Imprisoned on Spring Mountain

In fact, I personally think that the author wrote very implicitly that the emperor had guessed about the male protagonist. He is his son, so he has no fear of the male protagonist. I remember the emperor said that the male protagonist The main character is like the former queen, because he used it when he saved the heroine. This There is a huge buq in this article. The male protagonist never had his face disfigured when he was a child. The male protagonist was about eight or nine years old when he was executed by the whole family, but he was rescued by the eldest princess. I was eleven or twelve years old when I went there. How could a man be ten years old in just two or three years? Eight changes? The emperor actually did not recognize his son. From what the author wrote Judging from the messy writing style, I overestimated the author's level. I don't even understand that she used the technique of leaving blank space to write the ending of the novel. Blank spaces are left in some important parts, such as the story of the eldest princess's husband who was saved by How did the eldest princess recognize the male protagonist after she was a child? The male protagonist was raised by her regardless of the blood feud, and the female protagonist was sold as a child. How did you manage to stay safe after entering a brothel, and then be released to the countryside by the Qi family? Why can I still study medicine after raising a child? How do I get along with the imperial physician? I don't know how the Ansong family designed to frame the Pei family back then. It's written clearly, and one thing I think is outrageous is that the heroine's mother wrote As the legitimate daughter of a famous family and the most beautiful woman, she actually becomes a concubine. The heroine How did the mother end up with the heroine's father? Judging from the beginning, The heroine's father is not a good person. This article is actually written by the author. Coenzyme's main male protagonist story is written by the male protagonist, and his character design is that of a murderer with a ghost face. The unblinking general and the elegant bamboo scholar as beautiful as a woman Students, and the Golden Finger, the male protagonist actually knows that the second prince belongs to TJ, I think only the female protagonist's teacher and the female protagonist know about the ending, and the male protagonist How did you know? The author didn't write it at all. There are many scenes. Male Like a savior who descends to earth, the Lord always appears when the heroine is in trouble, and the hero How on earth did a general who had been fighting in northern Xinjiang for many years achieve success in Shangjing? He knows everything. It opens the male protagonist's eyes to many things. I can't even connect, it gives too much halo to the male protagonist. If this book were a movie or TV Transformation, proper male protagonist, I feel that the author is not suitable for writing ancient novels, there are Some of the dialogues seem to be spoken in modern times, and the writing style needs to be improved. In fact, I I feel like this article shouldn't be so short. The author really didn't write about a lot of things. Clear and confused.

Finally finished reading it! The story has a large framework and a long time span. It is indeed not easy to write it well, but it is amazing to be able to finish it and express it. A little bit of the reader's perception, the whole story is poorly written when Xie knows that Bai Shang is his enemy's daughter, and the feeling of both love and hate is not enough. I think one reason is that the scene of rescuing people from the fire lacks the description of Xie, and I hate him before I realize it. The other reason is that there is not enough foreshadowing before Bai Shang's mother indirectly caused the murder of Queen Pei, so there is not enough conflict in the scene of rescuing people from the fire, but it may also be because I am not reading carefully now. Another point is that there is a little less description of the heroine's medical practice, and later on she is the wet nurse who saves the hero. In addition, I always feel that the concentration of love and hate in their rivalry scenes is not enough.

I don't know how to put it, but some of the plot connections are a bit hasty and abrupt. I was attracted by the copywriting.

It's better not to write ancient sayings, you'll regret reading them.

There are a few other points that I don't understand. Before the heroine didn't know that the hero was a child she rescued when she was a child, the author described that the heroine thought that the hero was a girl when she was a child, but later after recognizing the hero, she inexplicably turned into a boy and a little lion? It's contradictory! From the previous point of view of the heroine's recollection, the heroine did not have love for the hero when she was a child, but later in the extra chapter it is said that the heroine liked the hero when she was a child, which is outrageous [Lemon] In the last chapter written by the author, the hero was rescued by the heroine when he was a child, and he fell in love with the heroine. As a result, it seems that the hero has been unrequitedly in love with the heroine, and the heroine fell in love with him later. I feel that the author really did not write the heroine well.

I hope Yaoyao and Ayu will be happy forever [crying]

I wish you a long and prosperous banquet with white merchants

After watching it, I checked in. The overall tone is sour and tugging~

So pretty, hehehe

The logic is really bad. . . .