My Days of Rebellion in the Northern Song

Here are some pre-receipt articles. Receive an advance notice of the career story of the iron-blooded heroine "The Female Duke of the Ming Dynasty (Imperial Examination)". Pre-release Part 2 "(Clear Wear) If you don't close the network, I will become the queen!" A light-hearted story with a mixed emotional plot. The pre-collection of three units of "(Liao Zhai) Real People in Suits" is more focused on fantasy novels. There should be two books published this year. If you like the little angel, you can click to collect it_(:з∠)_

It's an honor to read! The plot is very interesting, and the Water Margin and the Song Dynasty are well combined with the conflicts in troubled times. However, overall, the writing style and writing power are somewhat limited. The emotional line is rather abrupt (Hua Rong's early portrayal was okay, but as to why he suddenly became gay and fell in love with the heroine) I was secretly happy after knowing the true gender of the heroine. In fact, I could have arranged two or three plot points earlier to describe the emotional changes...), And the character creation was not three-dimensional enough (every character who appeared did not have a beginning and an end. The one with the longest character line is Lao Wen) , it describes everything from the free and easy time when they first met the heroine to the heroine's self-reflection after becoming emperor, but there are no specific memory points for her family background, personality, and behavior settings. Wu Song and Wu Dalang, who appeared first, were very good characters, but they did not appear in the later period). However, my wife's deduction of the various forces in the Liao, Song and Jin Dynasties and her arrangement of the characters in the original Water Margin are very good! Suggestion: The next time you write a similar article, you can set an "inner driving force" for the heroine at the beginning, that is, what makes her "definitely" intertwined with the fate of those characters. Suppose, as an ordinary person in a peaceful world, why did the heroine help Wu Dalang when she was unable to decide her own destiny? It could be because Wu Dalang once helped her, which triggered her "justice must be repaid"; or she just hoped that Wu Song could help her escape from her current fate of being a slave, which triggered her "all kinds of calculations for freedom". When she came to Tokyo, she encountered the next problem, which also triggered her "trigger for action", prompting her to integrate step by step into the society of the Northern Song Dynasty, change her own thinking, and finally ascend to the throne step by step. (A few writing tips, not criticism and suggestions!!) Overall, this article is a good overview. I hope my wife's writing will get better and better!

I thought it was a bit outrageous to watch Free Love at first, but when I saw it at the end, it was a critical blow. This kind of memory killing was so shocking that I burst into tears???

It feels so frustrating to write this article, what are you doing keeping these bastards? Will he come back and continue to bully women and cause trouble for the heroine? Should we continue to give up the throne of the heroine to them and continue to dominate?

Fortunately, it is finished. I can post to more forums, write some extras about the history teacher's lectures, write some personal records of ancient civil servants, the secret diary of my daughter later, comments or conversations about the emperor from officials in history such as Li Qingzhao, and praises of admiration for her from famous officials in later generations, etc. Come on, Ollie

Hahahahahaha thief ancestor

The two old men are dead, I feel happy

Take these two people back to deal with it, and you will get angry just looking at it.

Very nice! ! ! There are very few stories that I can follow to the end. When I saw everyone leaving one by one at the end, and only the heroine was left watching them leave, I couldn't help but want to cry [poor] [poor] [poor] It's so beautiful.

Awesome literature hahahahaha