The setting of the first world is poignant, but the plot is not there, just a lot of descriptions from the heart; the second world, the protagonist is dark, but the affection is deep. When it is the best toy, the child of that year grabbed Axia's hand, biting the candy and urged him to leave. I was silent for a long time when I saw this, which was a bit unpleasant.
It is a short story, cheerful, but also a bit heavy in some aspects. Shou looks very optimistic and cheerful, and sometimes he cries a lot. It can be seen that he is actually uneasy and sad. Sometimes he tells a slightly realistic and heavy story in a cheerful tone. Because the protagonist is a kind-hearted young man, the story does not have a sad ending.
Qin Qing, the fox, gradually changed from a confident beauty to a cute little girl. Gong gradually became cold and Shou gradually fell in love because the timelines of the two are opposite.
It is a somewhat depressive article, but strangely, it seems that the points buried in the early stage of the article are not well exposed, so the plot lacks explosive power, and it belongs to the type of writing but then lightly skipping it. After reading the first dozen chapters, I found that the development of this article was a bit slow.
The two plot points of committing suicide and discovering more than 700 messages in the middle and late stages are very good, but unfortunately there is no emotional explosion or plot climax as imagined, which is a bit off the "cool point" (only my personal opinion).
There is also a plot of seven hundred messages that can be written in detail as a good highlight, but the author did not develop it in depth. He just wrote it but it was better than not writing it, and it was not as satisfying as I expected.
And because I skipped a long section and didn't read in detail about the relationship between Shou and Gong, I was a little opposed and felt awkward when I saw that Shou had been a transparent person for two years.
All in all, Shou's depression deepens, others gradually feel it but hazy - finally Shou commits suicide, everyone reacts - and then 700 messages appear - Gong is shocked and regretful, others are surprised and heartbroken - then Gong faces Shou's complex inner activities, the attitudes of Shou's family - and finally how Shou and Shou deal with the matter, and whether they are still together... This long plot, if the emotions are delicate, the plot is layered, and the final climax is surging with surging emotions, it will be very satisfying.