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Wang Jiangshan, a mentally ill man who died in a hospital in his previous life, is reborn as the second son of a wealthy commoner in an ancient cultivation world.
Not only does he have to cultivate in place of his deceased older brother, but he is also bound to a life-saving System.
The life-saving System works as follows:
1. At 10% health, attack power doubles.
2. In dangerous areas, the chance of landing a critical hit (150% attack power) increases.
3. At 1 health, evasion reaches 100%, attack power increases randomly, and defense becomes infinite.
Note: The System only displays the Host's health bar.
Wang Jiangshan thought it over.
Got it. This thing is for charging headfirst into danger.
The junior sister who stabbed someone is at the Cliff of Reflection? I'll take the job!
The Beast Forest where the junior brother lost his keepsake, the haunted house where the senior brother is trapped, the second senior brother who might have fallen into demonic cultivation, the third senior brother who seems half-demon, the fourth senior brother covered in blood...
To fake the destruction of his spiritual root and imminent death, then leave the sect and assume a new identity, Wang Jiangshan charges into a space-time rift and finds his missing master. He successfully passes himself off as a dying man whose spiritual root has been destroyed.
Wang Jiangshan: Yay! I'm about to die, so I can go back to being myself!
But...
His junior sister, a revered sword cultivator, looks at him with tears in her eyes: With me here, no one will dare bully you. I'll protect you from now on.
His junior brother, a master of time: Don't worry. I'll find a way to cure you.
His senior brother, Lord of Ten Thousand Ghosts, gives him a gentle look: You can play with these ghosts. I'll take care of you.
His second senior brother, leader of the Demon Realm, grips his blade: If anyone dares kick you out, I'll be the first to charge in and smash them.
His third senior brother, the newly appointed Demon King: At worst, you can come live in the Demon Realm. I can afford to support one mere human.
His fourth senior brother, ancestor of the Human Kings, smiles: I can give you all the wealth and splendor in the world. Just enjoy yourself and don't worry about anything.
His master, looking kindly at him: Disciple, drink your medicine.
The cultivation world praises him to the skies, and cultivators nominate him as the new Immortal Venerable. No one dares challenge him.
Wang Jiangshan, who only wants to die soon and change his secret identity: "..."
Aaaah!
I'll jump into a space-time rift right now. From now on, I won't know anyone who recognizes me!
#They all want me to become the Immortal Venerable, but I want to die#
Coming soon:
The System binds itself to Long Yuansheng, who learns that...
He lives in the manga Crime City, which has been left unfinished.
It's a world of freedom. Mages hide in every street and alley, monsters roam everywhere, factories spew pollution, and beggars and machines are the two most common forms of life.
System: Long ago, this city flourished.
[Please rebuild order, Savior.]
Long Yuansheng accepts the mission.
He will set the world right as a manga character.
Forum:
[The gloomy, jaded boss of this street is a tsundere with a cold face and a warm heart. He's got a strange secret.]
[Turns out he's a rich young master, too. That's a standard friend for the protagonist. He's definitely not going to die.]
[He died.]
[I take it back. Now it's even easier to drag him out and whip his corpse over and over. I see him everywhere now. I'm sobbing.]
[It's so interesting. He hates everyone and the whole world, but he doesn't hate hope.]
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I would like to ask, how do you feel when reading the article with other people? When I watched it, I felt very confused and confused. Most of them were talking without saying what they were doing. The plot feels a bit lacking, etc. It's very confusing. I can't see the words clearly. It's very confusing. I can't describe the chaotic feeling. Of course, this is my own feeling, so I just want to ask. (If you feel bad, just tell me and I will delete it.)
After seeing this, I feel that the plot setting is really good. It's just that the transitions are neat and tidy without regard for the life and death of the reader. The description of the scene is very vivid and detailed, and the imagination is a little hard to follow. There is not much psychological description of the supporting characters and the protagonist. It has a bit of a psychotic horror game feel, but it is not scary. Anyway, I didn't watch it with my brain too much, but it was still quite enjoyable.
It's different from what I imagined. Everyone's mental state is beautiful.
The biggest advantage is that it's free, and to be honest, the jokes are quite interesting, but... The writing and character creation are very average, and at best it's frigid, it's actually a bit sluggish. [Hold your chin] There is no climax, no small peaks, and no big peaks. The characters are not nervous, and the readers are not nervous. It focuses on a sense of relaxation. It reads like an elastic band that has lost its elasticity. The protagonist is like an NPC from an RPG game or a robot NPC. Sorry, I may have gone too far, but I think the author could have written better! I don't think there's much of a problem with the plot and characters. I just need to change the writing style.
I feel that the writing is a bit sloppy, the character creation is also a bit abrupt, and many things are not explained, such as why I want to think about Junior Sister Siguoya, can't I come out on my own? Is it because someone needs to check the access control or something else that requires someone to pick up the door? And what kind of sect is this? Is it big or small? Since there is an issue of seniority, why is everyone called Junior Sister? Are they all studying under the same master?
In just seven chapters, the protagonist's health has reached 1 three times, and there is no red medicine in the game. Can a medicine in the foundation-building stage of the Immortal Realm bring people back to life? Hahahahahaha
When I read this article, I always feel weird. Everyone is weird. It's an indescribable weird feeling.
The character design of Spring Bringing Rain seems a bit weird?? I can't tell what's so strange about it 🤔
When I got here, I was actually a little confused. What kind of background is it? I don't feel like cultivating immortality. The difference in combat power is not obvious. The main reason is that I don't feel happy, knowing that I am seriously injured and then leave the sect. It seems that he wants to change his identity and come back. Then the protagonist can only join the sect if he feels like the ghost that the senior brother can't defeat, right? Although I know that the protagonist will definitely cheat, the senior brother is too unsatisfied, and I feel like this.
I want the protagonist to kill more people. Anyway, I don't care about life and death. If you don't accept it, just do it.