Telling Emperor Wu of Han About My Idol, Huo Qubing

The follow-up article "Historical Figures' Modern Life Is Not Quite Right" has been published. Please support me!

The author is great. When I was reading Tomato, I found a chapter in a novel that had a strong sense of déjà vu. The protagonist also asked Brother Zheng to write an edict, and also asked Xiao Huo to call people, but he called her sister. The book was called History Live Spoiler of the History of Zhu Dynasty. It is in the ninth chapter. I don't dare to draw a conclusion. Can the author and interested sisters go and check it out to make sure what's going on?

After reading it, finish spreading flowers. Although it was a bit dreamy in some places, it was understandable, and I was mentally prepared when I started watching it. Overall it's remarkable, and a lot of effort has been put into the history [Come on]

Overall, it's okay, and the writing is readable. However, it seems that this is the author's first book, and his writing style still has room for improvement. When introducing the achievements, the writing is very flat. What should make the readers happy and proud of the historical figures is not reflected very much. Emotionally, I always feel that the story is over without getting up. The whole article is likely to make readers emotionally fluctuate mainly because of the Anshi Rebellion and the Jingnan War. After reading the whole article, I remember that I was constantly angry and very proud. The control of the plot can also be reconsidered. It is said that the story of Dream Girl Flying is only limited to the beginning, and there is no plot of dragons, phoenixes, and pigs in the end, so it is better not to omit this paragraph, at least the beginning will not drive away so many readers. Maybe because I just started writing, I feel like my writing is a bit fast. I hit here and there with a hammer and a stick, and wrote wherever I thought, causing the plot to jump from one paragraph to the next emperor, and finally circle back to the original paragraph in the next chapter.

Because I haven't watched fate, So the extra is from the Fate series, so I'm not very interested in it.

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Congratulations on the completion. I think the author's writing is really great. It mainly made me feel uncomfortable in the comment section of the fate episode. I saw some people saying they couldn't understand it and I can understand it. But I saw some people just said that they went to Baidu to understand one-sided Shi Huang. After looking at the character pictures and settings, they said that he was emmm. The Millennium Second Disease is actually quite uncomfortable. The Shi Huang in Lostbelt is really super, super, super good QAQ. Congratulations to the author for finishing Da Da. I also look forward to the author's next work. Come on.

"Until" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ know

Spread the flowers, congratulations on the completion, it's beautifully written.

Finished spreading flowers! Looking forward to new articles