The Immortal Venerable Is Forced to Bind Himself to a Villain System

Very wonderful story design, I really like this plot. The only drawback is that the early stage is a little rushed, the emotional line description is not deep enough, and the protagonist looks miserable when looking at it. But the overall shortcomings do not hide the advantages, and it is worth watching. Chu Linyuan's forced deflection of the sword and Shen Zheyu's stubbornness at the expense of his flesh and blood were no ordinary master-disciple grievances. It was natural for them to develop feelings. The two lonely souls quietly grew pure love amidst the scars of mutual torture. The role of Chu Linyuan is very good, and the most touching characteristics are her inability to break free from the tear and her stubbornness that would rather die than surrender. In the eyes of the world, he is the unattainable "number one swordsman" (although he has always suffered in the early stage and his combat power is not obvious), "cold and aloof, unstained by dust", so when he was damaged in battle, he was very... Lustful. The character was established in the first chapter (the first chapter was well written). I was very touched that there is such a kind and upright protagonist in this online literary circle where people are everywhere. Shen Zheyu didn't write much in the beginning. He gave him the name "Sword Slave" and carved the scars with his own hands, which was pretty cool (can this be said?). It would be nice if his identity could be foreshadowed in the front. As a protagonist in the early stage, his image was still weak. Although he had already known that the point system would make it difficult to abuse people, but later it was said that his blood was very powerful, and it always felt a bit awkward with his background. From the humiliating name of "Sword Slave" to finally standing side by side in heaven and earth, Shen Zheyu completed the transformation from being shaped to a co-conspirator, which was very gratifying to watch. As a result, the plot moved faster than the emotions. I had a question in the plot of Shen saving Chu. Is he worth it? He's just a master, what's he trying to do? But fortunately, everything was brought back later, and the settings of the past and present were filled in. The two experienced a lot, and the interaction was very cute. It made my heart warm when I watched it, and it was a successful outcome. I was still very moved when I saw the ending. There is a lot of resistance in the article. The protagonist would rather break his own body than surrender to that absurd fate, even if the price paid is too much, I felt heartbroken when I read it and sighed that this is too miserable. I really hate this stinky system. Another point is that the integration of the system and the fairy tale is not handled well. When a non-protagonist plot character mentions "system", it feels weird, as if the system appears normally in the fairy tale. Everyone knows that there is such a thing as a system that can contract people. The relationship between Chu Linyuan and Shen Zheyu is the core driving force of the story. Under the catalysis of the "system", a complex, profound and extremely tense emotional connection is generated. This connection begins with disparity and misunderstanding. Shen Zheyu's keen "seeing" contrasts well with Chu Linyuan's silent "guarding". After Shen Zheyu understood everything, she took the initiative to choose understanding and empathy, and finally moved towards shared responsibility. Chu Linyuan's "forbearance" and Shen Zheyu's "returning to the guests" moved the mouse so much. The novel reveals a truth: the so-called fate is nothing but a cage built by countless surrenders. Chu Linyuan and Shen Zheyu crashed into the cage with their flesh and blood bodies. They used the shimmer of light deflected by their swords and the shields made of scars to declare an eternal proposition. The real salvation comes from the unyielding echo deep in the soul, from the lonely courage that still chooses to hold each other's hands on the edge of the abyss. I am very grateful that I clicked on this novel and finished it in one go. The young couple Shen Chu must be 99! 🎆🎆🎆Spread flowers, scatter flowers

The flower of the high mountain was forced to turn black? No, he was just secretly doting on his apprentice. The character Chu Linyuan really makes me love and feel sorry for him. He was originally the coldest and aloof immortal in the world of cultivation. He was supposed to have no desires and desires, but he was forcibly bound by the system because he failed to overcome the tribulation, and was forced to become a "villain". The system asked him to abuse Shen Zheyu, suppress his apprentices, and be a ruthless master. But how did he do it? ——On the surface, he punished Shen Zheyu with a cold face to go to the cold pool to think about his past, but he turned around and secretly set up a warm array by the pool; he scolded his apprentice in public for his "dull aptitude", but stayed up late to revise the sword manual for him in private; he could obviously torture Shen Zheyu severely according to the requirements of the system, but every time he was met with loud thunder and small rain. Even when he suffered backlash, his first reaction was "Don't let Zheyu see it." How is he a villain? He's clearly a gentle fool who talks a lot but doesn't mean what he means. The system wanted to make him a villain, but the gentleness in his bones prevented him from being cruel no matter what. Shen Zheyu: From "abused object" to "husband-protecting madman". Shen Zheyu's growth line is one of my favorite parts in this book. At first, he was just a son of luck who was judged by the system as "must be abused". He lived fearfully under Chu Linyuan's "coldness", and even really thought that his master hated him. But even so, he still practiced stubbornly and worked hard to become stronger. Even if he was punished with bruises all over his body, he never complained. Until one night, while he was half asleep and half awake, he found that the master, who was as cold as ice during the day, was carefully applying medicine to him. At that moment, Shen Zheyu's world was turned upside down. It turned out that Master's indifference was fake, his punishment was fake, but his concern for him was real. From then on, Shen Zheyu no longer just passively endured, he began to actively test, and even deliberately made mistakes, just to see if Chu Linyuan would really punish him. And every time, he discovered that the master's "cruel heart" was always just a facade for the system to see. Later, when the system forced Chu Linyuan to completely go dark, Shen Zheyu directly broke into his consciousness, saw the memory fragments tortured by the system, and saw that the master would rather hurt himself than actually hurt him. He finally understood that they were never opposites. ——They are each other's salvation. The system wanted them to hurt each other, but they joined forces to destroy the system. The most enjoyable part of this book is watching how Chu Linyuan and Shen Zheyu join forces to fight the system. The system thinks it can control everything, but it underestimates the human heart. Chu Linyuan would rather endure the pain of having his soul torn apart than kill Shen Zheyu as required by the system; but after Shen Zheyu discovered the truth, he directly awakened the bloodline of the Holy Son, broke into the core of the system, and tore a hole in its control. "You want my master to kill me? Then I'll kill you first!" This kind of two-way counter-attack is simply exciting to watch! Especially in the final battle, Chu Linyuan raised his sword to point at Shen Zheyu under the forced control of the system, but at the last moment the sword edge deflected and stabbed himself. But Shen Zheyu rushed forward without hesitation and blocked the sword with his body. When blood splashed on the master's face, Chu Linyuan finally regained his consciousness. ——"The system wants me to kill you, but I would rather kill myself." I really cried watching this part. Fate wants them to be against each other, but they insist on fighting side by side. Emotional line: from cautious to life and death. Their relationship was not love at first sight, but was slowly established through trials, struggles, and trust. Early stage: Chu Linyuan pretended to be a villain with a cold face, and Shen Zheyu cautiously tried to please her. Both of them were acting, but they couldn't help but feel soft-hearted. Mid-stage: Shen Zheyu discovered the master's secret and began to deliberately "make mistakes" to test. However, Chu Linyuan clearly saw through his little thoughts, but still cooperated with him in acting. Late stage: When the system was cornered and they finally tore off the disguise, Chu Linyuan said to Shen Zheyu before his consciousness collapsed: "If I lose control... Kill me." And Shen Zheyu replied: "No, I will save you, no matter how many times." This transformation from "mutual defense" to "life and death support" is really sweet and cruel! Summary: This is an ultimate redemption novel disguised as a "villain system". On the surface, this is a story about "the system forces Master to be a villain", but in fact, it tells the story of "even if fate wants me to hurt you, I just want to protect you". Chu Linyuan and Shen Zheyu, one is tolerant and gentle, the other is stubborn and persistent. They could have gone against each other according to the arrangement of the system, but they chose the most difficult path - to resist fate and work together to break the situation. (PS: In the extra story, there are stories about Master being jealous and the daily routine of raising a cub 🐶)

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The system's mandatory tasks are so cruel 😭