Bl, add a new one after reading it. I'm not very good at writing good reviews, and I can't say rainbow farts. If I can order all of them, it has advantages and I can keep reading. I will write more complaints.
Generally speaking, the fluency is okay. Apocalyptic writing, mixed with the background of cultivating immortality.
I really don't see how they can see each other, especially since they like to attack without knowing why.
There are many plots where Shou pretends to be weak and is controlled by the villain. The whole text has been written that Shou is the strongest, but once he is controlled by the villain, it lasts for several days, which makes him feel a little delayed and aggrieved.
Popular with thousands of people, there are some thunder spots in the middle, and the golden finger is a bit big. The scumbag doesn't know what will happen to him in the end.
It shows that there is a lock seal if it is not fully ordered.
It's a cool article. The whole article is funny. It's a little bit group portrait, but the image of a group of relatives and friends is quite distinct.
4.5 Stars.
There are a lot of bad jokes, and there are linkages. Two of them are highlighted in the game. I thought they were one and the other, but later I found out that they were in sequence. The emotional line is considered to be a long and thin one.
Not entirely sure because of the seal.
I didn't win, the deputy CPs are all slutty, and they are also scumbags, they are procrastinating, why not just go to the crematorium neatly? I'm still mentioning it in the extra chapter (even though it's the ending)
The main character is just stupid and there is nothing wrong with the title of the book.
The author seems to refer to the opinions in the comment area, so you can see sudden jumps to the copy, sudden overturning of the previous plot, etc. In the article.
Forget it, the writing is still good, but it repeatedly jumps over and over on cute and cute things.
Beautiful! It's science fiction + apocalypse + reality, but what's amazing is that you can feel the author's romance and a sense of fairy tale beyond intrigue. The plot of the whole article is quite exciting.
Nice looking, sour and sweet at the same time.
You can look at the 1-star rating for Mine Clearance, the plot is truthful.
The social background and language habits are close to reality.
One of a series of articles, the protagonists in other articles are more or less involved in the plot (not guest appearances, the image may not be likable)
In the end, the pervert in the copywriting did not receive the legal sanctions he deserved. At most, he ended up with a somewhat embarrassing ending.
Looks good, the plot is very refreshing
The paragraph comment area is a bit messy. If you see a certain paragraph with too many paragraph comments for no reason, you are basically catching a bug.
It's a straight-forward twist, but it's a little rough in the middle. The plot at the beginning doesn't have any background information and there are too many names. It's a bit hard to read and I almost gave up. It will get better after a few chapters. A series of articles with a sub-CP.
Because there is a lock seal, it shows that it is not fully ordered.
The first half is sweet and nonsensical, but it becomes more and more disastrous as it goes on?
Ps: I don't quite understand the behavior of the male protagonist's girlfriend cooperating with her boyfriend or even drawing fanart.
It feels more like a high martial arts setting
Typos and minor bugs were not corrected, and the last two realms ended within a few chapters, which was a bit unexpected. Others are okay.
There are several pairs of deputy CPs.
It's nice to look at, but it doesn't point to the power-based struggle for hegemony in the technology tree.
It's a pity that there is no extra story about the two protagonists, and it's really not clear who is attacking and who is suffering [covering face, laughing and crying]
4.5 Stars.
The characters are all quite fleshed out, and each main character has natural personality changes.
The drama within the drama is good. There were 8 episodes of the variety show in the early stage, but not every issue was written.
Slap in the face, hilarious entertainment elements
Fight against the young couple on the road
It's a fun story about slaps in the face, but a little tired in the later stage (there are really too many villains/cannon fodder, although the slap in the face is really fast)
It's okay, just a little bit cheesy
Don't bother with the comment section before v. Not many people guessed it right (＾＾)
It's not quite right with the author's xp, I'm digging my toes into the ground.
Shocked. I have always regarded the author as a plot flow author (although the candy in the plot is indeed sweet, but it is basically a long-flowing type)
One star was deducted because (the plot is divided into sections)
Mind Gong's heir cousin was once Gong's backup marriage partner (Gong and Shou were pulling back and forth at this time, Gong's attitude towards directly letting his cousin live in the house as a backup was still ambiguous)
The writing is very good, I feel very happy when I think about it, and the main character is really fun. The drama within the drama is also good to watch.
Ps: There is no deputy cp
Not bad. The cross talk is super funny.
The face looks better after falling off the horse than before. The slap in the face before falling off the horse seems to be following a procedure.
Okay, short story
There was a little bit of a dirty look at the beginning (there were expressions such as making fun of things), but it disappeared after about three or five chapters.
The setting is very interesting and the plot logic is also online.
Black Socks is absolutely hilarious, so reasonable, so reasonable that it's a little bit funny.
The plot moves a little too fast in the middle and later stages, as if we are rushing to catch up, but it is still complete.
That part of the copy couldn't be more concise.
In the end, there was no mention of whether the matter of sharing hearts was resolved.
Sweet writing and sandy writing.
The confusing points will be explained later (for example, it was never made clear that the target of the scandal is the younger brother)
It looks good, with a little bit of glass slag mixed in.
Ps: The popular science guide for copywriting is indeed true
If you haven't ordered everything, there will be a seal.
A lot of foreshadowing was laid in the early stage, and the time in the later stage was basically written. For me, the games are better to watch. The further I go, the less I will write about the games. No extras.
I give the plot 5 stars, it can be read as a historical novel, forget about the emotional line (just like I really can't imagine seeing gossip in a textbook)
The survival part is okay. After returning from an alien galaxy, there is no survival live broadcast plot, and it is getting more and more confusing (I can't imagine that something like being reluctant to even take a half-hour walk after pregnancy will happen to the protagonist) (I understand it but I can't accept it)
Stronger under attack
It's not just infrastructure.
From western fantasy to science fiction.
Taobao only has a sense of existence in the early stage.
Small details (such as names of people and places) are prone to bugs.
A cool article from afar.
Ps: It will be more enjoyable if you watch it without thinking
pps: Compared with other young couples in Yuanfang Family, this couple's relationship is extremely smooth.
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