Harry Potter Fanfiction, With Personal Reviews (Ongoing) hp同人附个人点评（持续更新

1 [ [Hp]abby Riddle [HP]艾比·里德尔 Clouds Rise and Fall云起时纷Romance523k WordsOngoing 25.5kFavorites38.7kClicks/ch7.4kGifts

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Cp tom It's pretty good and very fat, but the updates are too slow. I haven't watched the plot for a long time and almost forgot about it.

2 [ [Hp]love and Hogwarts [HP]恋与霍格沃兹 Calamari Apple Sauce鱿鱼苹果酱Romance507k WordsOngoing 24.2kFavorites25.6kClicks/ch20kGifts

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All heroines, it's been a while since I forgot the plot. I'll review it again when I find time. I remember it should be pretty good-looking, and it's still being serialized.

3 [ [Hp]can't Escape from the Sea [HP]逃不出海 Cedar for Pansy雪松换堇Romance50k WordsOngoing 542Favorites1kClicks/ch427Gifts

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Cp Sirius, the original indigenous heroine, without Voldemort but with Professor Riddle The writing is okay, the playful words used in the first person point of view really struck me as cute, and the heroine is cute. The pit is shallow and I'm not updating anymore, but it looks good. I'll give it four stars. By the way, the cover is very nice. It seems that I paid for the appointment. I really like the heroine with black hair and blue eyes.

4 【 [Harry Potter] Confiscated Weapons Recycling Center 【HP】管制刀具回收中心 Milk Tea Jellyfish奶昔水母Romance331k WordsCompleted 26.9kFavorites38.2kClicks/ch9kGifts

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All heroine single arrow, time travel heroine Updates were stopped after being reported, and the synopsis was posted at the back, so you can get into the literary wilderness.

5 [ [Harry Potter] Possibilities [HP]可能性 Lu Congyu鹿从鱼Romance408k WordsCompleted 24kFavorites37.2kClicks/ch1.4kGifts

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CP Sirius, the original time-traveling heroine The emotional line is a bit strange, but the overall dream relief is HE

6 h No. 94 Diagon Alley hp对角巷94号 Pineapple Soda菠萝西打Romance816k WordsCompleted 21.9kFavorites22.4kClicks/ch1.5kGifts

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Cp George, the original indigenous heroine The first part is okay, but in the second part the heroine doesn't even appear much, the plot starts to follow the original work, and the proportion of quotations from the original work is too high The emotional line in the middle and late stages is almost zero

7 [ [Comprehensive British and American HP] Lolita [综英美主HP]洛丽塔 Enzhuo恩灼Romance193k WordsCompleted 3.4kFavorites7.4kClicks/ch313Gifts

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Cp Tom, the original heroine You can understand something by looking at the title of the article, right? Healthy love is good, but dark emotions are even more satisfying

8 [ [Harry Potter] I'm the Coolest Guy Around [HP]社会我拽哥 Qingcheng Alley青城小巷Romance551k WordsOngoing 56.2kFavorites88.4kClicks/ch29.3kGifts

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Cp Draco, original indigenous heroine, sister-brother love The writing is good and the plot is interesting, but the author updates it three times a year, which is considered a trap. Give it four stars, it's worth watching if you can wait.

9 [ [Harry Potter/Draco BG] Sunny Day [HP/德拉科BG]Sunny Day Warmth in Beichuan北川有暖Romance1.1M WordsCompleted 37.9kFavorites23.6kClicks/ch6.5kGifts

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Cp Draco, original indigenous heroine, Draco has low OOC level Very delicate text, with a little bit of abuse in the middle, probably a bit sour or sweet. Also first person

10 [ [Hp]zi Zi Honey Candy [HP]滋滋蜂蜜糖 Beautiful Water水丽美美Romance289k WordsCompleted 24.8kFavorites39.8kClicks/ch1.1kGifts

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Cp Cedric, the original heroine Quite sweet in the middle But I don't like the extra story very much. Seid joined the Quidditch team and didn't go home for a long time. The heroine Ravenclaw gave up the chance of promotion in order to take care of her children.

11 [ Harry Potter: Prophecies Must Not Be Spoken [HP]预言不能说 Northwest of Mirror City镜城西北Romance293k WordsCompleted 19.3kFavorites32.6kClicks/ch409Gifts

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CP Abu (yes, Draco's grandfather, Lucius' father), the original indigenous heroine, has a big golden finger I remember it was pretty good, but the earlier ones were inevitably a bit awkward in the middle.

12 H HP Magic and Secret Love Guide HP魔法与暗恋指南 Yan Xizhi晏惜知Romance340k WordsCompleted 8.6kFavorites6.6kClicks/ch1.9kGifts

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Cp Cedric, the original indigenous heroine Completed, good writing, first person (this is my personal cuteness, if it is someone else's fault, please avoid it) It's really good to write well in the first person, especially if it's a fanfic, so I'm more tolerant.

13 [ [HP Fan]tomorrow Is Coming [HP同人]明日将至 Cold 12寒十贰Romance131k WordsCompleted 7.8kFavorites10kClicks/ch378Gifts

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CP Sirius, the original indigenous heroine I have nothing to say about the writing style. I personally think it is very good. The plot is also logical and well-rounded. It ranks in the top ten in my heart.

14 [ [Harry Potter] Where Snakes and Lions Live Together [HP]蛇狮一窝 A Hairpin一支钗子Romance583k WordsOngoing 27.4kFavorites47kClicks/ch6.8kGifts

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The heroine of all is a descendant of the next generation. The heroine is from a time-travelling flower gardener. It was discontinued after the fifth grade.

15 [ [HP] Harry Potter Fans: Yugezi [HP]哈利波特同人之渔歌子 SyringaRomance249k WordsCompleted 7.7kFavorites24.2kClicks/ch124Gifts

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CP Snape, the heroine native can do divination I watched it very early and I think the plot is okay, but the emotional line is probably average.

16 [ [Hp]dark Duke's Candy [HP]黑暗公爵那颗糖 The Ultimate Top总攻大人Romance380k WordsCompleted 40.5kFavorites117.2kClicks/ch5.9kGifts

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Cp Voldemort, original indigenous heroine The main text is ridiculous, Dumbledore is portrayed like a control freak, and the extras are... As well as the cheating/marriage scenes, it's a matter of opinion.

17 H The Margins of the Harry Potter Story HP 故事边角 Writing Poems About Nothing废话写诗Romance417k WordsCompleted 27.4kFavorites46.2kClicks/ch1.4kGifts

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Cp Draco, original indigenous heroine, sister-brother love, the heroine is a snake-like Ravenclaw I can't remember clearly, it seemed a bit rough in the middle, I'll re-do it when I have time.

18 [ [Harry Potter] If Dudley Had a Sister [HP]如果达力有个妹妹 Seven Camphor Trees七棵桉树Romance148k WordsCompleted 24.6kFavorites99.5kClicks/ch807Gifts

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There are several branches in the CP extra story, and the heroine has been reborn four times. A bit sour But this book was actually written by the author when he was still in junior high school and high school? Give it four stars

19 [ [Hp]aristocratic Love [HP]贵族式爱情 The Way of Plain Shoes素履之往Romance479k WordsOngoing 17.3kFavorites37.4kClicks/ch2.3kGifts

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Cp Draco, the original indigenous heroine A bit like a Mary Sue, not very memorable, but still writing extras? This article is seven years old Demining is written at the back: the heroine is a Muggle noble, if you can accept it, you can read it.

20 【 Hplight in the Black Jiu'er of Yueming Lake月明湖的九尔Romance194k WordsOngoing 3.5kFavorites5.7kClicks/ch144Gifts

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Cp Harry, the original indigenous heroine, is the daughter of Sirius The writing style is quite serious, but the author hasn't updated it for a long time.

21 [ [Hp]slytherin [HP]斯莱特林 Crow White Sandalwood乌鸦白檀Romance206k WordsCompleted 2.9kFavorites6.4kClicks/ch124Gifts

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Cp Draco, the original indigenous heroine be, I remember it was a bit cruel

22 [ [Hp]harry Potter and the Goblin [HP]哈利波特与杠精 Young Master Muhan暮寒公子Romance50k WordsOngoing 26.6kFavorites91kClicks/ch9.5kGifts

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Cp Harry, a time-traveling heroine, a funny article and the heroine is a hottie as the title says The pit is shallow and the updates are broken, but I give it four stars because it looks pretty good.

23 [ [Hp]cheese Trap [HP]奶酪陷阱 Wang Er妄耳Romance26k WordsCompleted 8kFavorites41kClicks/ch111Gifts

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CP Tom, very short but very beautiful! I didn't expect that less than 30,000 words could bring some reversal and shock to me. The writing is so powerful.

24 [ [Harry Potter] About Ron [HP]关于罗恩 Moss Zhi Zhi苔藓之之Romance40k WordsCompleted 3kFavorites12.9kClicks/ch80Gifts

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Cp Ron, time travel heroine, first person The words used are a bit embarrassing to me, brainless cookie If you can accept the demolition of Luo He, you can watch it

25 H HP Plays House HP玩过家家 Salad Bear沙拉小熊Romance31k WordsOngoing 259Favorites1kClicks/ch148Gifts

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Cp Tom, the original indigenous heroine, started in the orphanage The pit is shallow but beautiful, so I give it four stars. I beg the author to come back and update the TAT.

26 [ [Harry Potter] The Ultimate Completion Plan [HP]最终通关计划 An Bai桉柏Multi-Orientation161k WordsOngoing 50.2kFavorites104.5kClicks/ch46.4kGifts

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The cp has not yet been determined. It is an original heroine, borrowing the setting of an unlucky child. For details, please see the introduction of the article and the food guide. The serialization of "Kengqian" is slow to update, but it looks good, so I marked it with five stars.

27 [ [Harry Potter] Every Day, I'm on the Verge of Getting Expelled [HP]每天都在退学边缘 Mechanical Squirrel机械松鼠Romance186k WordsOngoing 25.5kFavorites30.4kClicks/ch19.5kGifts

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Original heroine, shallow pitfalls, serialization won three stars Doing science in magic texts(?)

28 [ [Hp]eastern European Wizard Valeria [HP]东欧巫师瓦莱里娅 Born on Flower-Fruit Mountain生座花果山Romance368k WordsOngoing 16.2kFavorites14.8kClicks/ch4.1kGifts

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Cp Harry, the original indigenous heroine, 1991 was both the year Harry entered school and the year Su Jie entered school. The heroine from Eastern Europe came to London to study. The pit is not shallow, but it has been out of service for a year. It was very interesting to read, so I gave it four stars.

29 H HP Midnight Sun HP午夜骄阳 Crow White Sandalwood乌鸦白檀Romance454k WordsOngoing 11kFavorites11.4kClicks/ch4.2kGifts

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Cp Draco, the original indigenous heroine, The setting is interesting and the writing is good, but the plot is a bit boring.

30 [ [Harry Potter] My Owl Got Lost [HP]我的猫头鹰迷路了 Green Radish Skirt青青绿萝裙Romance318k WordsCompleted 178.5kFavorites323.5kClicks/ch396.3kGifts

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No cp, time travel heroine Daily journal, very warm, but sometimes I can't stand it, maybe too bland, overall good

31 H Can My HP Diary Help Me Pass My NEWTs? HP日记本能帮我通过NEWTs吗 Cloud-Cutting Blade裁云刀Romance228k WordsCompleted 57.4kFavorites93kClicks/ch8kGifts

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Cp diary Tom, the original indigenous heroine High IQ Ravenclaw, so brilliant! There is almost no OOC, a must-see for sapiosexuals

32 [ Harry Potter: The Mind-Reading Maniac [HP]读心狂魔 Qi Shangji柒殇祭Danmei (BL)344k WordsCompleted 33.5kFavorites82.5kClicks/ch6.3kGifts

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Cp Draco's bl text, the ancient time travel system with Miracle Warmth I completely treated it as a censorship-free novel. The emotional line was so awkward that it could be regarded as a mindless novel (…?

33 [ [HP] Falling in Love with Draco [HP]和德拉科谈恋爱 Asakawa Xun浅川寻Romance66k WordsCompleted 17kFavorites61.3kClicks/ch871Gifts

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Cp Draco, the original indigenous heroine A bit awkward, mindless sweet story, teacher-student love (Draco is the teacher)

34 H Harry Potter: After Class, I’ll Get My Dad to Beat You Up HP放学后叫我爸打你 Shacha Sauce沙茶茶酱Romance380k WordsCompleted 62.2kFavorites179.5kClicks/ch4.3kGifts

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Cp Snape, original heroine For example, the father of the female protagonist in the title of the article takes up a larger proportion in the article, and the emotional line is average. I always feel that most people in the comment area prefer to see the father-daughter relationship? An old comedy, complaining about the heroine, sometimes it's quite embarrassing to watch, but you can watch it because of its ability to resist embarrassment

35 [ [Harry Potter] The Hard-Knock Life of a Ravenclaw Girl [HP]拉文克劳少女的苦逼日常 Asakawa Xun浅川寻Romance366k WordsCompleted 41.7kFavorites58.7kClicks/ch5.7kGifts

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Cp Harry, the original indigenous heroine, a world without Voldemort It's a silly and sweet article, but I feel like Harry in a world without Voldemort wouldn't be like the one in the article? Anyway, don't look at it with your brain

36 [ [Hp]the Only Way to Tell Twins Apart [HP]分辨双胞胎的唯一方法 Qi Xiaoliu柒小柳Romance99k WordsCompleted 39.3kFavorites109.8kClicks/ch1.5kGifts

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CP Fred, the original indigenous heroine A brainless short sweet article from 8 years ago

37 [ [Harry Potter] Pride and Prejudice [hp]傲慢与偏见 A Scroll of Painting一卷丹青Romance490k WordsCompleted 35.8kFavorites55.4kClicks/ch1.9kGifts

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Cp Harry, the third creation of Orange Light with the same name Demining: The early stage was okay, but the later shaping of the heroine was very different from the second heroine. Harry was portrayed as a male chauvinist, and the relationship was very unequal. I remember that the name of the extra child was not up to the heroine. If you can accept it, you can watch it.

38 H A Little Problem for a Harry Potter Witch HP魔女的小问题 Annie Hall安妮霍尔Romance451k WordsOngoing 8.9kFavorites14kClicks/ch1.6kGifts

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Cp Draco, the original indigenous heroine, the heroine is Harry's sister I like the heroine's character very much! Stopped updating for a year

39 H HP: Padfoot Snatched the Cornflowers HP大脚板叼走了矢车菊 Yan Xizhi晏惜知Romance441k WordsCompleted 27.6kFavorites37.1kClicks/ch2kGifts

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Cp Sirius, the original indigenous heroine, quite satisfactory, the plot and writing are a bit awkward, and the emotional line is a bit inexplicable? Demining is written at the back: The bg article has an original bl line. The heroine's brother x is a Ravenclaw, and the heroine's brother is bent. There are many descriptions of this pair of cp, which is acceptable.

40 [ [Harry Potter] Your Immersive Hogwarts Raising Game [hp]“你”的沉浸式霍格沃茨养成游戏 Mrs. Bitter Gourd老苦瓜夫人Romance652k WordsOngoing 18.8kFavorites17.4kClicks/ch19.2kGifts

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All heroine, serialized but interesting. There are options at the end of each chapter. The plot is based on readers' votes, which gives you a sense of development. The demining is written at the back: I agreed to update regularly on a certain day, but there were other readers of the author's articles under the comment area causing trouble. It was probably because of the interruption of the update. I can accept it and read it.

42 H HP Has a Fool HP有一个笨蛋 Salad Bear沙拉小熊Romance20k WordsCompleted 2.7kFavorites7.6kClicks/ch144Gifts

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Cp Ron, the original heroine, a brainless short story, sweet and sweet Can Luo He accept it?