[Harry Potter] If Dudley Had a Sister

Finished spreading flowers! (Isn't it a bit late to tell now?) I randomly found a collection of HP tweets on Green River and flipped through it. When I scrolled to the bottom, I saw the name of this article and it felt a bit like a Mary Sue, so I took a look at it out of curiosity. Unexpectedly, I found a treasure. It's been three times now, haha, but I just decided to leave a comment now (because I have to ramble a lot every time I comment) (feeling guilty) First of all, praise Laus! It's really jealous to be able to cook such delicious food at the age of fifteen (pointing) The characterization is very good, especially the Riddle line. For the first time, Riddle can hit my mark! "Qingtian is boring, I love you." It's really good to cry... He still thinks Qingtian is boring, but because of your existence, he has someone to love. You are the variable in his life. Don't be too pushy about this kind of thing... Ced and Harry are also scoring steadily. Both are happy cookies, which is pretty good. Another good point is that the ending is very satisfying! ! Even James and Lily are back (Harry has a complete family QAQ). Finally, it's not a death-defying victory, it's a perfect victory! (Loudly) I don't need to tell you how tearful it was to see Lily and Sect reunited. "He made a mistake and can't see you." I really mean this sentence... Back then, "Mudblood" was the prophecy that he personally conveyed to Voldemort... Lily's "I forgive you" was probably what he recalled hearing in countless midnight dreams. I feel like I've been nagging a lot again, and when I first read this article, it was already written in 2017 (seven years ago). But a good article is a good article. Maybe some people will read it. I have always felt that the meaning of fandom is to allow us to see other possibilities and stories besides the original work. Thank you Rouse for bringing us this wonderful possibility!

Such a gentle text, it heals all the wounds. Harry had his own family again, the professor finally said that he was sorry and was forgiven, the principal did not fall from the tower, Sirius did not fall into the curtain, Cedric did not lose his life in the most glorious year... All the pain of separation and despair finally turned into sweet honey, and a rainbow finally appeared after the heavy rain...

Madam, are there any plans to publish a fan version of this book? Orz...

It is very impressive to write such a good article at the age of 15, and the characters are created very well.

I feel that the heroine's transformation in these four weeks is gradual and the rhythm is just right. I like it.

I really like it. This article is too short on romance, but I really like it.

I'm a bit sorry that I didn't see Lupine's extra episode.

So cute... I kept crying when I was so happy

It looks so perfect, I'm so happy [crying]

I found that old novels still have limitations of the times, such as arranging the next male partner [glasses] for a male protagonist who likes the heroine, but as a top character in the old novel, it is already very good [lop-eared rabbit head] I like the Dursley family relationship part wow kaka