Personal taste. If there are mines, they will be discharged. Can be used as personal reading notes. In short, I am also someone who spends money to read articles, so don't ask for so much. Jpg
Confrontation title in the same series ()
I remember correctly, the only possible surprise is that the father in the extra story is a real straight man who doesn't have a long mouth... I feel sorry for mom ()
It's still an atypical Western fantasy, with an ancient Roman setting, and still no meal replacements. I remember I was shocked when I first read the article and looked at the references... It was really powerful.
In my mind, I like the character design of this book better.
Didn't the priest actually put this book away... The place where the dream begins?
My impression is that it gets better towards the back, and the writing is really green at the beginning.
Still no meal replacement. Strictly speaking, it should be considered European style, but it's good to have this taste.
It's been a while since I've watched it. I think the interaction and plot are very good. I'll take it if it's awkward.
Very cute. The kind of cuteness that does not hide its flaws.
Romance refers to the romantic line that I have to mention when I confess my love at the end, although I have slept with many people, it really made me frown. The setting can be written as Shuang Jie and pure love. Do you have to emphasize it repeatedly? The mysophobic product lady has a bit of a heart attack.
If you can accept this, it's well worth watching. The settings of both sides are very cute and the emotional lines are really interesting. This is a relatively rare DND setting nowadays.
The physical extra is a cute summary that condenses the essence of the full text... Let's make an excerpt (exciting preview)
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Archmage Rachel has never been so angry. Things were completely wrong. The betrayal should not have happened, and it should not have come from Heiman. He tried to be calm, as he had faced any betrayal in the past, but that didn't work this time. He was too used to Heyman. The people who went to hunt down the traitors were wrong. They had no enthusiasm to come forward. The new apprentices were wrong, they were not cunning enough, not flexible enough, not hungry enough for magic. The assistants who wanted to take over the traitor's position were wrong. They couldn't complete the task perfectly. They couldn't understand Rachel's unspoken instructions. They didn't have such eyes.
Their hair isn't brown, their eyes aren't blue enough, and their name isn't Hyman.
At this moment, Rachel suddenly realized that Heyman was "that apprentice." He is not the first apprentice, not the oldest apprentice, or even the most powerful apprentice, but he will be the last. There is no one like him, no one can replace him - no one is him. Rachel has found his destiny, and he no longer needs any apprentices except Heyman.
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Rachel looked at him quietly for a while, then laughed and said, "No, you can't." He pressed Heyman's lips with his fingers, suppressing the other party's urgent defense. "Even if you could,"
Rachel looked at his student and sighed with nostalgia and relief, "Even if you could, how could I love a golem?
It's useless to do anything. Archmage Rachel's heart has never been the reward for obedience. He would not love a dog, a slave, a knife, a golem. He demands obedience. But he is doomed to see blind believers, just like his unique apprentice Heiman, who is doomed to escape from the idol after falling in love.
"Okay, I understand, we all know it. "Rachel smiled in the panicked eyes of the apprentice, "Go and be yourself. "
There will be thunderstorms later. After careful consideration, one point will be deducted, and three stars will be given to the early stage.
You can stop at chapter 63 after reading it.
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This article really made me think carefully about why thunderstorms happen...
In any case, the plot of the two sides having a big quarrel and attacking the prisoner//forbidding force//control should be placed in the turning point instead of the last ten chapters? The handling was also horrifyingly sloppy. After a bit of intimidation and rhetoric, the core reason for Shou's previous fight for power and the throne was replaced by the love between the two, and then Shou abandoned the throne that he had been fighting for for a book and eloped with Gong? ? ? ?
This copywriting demining is equivalent to no demining...
The plot that made me laugh so much last time was that a patient with depression made up his mind to get better because he cared about himself, and then the depression was cured within one chapter.
Based on my own experience, I can infer that the author didn't have a good outline at the beginning and only thought about the plot. Because the important plot itself is difficult to handle, he subconsciously delayed it until the end. As a result, after the plot collapsed, he didn't have the patience to write the ending and handled it like it was cut in half.
It's a sweet story, I really like the style of writing, the world view and the supporting cast, and the career line is very good.
The plot line of the human world is too long, and the appearance of 324 has more laughs than sweets. If there were more emotional lines, it could become the top western fantasy in my mind...
Dedicated to the two stars that reflect each other in the three realms.
How can I order everything if jj is locked... And actually there is nothing even if it is locked ()
Although it is heartbreaking for some reasons, this article is very cute... Those who love to read other people's vest literature and talk about XQL quarrels are in luck. Lili's food has the flavor of xql, but not that strong... Which means she can't find a meal replacement in her own food.
Mr. Kevin is the only person I have ever seen who was imprisoned//banned (not exactly) and then turned around and kidnapped...
A very unique Western fantasy flavor... How should I put it, there are ancient Greek elements (Phaethon comes from Phaethon, Cronus comes from the Titan Cronus, not to mention the references), but when I watched it, it was always accompanied by Egyptian style BGM
The plot is very simple and straightforward, the emotional line is a bit unclear, the ending is a bit rushed, and there are many plot points that could be polished better. So when I read the timeline, I was still surprised... It was a huge improvement.
Just watch short stories with simple plots.
Compared with the Horns article, the emotional line accounts for a higher proportion. I seem to have an impression of the rhythm and arrangement. I will wait until I finish re-reading it (the word count has also shrunk by nearly half, it's amazing, right)
But in the ending chapter Urumqi is a real dog (no derogatory meaning)
Although there is an identity swap episode, I still miss the blond Arecio...
I don't know for sure if I haven't eaten the melon, but I think it's very cute.
Will review again after reloading. What impressed me most was that when I was following up on the update, the author said that after seven years of long-distance running, I finally got married and asked for leave... No matter what, I want to be happy...
I read it a few years ago and really liked the writing, characters, and worldview.
Oh, where can I find this old enemy who has actually killed each other hundreds of times, turned teacher and student, turned lover...!
The heartthrob factor is there but I didn't notice it when I watched it before.
What impressed me the most was Ersi's suicide and her confusion before being exposed, and her subsequent breakdown in dealing with the banshee. And the overwhelming snow and reunion at the end.
Ersi didn't think about it in the end, but she still cares about it now...
Locked again. Who is fully responsible is not me.
I remember it was a short cute article.
To clear things up, there is a detailed description of the female partner's use of her/her body to make a deal with the devil, as well as the female partner's subsequent reception. The darkening at the end is a little sudden.
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