Junior Sister, Come Here

Sorry, I wanted to say something at the end. I originally wanted to say it when the main text was finished and the extra chapter was finished, but I didn't write it after thinking about it. I'll add it now. As you all have seen, I was just a little transparent novice before, and I didn't write about popular subjects. I loved group portraits and doing big things (now I realize that I can't do big things, and the bigger I do, the bigger I am). I didn't expect to get so much attention and love. I was under huge pressure, and I was even more incapable of finishing the post. I stayed up late every day to the point where I almost became a fairy. I sent out less than half of what I had written, and I repeatedly deleted more. I am not defending myself, I just want to tell the readers who have read to the end that I did not treat my story perfunctorily, and I did not treat you perfunctorily. This is the ending I had planned for a long time, and I wrote it carefully according to the outline. However, my ability is indeed limited. The more I try to cover everything, the more stretched I am. I cannot wrap up the ending better, and I stand upright and get scolded. Thank you to the readers who left comments to encourage me, to the readers who wrote me serious suggestions, and to every reader who read to the end and felt that this story brought you happiness. Thank you for your tolerance and love, I will continue to work hard to improve.

Contains spoilers, read with caution! It took me two days to finally read it, and I found another good article. The plot line and emotional line are well developed, and the characters are very distinct. There is no cookie-cutter feeling. I am so excited that I plan to write about my feelings about the following characters. Yunruo and Bailiye: The fallen pride of heaven, the stand-in who was abused physically and mentally, what a "Jinjiang-style" experience and identity. At first, I thought it was another cool story about the heroine being reborn to take revenge and abuse the scumbag, but the author is very realistic. The heroine has been an orphan in a foster family since she was a child. She has been alienated and has low self-esteem and has grown up independently. The three years of time-travel may seem glamorous, but in fact she is also a slave. She was deceived, and it was reasonable to be afraid of the murderer who had tortured her for 13 years. Therefore, it was difficult for her to be heart-to-heart in the early stage of her rebirth. She was not obsessed with revenge because she had no power, power or strength. Even if she was talented, she could not jump over the level and hit people. If the person named Guan wanted to destroy her spiritual veins, he would have succeeded long ago if it were not for her special body. Let's talk about the male protagonist. He chose to save his younger brother but fell from the altar. He chose to leave the family, choose to join the Xianyun Sect, and choose to repair weapons. He took every step without regrets. Even if he could not regain his strength later, he would accept it calmly. Geng Sangruo and Sect Master Xie: The legendary "White Moonlight" should be said to be the "canary" in the cage. She is favored by thousands of people and is unruly and willful, but she is also simple and brave. When someone is in danger, she helps her and the heroine saves her. She also always wants to repay her. She is also lonely. She longs for friends, longs to be strong, and longs to help her brothers and masters, but no one teaches her these. When I thought she would slowly have friends, slowly When Shou Huo betrayed herself, things broke out, and she chose to commit suicide bravely. She was innocent and unaware, but everything happened because of her. Her whole life has been living in a cage inlaid with gold and jade built by her father. Her time to be clear was only a short period of sixteen or seventeen years. An innocent and ignorant girl, Yun Ruo lived in the cage for three years and finally escaped, but she was trapped for the rest of her life. Zha Xie seems to be doting on his daughter, but in fact he treats her like a puppet that he can control in his hands. It sounds nice to continue the Geng Sang family, but if it is really successful, it is hard to say that Geng Sang Ruo will not become a tool to continue the incense. He is a paranoid and pure madman. Three scumbag brothers: Pure scum, no innocence, the eldest brother seems to have a good conscience, but not much, the second child is crazy and a copy of the scumbag, and the third child lives in a muddle. Rather than saying that they love the heroine, it is better to say that they regard the heroine as their former possession and want to re-possess it. Teachers, everyone in the academy: The best thing about this article is their group portraits. The people in the heroine's disciples have all encountered setbacks and injustice, but they have all come out on their own. It is not the heroine who saves them, but they themselves save themselves. In the academy, too, there isn't much intrigue. Even if there are conflicts with the heroine, they all have a view of the overall situation. When danger comes, they all use their strength, courage, and determination. Cultivators and ordinary people, people with high talents and people with low talents, parents and children in native families, large sects and small sects... This article actually talks about a lot of unfair treatment in the world, and various conflicts between all parties, but as the heroine said in the ending, some people are depressed, and some people are reborn in Nirvana. No one can decide whose fate. Isn't the operation of the PS villain the infinite Tsukuyomi? It really makes me dream about being Hokage, but unfortunately I feel that the philosophy is not deep enough for Uchiha.

It's okay, it's written with great care, and it's a good group drama. Later in the plot, I always felt that the climax was not pushed forward and I was holding back my energy. The emotional line is average, but it is particularly ugly after the love is determined.

I felt a sense of anger after reading this extra story. . The villain in the main story died very casually, and some even survived without paying the price. In the extra story, they can actually make dumplings together...? Even if we don't write about these people? Why did I hate them so much before...?

It's a very gentle and open-minded story. I love the group portraits. The last chapter of the extra chapter is so beautiful. Keep up the good work, author!

[Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Purple candy] kswl

Second brush, everyone should be happy, I like group portraits so much 😭

Come on, I really didn't write it well in the early stage. The middle and later stages are more exciting, and the ending is a bit rushed, but you can see the care and attention. I hope the next book can improve [][][]

Oh, it was actually completed last year. Didn't the author continue to write a new book? Ah? Ah?

Nice! The plot is exciting!