When a Hopeless Straight Guy Picks Up the Heartthrob Script

It's no surprise that it's so bad... I can only say that the structure of the article and the content are all excellent. But it can also be seen that the author was unable to do what he wanted in the end. It may be that his writing power was not enough, and the previous foreshadowing and character creation were completely wasted. I'm disappointed, but it's understandable. From beginning to end, I can feel that the later stages are out of control and even a bit watered down. At least it's over. Song Zhiyue, I can only say it is a pity.

I really don't understand why it stops here. In the first two chapters, new characters appeared, and their fate was not explained in detail. Song Zhiyue's life did not seem to have restarted and reached a new stage. The last time I got to the 120 mark, I thought I still had at least 500,000 words left to stock up on, but a few days later I found out that it was finished, and I collapsed for half the night. This time I continued to watch it, and the more I watched it, the more I thought, "I want to see where it ends and how it can end." The result was really so unexpected. It's hard to describe my mood. I can only say that Teacher, I don't seem to be feeling well. I have basically never followed a serial, especially one that I really like so much. Watching Song Zhiyue transform little by little, encounter adversity and rise again, shining brightly like polished jade, I watched Lezi Tu Yishuang from the beginning and was slowly affected by him. I shed tears for him when he accepted himself. After he had a dream, I really hoped that he could become a big star that everyone was looking forward to, and others could only look up to him. That was the best ending in my mind, although I understand that not everything goes as planned. But I thought that the worst ending would be to be unable to get rid of the shackles, or even Song Zhiyue's death, just like in the movie. But no matter what kind of ending it is, it is still far away from the current stage. There is a long, long way to go. I am still waiting to see more hopes in his life, to see his career really start, to see how his relatives and friends will one day smile with wanton happiness. Why did it end so suddenly? . . ? And the teacher didn't say there would be any extras. Even if it is true that the framework is too big and there are too many characters that cannot be rounded off and it becomes a dead end, can't we write a little extra to make the story more complete? This is an open ending, but it can only be regarded as beautification and respect. I feel like people who really follow updates every day will be quite surprised. It is the author's freedom how to write, but as a reader, you would like to see your favorite protagonist have a more complete life, so you can't help but type so many words. I still like Song Zhiyue and Wildfire very much. I feel very happy when I read his story. I hope there will be a sequel one day, and you will be better off by then, Song Zhiyue.

For Shou, this is the torture of life and the humiliation of him. He came from an ordinary person and suddenly became beautiful and had a personality like the blazing sun. So in order to get him, a bunch of second-generation dogs kept forcing him and hunting him in various ways. He just straightened up and made money. But those second-generation dogs hunted him and it was not enough. They also wanted to rape him together. Being strong was not enough. They also wanted to get him. In the final analysis, they were a group of despicable and shameless people. They looked like good people. In the final analysis, they did not think before and did not take action. In the later period, they were called heroes to save the beauty. I am forced to have no choice but to bend to him in order to repay my debt. This is just a rape story disguised as the plot of a novel. If it is not a novel, it is just a pile of garbage that should be sanctioned by the legal society. No one is worthy of living a life of hard work and improvement.

Can you write some extras? I really want to see him become more and more dazzling, but I also think it's good to stop here. The future has endless possibilities. Can you write a few more books like this? I really like the character of Wildfire. It's rare to see a heartthrob with such a personality. I've only seen this one. The other heartthrobs seem to be basically spoiled ones or straight men. Well, I'm not very interested in them. It just feels like he has no soul. After reading this book, I really felt that with my character and his appearance, this is the real heartthrob.

All I can say is that I'm a bit of a prophet. After reading the book the day before yesterday, I was a little worried that it would be unfinished: because several authors couldn't continue writing like this. As long as this book reaches the climax and ends with it, it will be perfect, but suddenly the main text is over [dog head]

Author, if your time allows, could you please improve this book a little more, because Song Zhiyue has not yet attended an acting cram school, has not won an award, has not yet become a real big star, and his emotional line has only developed to a period of prosperity. He has not yet sorted out his relationship with Mei Lai, and Mei Shaoyang. The protagonist's career, everything about the protagonist's relationship came to an abrupt end! You wrote this book very well, but it ended too suddenly. It could have been better. Let Song Zhiyue become a big star in your writing, and let your book end in the most natural way [biting handkerchief]

Please write a story about how Zhiyue will grow in a few years, and training dog will be the best.

The main reason is that you can't write R18, which makes the whole article neither good nor bad. There are too many review restrictions, and the article doesn't have the energy to provoke [biting handkerchief] [biting handkerchief] [biting handkerchief]

It feels like it's over without writing anything.

I knew it was going to end, but it's been over since I haven't watched it for several days? ? May I ask? When I read the previous article, I said I didn't know how the author would end it🈷️ I hated them so much that they couldn't accept them, and even if they didn't accept them, they would feel like the character was collapsing. Now, I don't want to end it at all, I just throw away the mess, and I don't have to worry about whether it fits the character or not. I feel like they haven't given up. Is this the end? ?