Mr. Chang and I

I cried. It's so awesome. I know you are a very good person, so I will become a very good person because of you. That's great.

Oh my God, this is so awesome, Madam, she wrote a life story in just a few chapters. Things are explained clearly and the characters are well established.

I cried when I read it. It's such a touching story. The teacher wrote it so well 😭 😭

I found that everyone writes well.

Teacher, why are you so good at writing 😭

The author's ability to create characters is very strong, and this article is written in the first person, which reflects this even more. Lin Peiwen's words and deeds are highly consistent with his identity and the background of the times. Between "perfect character" and "real character", the author undoubtedly chose the latter. Readers can feel how bad and dissolute this pampered young master is at the beginning of the story, how weak and arrogant his thoughts are, how naive he is, and how susceptible he is to the influence of "role models". This is a common growth characteristic of teenagers in adolescence. In the last two chapters, Lin Peiwen has grown up rapidly under the hustle and bustle of the times. Although he has only just begun to grow up, he is already significantly different from before. This is a dynamic character, this is a person written to life. Another character in the story is in the narration of "I" (Lin Peiwen). "I" know very little about him, so this character appears thin, one-sided and hazy. In "my" narrative, "Mr. Chang" is so beautiful and magnanimous. He is "my" guide on the red road and a true "teacher". I particularly like what he said to Lin Peiwen in the article. The excerpt is as follows: "Peiwen, you have to look outside. Even if you look boldly, the world is big and beautiful, and life is short. If you can fight for the cause you love, it is worth it. You should not stick to this small world. When you really look at human civilization, you will find that many things are too small, and only faith is eternal. Go, Peiwen." This passage also reminded me of Yu Zecheng's words of consolation to Mu Wanqiu in "Latent", which are excerpted as follows: "Think about it, late autumn! You stand in a majestic team, stride forward, and sing war songs to change the whole of China. What kind of momentum is that? A little Yu Zecheng is just a person on the roadside. See you off. We waved and passed, and there is a more meaningful life. Isn't it just a little bourgeois moaning? Sometimes, if you look further, you can have everything! The character creation is so real and natural, and there is no need to say more about the style of writing, the smoothness of the plot, etc. A thousand words can't praise it enough. The last two chapters sacrificed some logic in order to maintain the overall style of writing, but this is completely understandable and acceptable, and I also agree with the author's approach. The author's ability to create characters is very strong, and this article is written in the first person, which reflects this even more. Lin Peiwen's words and deeds are highly consistent with his identity and the background of the times. Between "perfect character" and "real character", the author undoubtedly chose the latter. Readers can feel how bad and dissolute this pampered young master is at the beginning of the story, how weak and arrogant his thoughts are, how naive he is, and how susceptible he is to the influence of "role models". This is a common growth characteristic of teenagers in adolescence. In the last two chapters, Lin Peiwen has grown up rapidly under the hustle and bustle of the times. Although he has only just begun to grow up, he is already significantly different from before. This is a dynamic character, this is a person written to life. Another character in the story is in the narration of "I" (Lin Peiwen). "I" know very little about him, so this character appears thin, one-sided and hazy. In "my" narrative, "Mr. Chang" is so beautiful and magnanimous. He is "my" guide on the red road and a true "teacher". I particularly like what he said to Lin Peiwen in the article. The excerpt is as follows: "Peiwen, you have to look outside. Even if you look boldly, the world is big and beautiful, and life is short. If you can fight for the cause you love, it is worth it. You should not stick to this small world. When you really look at human civilization, you will find that many things are too small, and only faith is eternal. Go, Peiwen." This passage also reminded me of Yu Zecheng's words of consolation to Mu Wanqiu in "Latent", which are excerpted as follows: "Think about it, late autumn! You stand in a majestic team, stride forward, and sing war songs to change the whole of China. What kind of momentum is that? A little Yu Zecheng is just a person on the roadside. See you off. We waved and passed, and there is a more meaningful life. Isn't it just a little bourgeois moaning? Sometimes, if you look further, you can have everything! The character creation is so real and natural, and there is no need to say more about the style of writing, the smoothness of the plot, etc. A thousand words can't praise it enough. The last two chapters sacrificed some logic in order to maintain the overall style of writing, but this is completely understandable and acceptable, and I also agree with the author's approach.

Both of them are safe and living freely is the best ending.

Oh my god [covering face, laughing and crying] I'm so touched, so good, it's so well written [ bursting into tears ]

There are only a few chapters, but they are so good. Be's emotions are filled with a touch of sadness, and everyone has become a very good person.

This transformation is really great