Upcoming novel: "Indulging in Delusions"
Blurb
Princess Jinling Pei Ziqu was the only princess in the palace. From childhood, she was doted on by the emperor and cherished by her elder brothers, and had never suffered the slightest grievance.
Xue Yi was the new top graduate of the palace examinations, aloof and upright. When Pei Ziqu first saw him as a child, she fell for him at first sight.
At a banquet, an unfortunate twist of fate led the two into an unexpected encounter, and the emperor had no choice but to decree their marriage.
After the wedding, Pei Ziqu knew she was in the wrong, so she worked hard to learn how to cook and make soup, how to show respect to her elders, and every possible way to bring the two of them closer. But the truth was that Xue Yi remained cold and distant.
A year later, a lovely woman appeared. Only then did Pei Ziqu learn that Xue Yi had a woman in his heart, his white moonlight. He spoke to her gently and even took her side time and again.
The third time trouble arose, Pei Ziqu couldn't take it anymore. When Xue Yi came to her bed of his own accord, she wrote a divorce letter and threw it in his face.
"From this day on, I want nothing more to do with you."
Xue Yi had become famous at a young age. He was talented and proud, but had been framed and forced by the imperial family to become a prince consort. Pei Ziqu had also treated him as a substitute for Ji Chen, and he had long kept his resentment bottled up.
He knew he was only a substitute for Ji Chen. Day after day, he acted as her subject, giving her anything she wanted except his heart. Yet when she threw the divorce letter in his face, his heart panicked.
She flirted with him every day, trying every trick in the book, and he thought it was only his body responding. In truth, his heart had fallen for her.
A few days later, the neighbors said that Princess Jinling was recruiting male companions, and there were so many talented young men signing up that they could circle the city thirteen times.
When he rushed to the princess's residence, Pei Ziqu was surrounded by a crowd of handsome men. They served her tea, played the zither, recited poetry, and vied to make her happy. The scene was lively in the extreme.
At that moment, Xue Yi felt as though something in his chest was about to explode.
A charming, flirtatious princess X a cold, secretly passionate top graduate
*The male lead never loved the second female lead. Marriage before love, both are virgins, one-on-one romance.*
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Blurb for "Indulging in Delusions":
When Xiao Nian was six, her father brought home a boy, saying he had found him on the road. Her mother didn't believe him and insisted the boy was her father's illegitimate son.
So Xiao Nian made trouble for Xiao Fufeng every day. She called him a "beggar," tore his clothes, and ripped up his books. But Xiao Fufeng ignored her from beginning to end.
As she grew older and began to understand love, Xiao Nian took even greater pleasure in tormenting Xiao Fufeng. Then she learned that he wasn't her father's illegitimate son and really had been picked up on the road. She began making things difficult for him just to see him lose his composure and look miserable.
When she was sixteen, she married the noble young master of the imperial capital to whom she had been promised since birth, while Xiao Fufeng was reclaimed by his birth parents.
Not long after, Xiao Nian's parents died, and disaster struck her husband's family, leaving her with nowhere to go. By chance, Xiao Fufeng had become a high-ranking official in the imperial capital. Remembering their old bond, he took her in.
She was beautiful and had no blood relation to Xiao Fufeng. His sister-in-law disliked her, both openly and behind her back, and schemed to drive her out of the household. Xiao Nian feared Xiao Fufeng would listen to his sister-in-law, feared having nowhere else to go, and feared her husband's creditors would come after her for money. So every day she played the part of a good little sister, often pretending to be sick and helpless to win her elder brother's pity.
After living there for a while, Xiao Nian discovered something: her sister-in-law was having an affair, and the relationship between her brother and sister-in-law was distant. It suited her perfectly.
Theme: Take the initiative, and a story will unfold
The princess's mental state is not normal. Please adjust it quickly. There is no need for a good princess to go crazy all day long for a man...
Why would the heroine, a princess, have to wade into this muddy water? Don't you think it's embarrassing??? Do you think your life is too good? On the surface, this princess has a sense of superiority, but in fact, she is on the same level as the female partner, or even inferior to her. The emperor and queen don't know how to raise a daughter. She only gives material things and does not pay attention to spiritual feelings. How about raising pets?
This guy surnamed Ji is so disgusting. You are a turtle and still claim to be a princess, Bai Yueguang. You deserve a daddy, a common man.
To be a princess, this is too despicable. . . . .
A princess is willing to be humbled. What does a princess want? All she can say is that she deserves it.
The male protagonist really has no sense of boundaries. . . You deserve to chase your wife
First of all, Lai Jia: I only express my personal feelings after reading it. I have given up and I am only commenting to be worthy of my own eyes. I have no idea how important I am that I should let you know when I abandon the article. If there are readers who like it, you are welcome to comment. There is no need to use extreme language to suspect that I have selfish motives (Lai Jia is for the author and some glass-hearted readers. Anyway, let's talk about it first, in case someone really breaks my guard). Okay, let's talk about the point of abandoning the article and put a simplified version here: Fragmented character + weak male protagonist + welcome when you refuse =he First, let's look at the setting of the novel (I only bought the first 32 chapters, so I'm only talking about the part I bought): 1. The female protagonist is the emperor's only daughter (clearly doted on in Chapter 24) and has a savage personality (drunk and forced in Chapter 9, positive and side descriptions of people's discussions in Chapter 27). She has power and money but has no bottom line to please the male protagonist's family (the main character is humble, but you said she can send someone to tie up the male protagonist himself, but not the male protagonist's family (the last page of Chapter 8)), The hero's mother expects the heroine to pay and the heroine never cares (you don't have to care, since the heroine has money anyway), the hero's eldest brother is obsessed with gambling and expects the heroine to pay, and the heroine doesn't say anything (at this time, the heroine seems to be a thousand-year-old bastard who is rich and silent), the hero's second brother died early and left behind a second sister-in-law, Bai Lianhua, who liked the hero, and there is no good person in the whole family. Is the male protagonist's family setting reasonable? Of course it is possible, but it happens that this female protagonist takes the route of being domineering but humble to the male protagonist. She is domineering and humble to the male protagonist's family (serving tea, water, supper, and coaxing people can also be humble to the male protagonist, but there are also times when she is energetic and aggressive towards the male protagonist, so Overall, she is more humble towards the male protagonist's family (after all, I have never been angry with the male protagonist's family). It can be explained by not caring, but the interesting thing is that when I spend money, I don't care 100%, but when it's my turn to tell the male protagonist it's my turn, I only have 75% that I don't care, right? 2. The male protagonist discovers that the second sister-in-law secretly made similar sachets for the female protagonist to see and slandered the female protagonist for promoting her, and reasonably infers that the other incident where the female protagonist was wronged was also deliberately done by her. The male protagonist finally came to the conclusion that he should not tell his good friend Bai Lianhua that Bai Lianhua is Bai Lianhua. "If Ruan Suwen stopped thinking, he would still be happy to see them both good." (30 Chapters 37.1%) What's the difference between this and the old thinking of "I'm doing it for your own good" and "he won't offend you next time and you two can live a good life"? Isn't this just taking things for granted? As of Chapter 32, the male lead, the male protagonist's good friend, has a clear distinction between liking Bai Lianhua and dating the male protagonist. It is helpful but does not favor or anger the male protagonist for Bai Lianhua. The male protagonist is angry and seeks out the male protagonist for discussion. The male protagonist seeks advice from the male protagonist on emotional issues. It is the male protagonist's turn to have problems with the person he likes - "I want them to be together." The brotherly love is so touching. The male protagonist does not feel that Bai Lianhua should be responsible for what she has done, nor does he feel that his brother has the right to know and choose. Then there is the part that the author thinks (this part was specially brought out after I read the comments and laughed at it after I abandoned the article): 1. "The male protagonist did not ignore his family members, and the female protagonist also punished her second sister-in-law when she was wronged." =Bai Lianhua was caught stealing the heroine's clothes. The heroine tested the hero's attitude and asked him how to deal with it. The hero said that he would pay for the clothes in the ancestral hall for one day, but the money for the clothes was paid by the hero on his own initiative (that is, he would only kneel in the ancestral hall for one day) (Chapter 23, 59.3%) The female protagonist is a princess, but the male protagonist keeps saying that there is a difference between king and subject (he has always called himself a minister after getting married) and then blatantly sided with Bai Lianhua. He only had kindness and medicine in his heart and never thought of the female protagonist's late night snacks and care (I don't believe that the female protagonist didn't take care of her when the male protagonist was sick. Unless the male protagonist never got sick afterwards, then it would make sense). All this happened without the female protagonist having any fault at all. I have never seen it. I have lived with such a selfish male protagonist (I opened my eyes today), and the debt he incurred was repaid by the female protagonist. Not to mention that he stole the princess's clothes, even if it was an ordinary civil dispute, the ancient theft crime would have been punished more severely (ah, after all, if stealing is not illegal in this garbage dynasty, I didn't say it), and in the entire chapter 23, Bai Lianhua did not apologize after making a mistake, only quibble, and no one asked her to apologize. 2. "The male protagonist misunderstands the female protagonist because the male protagonist is biased against the female protagonist. It will be fine if the misunderstanding is resolved." Wake up, the male protagonist is at fault. The way the two reconciled was that the heroine lost her memory and forgot about the hero (the heroine's brother, after learning that the heroine was emotionally injured and wanted to divorce her husband, gave the heroine Qianriwang (a medicine that lasted for 100 days) to encourage the heroine to take. The reason was "My sister is suffering too much and I want to punish the hero" (96.3% In Chapter 25)), and after the drug restores memory, the previous profound memories will be blurred. Is this a way to torture the male protagonist? Originally, the female protagonist remembered the male protagonist's indifference and remembered being abandoned (the male protagonist favored Bai Lianhua, which meant abandoning the female protagonist). She remembered being disappointed again and again. After forgetting, she only heard about it from others, without the immersive feeling of starting from the beginning. Isn't this exactly the easy mode? 3. "There are other follow-up operations for the male protagonist of the family, but the most important thing is the female protagonist, so we will wait until we catch up." I don't need to refute such rubbish views by cultivating one's family, governing the country, and bringing peace to the world. I just want to say that when building a house, whether it is a hut or a bungalow or a high-rise building, the most important thing is the foundation. It seems that the author's understanding of the foundation is that the male and female protagonists are together. This is a matter of philosophy. I will not evaluate it, only describe it. All the above points are appended with chapter numbers to make it easier to find the original text. The only purpose is to avoid the scapegoat of "taking quotes out of context and embarrassing them". Let me say it again, I really won't read and post this again, and it's not because I regard myself as a character, so I abandon the article and have to tell the author. When I retell the plot of this article to a friend, he knelt down and begged me to stop talking and let me not pollute his novel world. I only commented because I spent money to buy 32 chapters. I also only commented on the content that I was qualified to comment on. There is nothing extra, so don't mess with it. As for why I started complaining after buying only such a small amount, it's because the author has only updated to Chapter 37, and I feel that I bought a bad egg and don't need to finish it all before commenting. Of course I could have changed the book to read, but compared with being silently quitting and being scolded "You can do it, you can do it" and "If you want to read it, don't leave it", I am not willing to remain silent.
Throw flowers!!! Very good! By the way, I don't like Pei's family very much, they are so snobbish. . .
There is no need for this dignified princess to lick like this...
I feel like I might as well change the male protagonist, this... Is really... Hard to describe...