We Traveled Through the Scenic Area

I don't know if I was in a hurry to finish it, but many plots were not developed. For example, the element of rivers and lakes. The plot of the grievances and grievances introduced at the beginning was not reflected at all. As soon as the introduction started, it switched to the people's livelihood channel for farming and teaching. It was a bit cliché, and the Dihua stream was not very exciting. What about the storylines of the townspeople in the town? What about the hidden plot? It is integrated into a novel and is finished with just one click. The story of the six investigators can actually be told in detail. However, the long plot is either teaching or farming. It is a pity that it is rare to find a book with good plot and good writing. This book is actually a story about traveling to the countryside to support education.

It ended so hastily, but the story is quite complete!

Extras and new stories can be published simultaneously.

It's a bit rushed, please give me more extras.

It ended too hastily, but the characters were all very warm

Many buried lines were confiscated. For me, it's better to pause the update first and finish writing it properly. This is more important to me. What a pity

Why does my well-behaved baby always have to be treated like this [crying]

It was very enjoyable to read, but the story is a bit short and the content could be written more fully. The author really didn't fill it with a drop of water.

I've finished reading it. I really like the group portrait. The pit of new articles is too shallow. I've basically read all the old articles [crying]

Congratulations! I wish there were more extras, the plot after the main text is a bit rushed

It's so well written [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] ahhhhhhhhhh but I feel like I can write more, I'm really looking forward to it

Extra extra extra extra! !

This is enough for group travel system Dihualiu. I didn't expect this kind of template question. There will also be such beautifully written books in the material. The element is warm and plain farming Infrastructure, focus on modern appliances (service industry), technology (industry and agriculture), The impact of culture (mainly novels) on the ancients, mixed with some martial arts elements for embellishment. In terms of the plot framework, the chapters before chapter 12 are particularly exciting, and the chapters before chapter 48 are flawed. Bu Yanyu, the writing is smooth before the seventy-five chapter, but the next few chapters are rushed. I can't say that the writing is unfinished, I can only say that the pace became faster in the later period and the look and feel gradually faded away. Low. But this book has many advantages that can make up for this shortcoming: 1. In terms of plot arrangement, the overall narrative is smooth and has many memorable points. Responsible There are not so many ancient people appearing in the reaction session that people can't remember them. So much so that the number of NPCs that have become the level of shaping is not so small that it's overwhelming. Xing. The Dihua part makes special arrangements based on systems, artifacts, technology, and culture. A certain role assumes one or two highlight reactions, which are clearly layered and will not be affected by Feeling bored by repeating routines; 2. In terms of characterization, group roles It's just right, neither taking over the spotlight nor acting as a camera, the appearance is detailed A little bit. The protagonist shows a lot of highlights in terms of intelligence, emotional intelligence and military strength. The memory plot used to enrich the degree of shaping is also only a small amount of narration. Be descriptive without breaking the flow too much. However, it is limited by the plot framework and is added later. Speed, some characters cannot be described in detail, which is a pity; 3. Emotions In terms of love, at the beginning, the old husband and wife trust each other and have a tacit understanding of each other. The staff at the scenic spot are also very envious + wish the young couple their childhood sweethearts for real. Reflect it rather than just setting it up. The love line is just a supplement The ingredients appear occasionally and are sweet but not industrially saccharine. It is very reassuring and suitable for readers who like to read about childhood sweethearts. Secondary emotion line It's also bg, it only appears in the later stages, and this part works normally; 4 themes In terms of atmosphere, I really have to praise the author for this. It's easy to say Farming infrastructure management is really easy. No sudden A large number of links that increase the value and add a sense of heaviness (such as suddenly starting to bake To support the atmosphere and praise a certain spirit, etc.), Even if it appears, it will be mentioned in two strokes. It is just for decoration; there is no malicious intent such as personal attacks on travelers by local people. Words and deeds, even if there are doubts, they are quickly "slapped" by the evidence, and they are not right about the matter. People, after clearing up the misunderstanding, immediately become reasonable. The only real thief returns the favor quickly. Arranged two whole chapters (written in two parts) of the Dihua plot and showed them to me It's cool; the most important thing is that the IQs of all the characters appear at the same level. Enough to add authenticity but not so much as to take away from the fantasy" level, e. G. The characters in the scenic spot will miss home, have emotional breakdowns, and mention a lot of realistic literature and art. Works rather than brainless human-machine to complete the task, local people will doubt the scenery Zone security instead of blindly trusting the protagonist's camp. This is right. I look down upon it. Song Xiang's theme of Dihualiu is just to deceive yourself and give your head a holiday, no In order to read awkward texts or heavy dark backgrounds that even I can't fool myself. Big BBQ. Small flaws: Too many typos. Although the author has revised them, paragraph comments are left. There are many insect-catching sites. Occasionally I want to open a paragraph review and see that all the results are insect-catching. —————————— This is enough for group travel system Dihualiu. I didn't expect this kind of template question. There will also be such beautifully written books in the material. The element is warm and plain farming Infrastructure, focus on modern appliances (service industry), technology (industry and agriculture), The impact of culture (mainly novels) on the ancients, mixed with some martial arts elements for embellishment. In terms of the plot framework, the chapters before chapter 12 are particularly exciting, and the chapters before chapter 48 are flawed. Bu Yanyu, the writing is smooth before the seventy-five chapter, but the next few chapters are rushed. I can't say that the writing is unfinished, I can only say that the pace became faster in the later period and the look and feel gradually faded away. Low. But this book has many advantages that can make up for this shortcoming: 1. In terms of plot arrangement, the overall narrative is smooth and has many memorable points. Responsible There are not so many ancient people appearing in the reaction session that people can't remember them. So much so that the number of NPCs that have become the level of shaping is not so small that it's overwhelming. Xing. The Dihua part makes special arrangements based on systems, artifacts, technology, and culture. A certain role assumes one or two highlight reactions, which are clearly layered and will not be affected by Feeling bored by repeating routines; 2. In terms of characterization, group roles It's just right, neither taking over the spotlight nor acting as a camera, the appearance is detailed A little bit. The protagonist shows a lot of highlights in terms of intelligence, emotional intelligence and military strength. The memory plot used to enrich the degree of shaping is also only a small amount of narration. Be descriptive without breaking the flow too much. However, it is limited by the plot framework and is added later. Speed, some characters cannot be described in detail, which is a pity; 3. Emotions In terms of love, at the beginning, the old husband and wife trust each other and have a tacit understanding of each other. The staff at the scenic spot are also very envious + wish the young couple their childhood sweethearts for real. Reflect it rather than just setting it up. The love line is just a supplement The ingredients appear occasionally and are sweet but not industrially saccharine. It is very reassuring and suitable for readers who like to read about childhood sweethearts. Secondary emotion line It's also bg, it only appears in the later stages, and this part works normally; 4 themes In terms of atmosphere, I really have to praise the author for this. It's easy to say Farming infrastructure management is really easy. No sudden A large number of links that increase the value and add a sense of heaviness (such as suddenly starting to bake To support the atmosphere and praise a certain spirit, etc.), Even if it appears, it will be mentioned in two strokes. It is just for decoration; there is no malicious intent such as personal attacks on travelers by local people. Words and deeds, even if there are doubts, they are quickly "slapped" by the evidence, and they are not right about the matter. People, after clearing up the misunderstanding, immediately become reasonable. The only real thief returns the favor quickly. Arranged two whole chapters (written in two parts) of the Dihua plot and showed them to me It's cool; the most important thing is that the IQs of all the characters appear at the same level. Enough to add authenticity but not so much as to take away from the fantasy" level, e. G. The characters in the scenic spot will miss home, have emotional breakdowns, and mention a lot of realistic literature and art. Works rather than brainless human-machine to complete the task, local people will doubt the scenery Zone security instead of blindly trusting the protagonist's camp. This is right. I look down upon it. Song Xiang's theme of Dihualiu is just to deceive yourself and give your head a holiday, no In order to read awkward texts or heavy dark backgrounds that even I can't fool myself. Big BBQ. Small flaws: Too many typos. Although the author has revised them, paragraph comments are left. There are many insect-catching sites. Occasionally I want to open a paragraph review and see that all the results are insect-catching.

Damn, will there be more extras? Desperate [poor]

There are also extra chapters. The author should write a few more extra chapters. [Please] [Please] [Please] [Please] [empty bowl] [empty bowl] [empty bowl]