After Changing Her Fate, the Villainess and the Heroine Got Their Happy Ending!

Women can use disciple, disciple, disciple.

This is not a writing guide or any required writing advice. It is just about my personal reading experience. Please delete it if it disturbs you. The writing is very serious, and the wording and arrangement are also ancient and charming. It has the temperament of a fairy tale. However, when I read it myself, I always felt that it was a bit too straightforward? In the plot line, after taking the spiritual treasure, it was revealed that the two had a previous life, and they had to solve the problem of the jade slip, so they went to other places. The events were very dense but there was no suspense. It was like a task reminder for playing a game. It directly stated what to do next, and there was no strong sense of tension. Moreover, although the love line can be paved with the feelings of the past life, the senior sister suddenly became a little too good for the junior sister, and it seemed that it could only be explained by love at first sight. The above are just my personal feelings, please delete them if you are bothering me. I wish you will get better as you write more!

I feel that the title Master is more appropriate than Master

Oh my god, I tried again and again on the verge of recurrence of the cold poison [melted]

[Gotou] This ancient book is not here to harm Junior Sister Wen. It is obviously to give benefits.

This innate spiritual treasure is really cheating.

The author's story is really clear and not convoluted at all... But this may be why there is a spoiler tah

This direction really makes me happy.

It's easy to understand why senior sister has a good impression of junior sister if there is a relationship in her past life.

What a great opportunity... Su Tianyue is also a very selfless woman.