emotional line is also bg, which only appeared in the later stages, and this part also played normally; 4. In terms of theme and atmosphere, I really have to praise the author for this. It is said that it is easy to manage farming infrastructure, but it is really easy to do so. There was no sudden increase in values and a sense of heaviness (such as suddenly starting to heighten the atmosphere and praising someone's spirit, etc.). Even if it happened, it was mentioned in two strokes and was just for embellishment; there was no malicious words or deeds such as local people's personal attacks on the travelers. Even if there was suspicion, they were quickly "slapped in the face" by the evidence, and the person was not in the right person. After the misunderstanding was resolved, they were immediately reasonable. The only real thief quickly arranged a whole The two chapters (written in two parts) of the Disney plot were a pleasure for me to read; the most important thing is that the IQs of all the characters are maintained at a level that is "enough to add authenticity but not reduce the fantasy." For example, the characters in the scenic spot will be homesick, have emotional breakdowns, and will refer to many realistic literary and artistic works instead of being brainless humans and machines to complete the task. The locals will doubt the safety of the scenic spot instead of trusting the protagonist's camp without brains. That's right. I watch light-hearted movies to deceive myself and give my brain a break, not to watch embarrassing stories that even I can't fool myself or to watch barbecues with heavy and dark backgrounds. Small flaws: There are too many typos. Although the author has corrected them, the paragraph comments have left many bug-catching sites. Occasionally, I want to open the paragraph comments and see that the results are all bug-catching.

20 佛 Buddha Said AyeayecaptainDanmei (BL)283k WordsCompleted 177.7kFavorites92.2kClicks/ch93.2kNutrition

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The novel world also has its own DOUDOU... Which is also interested in postmodernist online novels. This book belongs to the coriander type, with cyber science fiction, magical reality, absurd fantasy, violent aesthetics, and an absurd literary style. Readers who like this kind of book will enjoy it very much, while those who don't like this kind of book will avoid it. I read this type of book mainly for the atmosphere. The various quotations from literary, historical and philosophical classics and logical thinking in the book just pass through my smooth cerebral cortex. The author's ability to set up scenes has reached perfection. The three-dimensional description with all five senses (mainly audio, visual and smell) makes the human voice immersed in the scene. It is particularly friendly to readers who are used to immersive reading. However, only the first twenty chapters can be like this. The subsequent chapters, especially starting from Tomato Sauce, are not suitable for full immersion in intensive reading, as they are easily contaminated by the spirit of the text. The writing style is not as gorgeous as "Before the Snow", but it still has the dizzying feeling of watching the colorful laser lights spinning in circles at a karaoke OK. The author claims that this is circus literature, or it can be said to be hazy and beautiful like a kaleidoscope. I read it in a daze like a dream. The plot reversal method is relatively simple, focusing on the identity of the characters like "Before the Snow". It feels like the author is playing "guess who I am" with the readers. The protagonist is a living person with a slightly dead image of a market person, and his mental state is very beautiful, which blends well with this extravagant, extravagant, extravagant and bizarre world view. It's like having a far-fetched dream. On the emotional side, the author seems to have a special liking for age differences, teacher-student love, and soul mates. "Before the Snow" is exactly the same as this one. However, the path taken by "Buddha Said" is "fate has linked us together for thousands of years", which can be regarded as a kind of You are my only one. PS: If I can't stand it anymore, I'll order a song for you two, "Lanruo Tara" + "Tom Tom". "Everything that happens to all living beings is caused by cause and effect. There is no dispute, no right or wrong. I have advised you thousands of times, but no one has looked back." "The gods open their mouths and let me know who I am. They push me up to the sky, past the dust and ashes. I have to stop and stop, the night flies on my back, come and party, party and never fall."

21 白 Before the Snow AyeayecaptainDanmei (BL)354k WordsCompleted 80.8kFavorites27.4kClicks/ch118.2kNutrition

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1. Romantic fairy tales for adults, a virtuoso emotional stream-of-consciousness narrative style that occasionally reveals the unique flavor of serious literature, mixed with Oriental fantasy embellishments. In the later period, the writing style turned to cold humor, which was consistent with the changes in the emotional state of the characters. 2. The whole book can be described as "exquisite". It feels like the author has either written a fanfic or mixed it up or both, or at least been influenced by one of them. The dosage is just right. If it's too little, it will lack the beauty. If too much, it will become "a gun-kissed rose blooming on the bones." The plot takes a crazy turn in the later stages. Although it seems to be a series of foreshadowings, the logic of the characters' actions is still weak. Moreover, several reversals are in the form of dialogue, which greatly reduces the authenticity. It is more like the author revealing the truth through the mouth of the characters. But after all, it is an emotionally abusive novel, and I will dote on it. 3. The environment supports all five senses, allowing me to see the charm of food, color and nature. There are a lot of battle damage scenes, and the last one is BE. The background is too heavy, so even if I am a fan of both, I can't watch it (not in a derogatory sense). The early narrative perspective favors Ashley, but the overall characterization and plot highlights favor Shadrian. There is a big age difference between the main CPs. Ashley's side gave the arrow because it was love at first sight, while Shadrian's side said "we are the same kind", that is, soul mates, but disguised as a love at first sight version. Regarding the emotional line of the deputy CP, I can only say that only readers are love-minded. The captain, the mobile bureau, the colonel and the last mad emperor fooled the readers around. What do you mean by the twist in the last chapter? I failed to guard against readers as much as I guarded against thieves! 4. The author has a high level of literacy in literature, history and philosophy, and has many implications. It is suitable for intensive reading rather than skimming. The concept is very retro, it is "humanism" that is not often touched on in online articles, and "the essence of loving someone is to love yourself." 5. Emotional line: First impression: Very Western style, a kiss to seal the relationship and a fierce fire. Let go of the shackles of age, gender, and identity, and see love openly. Current impression: Captain, I'm not happy. Captain, why did you lie to me? Captain... PS: I have to give you two a song, "What can I do to keep you?" "Because you are enjoying its brilliance, and because you are enduring its decay; you say don't love it, but you are reluctant to leave it. So life, it is as bitter as a song." "You must see the flowers bloom, and you must wait for the swallows to return. Thinking that they will all come back, you will die for these things."

22 转 Feng Shanyue Who Transferred Here A Pool of Green HillsRomance268k WordsCompleted 2.1kFavorites1.8kClicks/ch2.3kNutrition

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It is still the suspense reasoning theme that the author is good at, this time the background is modern. He has a strong ability to mobilize the senses and render the images, truly making the characters appear on the page like a movie. Compared with other works by the same author, although this one also has a mystery theme, it focuses more on emotional description, and it is not limited to love. The lines of family and friendship are both written realistically and brilliantly. The overall atmosphere is dank and dense, but not heavy. It is more like the Hui Nantian imagined by northerners, which is half as effective as the real Hui Nantian, but it also makes people feel ticking in the air. Needless to say, there is no need to say much about the personality charm of the protagonist. What is more rare than "Board" and "Twin Swords" is that the emotions of this book are more delicate, and even the emotions of the villain are written vividly and realistically. The author is obviously better at realistic themes. If he joins the criminal investigation track with a fantasy background, he may have a different style.

23 再 Again for This Star Lu YipiBaihe (GL)8k WordsCompleted 5.3kFavorites49.4kClicks/ch966Nutrition

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A novel with the flavor of traditional paper media, the first Lily article for the elderly I read. The narrative tends to be pessimistic realism, and the writing style has a calm and peaceful sadness. It feels like middle-aged and elderly pain literature but a special edition at the beginning of the millennium. The content feels to me like the original manuscript of "Latent", which is suitable for filling hundreds of thousands of words to be adapted into a film and television drama; the atmosphere feels like a novel version of "Universe Exploration Editorial Department" or "Mom!" ", It's a very artistic film, very stream of consciousness, you need to turn your head to feel and think. The weight of life, the helplessness of life. In this context, homosexuality, especially Lily, has become a kind of silence that is not recognized, and even the protagonists are not aware of the essence of this relationship. There is almost no use of referential techniques to refer to the characters in the article, but a somewhat cold full name is chosen. Perhaps it is also because this relationship has long been buried by the times, and the protagonists do not know how to define their relationship or how to call each other. Let me order you two a song from "Pearls and Jade": "The hot wounds will cool into crescent moons, and the lights will pull the sleepwalking Trojans. The graffiti is the prosperity of a piece of white paper, and she tries to open her mouth. The snow-white sky suddenly turns to hot summer. The birds want to fly away, even without making a noise. The eyes want to shed tears, and the candles want to melt. Why should I not doubt him? Who will meet me tomorrow? Ah, don't let me stop you today. Every time I think of some words that cannot be accommodated by the world, my heart will be filled with smoke. If you have never been to the white-haired world where your sweetheart wanders, how can you understand the true and false feelings that have changed beyond recognition thousands of times? It doesn't matter how strange the emotions are. She is her.

25 [ [Infrastructure] After Being Mistaken for a God Quiet Jiu QiaoRomance756k WordsCompleted 27.1kFavorites67.5kClicks/ch12.3kNutrition

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The author's writing style is very good. Compared with the style of "Get Rich, But the Boat" which is good at creating a tense picture, although this book is also good at shaping characters and building a picture through description of appearance and demeanor, it is more inclined to narrate and have a slow pace. The protagonist of this book is also the type of puppy that the author is good at, full of life and vitality. Although the title is about misidentification of gods, and there is indeed a deification plot in the early stage, the overall trend is towards de-deification. The career line focuses on player infrastructure in the early stage, and in the later stage, it focuses on immortal species to observe human beings. However, the professional identity of the protagonist makes the "player" identity less entertaining and more rigorous. Compared with the love line, the author is more brilliant at the stage of writing about the mutual sympathy between the two. The love line part that waits until the relationship is established seems much duller because the time is infinitely extended and the rhythm becomes infinitely slow. There are obvious differences in Gong's personality in different time periods. Generally speaking, the third world is the best to watch and is more likely to have withdrawal reactions. Although it is a cliché to say that "by accident, you fall in love with a historical figure, and even become a historical figure yourself", it still feels a bit subtle no matter how many times you watch it.

27 [ [Comprehensive Martial Arts] on the Conduct of the Commander of the Imperial Guards A ShellNo CP482k WordsCompleted 63.1kFavorites163.4kClicks/ch44kNutrition

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A comprehensive martial arts invincible novel, the protagonist is a rare radio type. Looking at the introduction, we can see that this is a work in which the charm of the protagonist outweighs everything else. The attraction of the protagonist itself is far greater than the development of the plot. It is a typical "novel is readable no matter what the protagonist does" novels, as opposed to the "plot is exquisite but the protagonist is more like a camera" type of novel. Shen Baizhong is indeed extremely charismatic, with the author's front-facing and side-facing descriptions supplementing the author's description. He is the favorite of the entire book, and can easily be liked by readers outside the book. Although it is a comprehensive martial arts work, even readers who have never read Gu Long's novels can completely understand it. However, it cannot escape the common criticism points of derivative works: the plot highlights are too pretentious, and the original style of writing is too dramatic. This book has the unrestrained and open-minded world of Gu Long's novels, and the torment of an old drunk and old lady singing. The latter requires readers who are used to reading fast-paced novels to adapt. The author is particularly hard-working on the beginning and ending. Not only does the protagonist's previous life account of "travel + rebirth" by Liao Liao lead to a waste of information, but the ending ends abruptly without any foreshadowing. Rather than discussing whether it landed smoothly, it felt more like falling directly off a cliff. However, the person who fell off the cliff was the best in the world, so he was unscathed. Only the readers on the ground were hurt.

28 烈 Fire Melts Gold Cat in Blue and White PantiesDanmei (BL)1.3M WordsCompleted 119.1kFavorites137.5kClicks/ch360kNutrition

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It is a heart-stirring novel, but it is not a refreshing novel. On the contrary, it can be said to be a bit heavy, and in the later stages it is even more heavy to the point of suffocation. It is also a work in which the charm of the protagonist outweighs everything else, but the protagonist of this book is strongly bound to the empire. The author does not hesitate to spend a lot of ink to emphasize the protagonist's loyalty to the empire and desire for family love. It can be said that he is very good at writing beautiful, strong and miserable characters. Rather than "strong", this book prefers to reflect Nero's "beauty" and "tragic", and occasionally appears to be full of strength. Because she is so powerful, she also attracts many extremely controlled people who attack in the form of a terrifying grandmother, shouting and kneeling at other characters in the paragraph review, and childhood sweetheart CP members cry to their graves in the comment area in the form of defeated dogs, which greatly ruins the reading experience. Although the text repeatedly uses the word tyrant to describe the protagonist, and also uses Nero as his name, the real expression of "tyrant" in the plot is that the protagonist's spirit of self-sacrifice is activated, and everything is for the empire, not mindless madness. However, the protagonist's frequent self-sacrifice makes the plot seem a bit repetitive. Although there are explanations and reflections from the protagonist later on, it is still difficult to cover up the author's fatigue when conceiving the plot. This novel also suffers from a common problem in long works: in the later stage, it suddenly enters the large copy front and stretches out the plot endlessly and becomes exhausted. An additional disadvantage is that the seven-year gap in the protagonist's life is brushed aside or even not mentioned at all, resulting in this missing part of the plot and characters being somewhat loose and inconsistent. But it can also be seen that the author didn't know how to arrange it, so he just skipped it with one click, which was a clever way of writing. In terms of supporting roles, the label shaping method is mainly used, which is a bit thin. It feels like the IQ of the supporting characters in both the inner world and the outside world is a bit questionable, and the protagonist's arrow performance is also very stiff. In terms of emotions, the family line is better than the love line. It combines the main lines of attack and pain of family and love, and the description of Ye Steen's memories is very good. In terms of plot, the early stage is obviously better than the later stage, but the selling points or exciting points released in the introduction are not revealed until the middle and late stages. It can even be said that the book has ended with the victory of the Zerg War. The plot line of the battle with the Holy Son in the later period is a complete failure to forcibly increase the weight of the work. When watching it, I can only feel despair and powerlessness, and feel that I have been forced to be cornered.