Heartwarming

The writing of this article is very good, and the characters are also very good. I like Ah Chu's cute, cheerful and lively character, and I also like Jin Jin's quiet and restrained nature. The bad thing is that they are separated and the behavior of their parents is very strange and there is no reason for the same. I don't understand Jin Jin's father's punishment of kneeling. If he wants to humiliate Jin's self-esteem, but he has made Jin kneel for so many years, he should know that it is useless. It is said that he loves face, but he makes Jin every Nian's kneeling appearance will be seen by his relatives. He doesn't care about Jin, but he wants to hurt him. What he does is even more excessive than his wife's, but his humiliation does not seem to have any impact or change on Jin. Maybe the behavior of this family is just to bring out the beauty of Ning. This is also understandable. Ning is indeed beautiful, the real Bai Yueguang. I also like Ning's character very much, but I don't understand the behavior of Ning's family. Ning's mother Just discovering the love letter triggered a series of actions that followed. It was very inexplicable and strange. The suffering that Ning suffered felt like he was just suffering, just to add twists and turns to the protagonist's life. In my opinion, it was completely unnecessary. Why did Ning suffer from this? What did he gain from suffering from this? His mother was fat and what did he gain from suffering from this? What role did Ning's father and his wife play in it? It felt like this plot suddenly appeared, There is no need, no beginning and no end. Why did Ning's mother become addicted to drugs? All the suffering seems to be just to make Ning suffer. It is meaningless. It neither advances the plot nor deepens the protagonist's relationship, nor makes the protagonist stronger. After he endured the suffering, he did not get the promise given to his mother by the Ning family. The two families who gave them suffering in the later period felt directly invisible and there was no follow-up. Is the property given to Ning by his brother enough? Is it enough to punish those who bully Ning on campus and quit the same school? The really guilty person was not punished at all. It was too superficial. Even Gong's brother was not punished by him. It made me feel that Gong had too little temper. It could be said that it was Shou Zai who made him restrain himself. From the moment Gong got to the company and could sit still, it was clear that Gong was not a person to be bullied, but he did nothing. In the end, the person who had been hurt so much did not suffer any retaliation. It made me feel like anyone could bully them. Maybe. My brother accepted the shares, but it was his initiative, not the protagonist's revenge. The opportunity to conquer the company was actually his half-brother who was paralyzed by an accident and married someone else. Although I married the same girl, the first explanation was because the girl's family did not agree, but in the end her mother agreed. I have read quite a few of the author's articles, and they are still suitable for writing sweet articles. I have finished reading this article because I trust the author's writing style. I like the protagonist's character very much. I think the extra story should be the right direction for this article. I understand what the author wants to try, but we must also consider whether the plot is suitable and whether it can make the article better. Like You Hug Me The skin hunger syndrome of Shou below is very good, and its appearance has an effect, but the mental illness of Shou in this article does not seem to have any effect. It seems to solve the misunderstanding of the protagonist, but this misunderstanding itself is unnecessary. This misunderstanding is artificially generated, not a natural development of the plot, and it is a bit sadistic. I still prefer the author's sweet articles. I have been wanting to read several of the author's pre-released books for a long time. I am not saying that the author is not good, but I hope that DaDa will get better and better and get more support. I read a lot of reviews, especially when I saw the part where Ning was bullied in a foreign school. There were many comments, some of which I think are really reasonable. Why arrange this part? Ning is already miserable, so there is no need to make it worse. What is this paragraph trying to illustrate? Does it cause Gong to feel distressed? It's completely unnecessary. I always feel that the extras only show the author's true level and the real development of the story. All in all, I look forward to the author's next article

If Ning Chu had not been forced to go abroad at that time, happiness would have arrived long ago... Crying to death, who knows how to cry in oral lessons?

Before I clicked to read it, I was thinking about how cruel a sweet essay could be.

It's beautiful, but it's too bitter. Isn't it a sweet article? I peed my eyes 😭 😭 😭

"How could I not trust you because of Shen Cuicui?" "If I hadn't given up then and found you earlier..." "Today" "No need" I don't blame you, it's not your fault. Because of you, I was able to go where I am today, and I was able to survive those days and nights before I could come back to you. Such a deep feeling of powerlessness Why is this world so messy? He is no longer an innocent child

After reading the comments and explaining the plot of "Fairy Tale" to the author, I went to other websites to browse... And found that I couldn't accept it? I like the author's sweet story from beginning to end. It can make people feel warm after reading it, so I think I will be sad after reading such a touching plot? Mark it, I hope it is not sweet~

Depression is very painful. Fortunately, you are cured.

Who harmed me? Who said that this author only writes sweet articles... I'm going to cry my eyes out...!!! [Changed]

I was deceived by the word "fairy tale" and my eyes were swollen this morning.

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