Being an XP Farm for Three Male Leads at Once

Finished spreading flowers! Now that you've read it, let me share my thoughts. In fact, this article felt really difficult to write. The author's writing style made me feel very... Well, subtle. First of all, the compatibility between sand sculpture and seriousness is pretty good. Generally speaking, it is really difficult to adapt the style of sand sculpture writing to serious themes. I have read a lot of sand sculpture writing, and most women are more comfortable with daily writing. Many of them are just jokes accidentally written too much, some are good and some are bad. A more typical example is the article written by Mrs. Mahuzijun. The personal style is very obvious, it is very funny and silly, but looking back, the plot is a bit watery. Several consecutive chapters are full of interactive jokes, and the emotional line is slow and the plot progress is slow. I feel that my wife's article is biased towards nonsense, but the plot does not have the common problem of writers writing nonsense, so I suggest that the direction of the subsequent articles can also be more plot-oriented (meaning that the subject matter is criminal investigation, supernatural, infinite flow, etc.) (If you want to write these themes well, the challenge will be greater, but the response and reward will be higher) But in fact, I also found that some of the foreshadowings or other things the author buried in the early stage were useless, or that the ending was too hasty. For example, in the career line of Shou, it was foreshadowed that Shou has a high temperament and talent in cultivating immortals and practicing talismans, that the four spiritual roots have elixirs to cleanse the spiritual roots, that he can enter the inner gate after practicing for a period of time, etc. So I always thought that this must be the foreshadowing for Shou to be slapped in the face by ignorant passers-by and blow up the whole place. As a result, until the end, Shou was still in the foundation building period, still with the four spiritual roots, and still an outer sect disciple. Including the "escape talisman" that I remember in the secret realm at that time. Logically speaking, it should also be a wave of cool points and small highlights, allowing Shou Zai to dominate the peak of the talisman, but that section was also scrawled. It feels like some details were given up for the sake of the outline. There are also general directions, such as why Tan Jiu is willing to sign a contract with the human world (didn't it mean that the demons are much stronger? And the last time the two sides met was when Tan Jiu dropped his fucking proposal token and was scolded by his mother in a loud voice like a bitch) The emotional line... Is really hard to describe (not in a derogatory sense). How to describe it? You just think it's pretty but a little strange? First of all, we all know that it is Jin's old problem to insist on 1V1, but I am not the kind of person who deliberately thinks that they are the same person before continuing to watch it. After watching it, I feel that (whispering) it is really NPC... It's okay if there is no consistent fusion joke at the end (although I don't like fusion memes very much). I think the most awesome thing is that when Shou didn't know that they were the same person, he had different feelings for all three of them, and he didn't feel guilty or think at all, "Am I the only boy in the world who likes three men?" I was so shocked! ! (Face covering) I even once doubted whether the cute little Shou was really as innocent as he appeared! You are really awesome! At the same time, what confuses me is that not only did these three attacks not merge into one, but it was obvious that they were still jealous of each other at the end. However, the author's wife had no plans to continue writing Shura Field (one of my favorite points was gone again), and just gave it a big hit. There are pros and cons to this, it depends on everyone's understanding. The biggest drawback is that upon closer inspection, each attack's emotional line is deficient to a certain extent. Tan Jiu is considered a relatively perfect one, but Xiao Tang Xiaolong is different. Why Xiao Tang was so moved, how he loved her so much, he really didn't show it. Both Tan Jiu and Long Jing have been in love for a long time, and their affection has gradually deepened, but Xiao Tang has not. From the first moment he saw Shou, he began to fall in love one-sidedly and became an idiot. At the same time, he has the least amount of scenes, and there are more psychological scenes, but in reality, he almost never spends a long time alone with Shou Neng. Long Jingdu still had a period of time when he and Shou went back to Sang's house to be recognized by his father-in-law, but every time Xiao Tang and Shou had a long-term rivalry scene, either Sang Sheng or Long Jing was around, which gave no room for their love to grow wantonly. In this comparison, Long Jing is actually quite unique. He has the shyness of a boy who is worried about things during the self-guided strategy, he has integrity and kindness that is incomprehensible to others, and he has a look that is higher than the others. Every one of them hits the target perfectly. He was the first to be moved by the mortal heart, and then completed the two-way journey during the self-guided strategy. This should have been the most perfect line. But in the end, not only was his self-advocacy part not revealed in the end, but he also hadn't fully confessed it... (Who knows! Another of my cool points is gone) It can be seen that the wife's writing style is still not able to control this kind of plot well. The foreshadowing in the front did not become a helper in promoting the plot but became a self-contradictory redundant snake foot. The final ending was very sloppy. However, the whole story is very smooth and enjoyable to read, without being boring, the plot is novel, the family lines, master-disciple lines, and friend lines are all okay, and there are no inexplicable changes in the writing style (seeing what the author has to say, I think it will become serious after the plot changes later). I hope the author's wife will write better and better in the future!

Wuwuwuwu, I'm so sad that there wasn't even a single kiss from the beginning to the end.

You know, people who secretly log off the line halfway are quiet and act like monsters.

Emmm I'm quite disappointed, where is the main emotional drama? Alas, although I was very happy to see it all the way, I came here for Danmei. What is the name of the god? Their life together? Family in the modern age? Is Li Bao practicing again in the world of cultivation? This could even rewrite Part 2. As for the foreshadowing that the author mentioned, well, let me ask you, what exactly is Dai Xingchen? May I ask the author, where is the final reveal of the identity of the black mass (that emerged from Dai Xingchen's body) written? Where does it correspond to the foreshadowing? I even gave just one example of a suspicious point in one character. Does the author really think that by making the sketchy part so joyful (I admit that I like it too) that the plot can be brushed aside? I've read at least two of your final articles, and there's really no progress at all in terms of your grasp of the rhythm of the plot, as well as the foreshadowing and the revelation of the corresponding foreshadowing. It hurts the author to say this, but I am also a reader who spent about ten yuan to read every plot point carefully. If the author plans to write this kind of messy novel forever, then what I said above is nonsense. But ask yourself, author, don't you love these characters in your own novels? If you love it, why, why don't you want to promote your own progress, but do you need to put up a sign saying "No brainer, don't look if you don't like it" every time? I don't think the author's novels are brainless. You have a plan for the direction and development of the plot, and everyone can see this. But why do you treat each of your works and each of your children so casually? It's just a hobby to make some easy money. Anyway, I said in advance that I am brainless in writing. Don't blame me. If you don't have time today, let's just write this plot first. Is that so? The author is also a reader. If you change your identity and perspective and look at your work, can't you see that you have any problems, or even that it's not a problem but that you need to study it carefully next time you write an article and set aside more time for planning? With all due respect to the above-mentioned offending author, the reason why I have such great emotions is because the author gave me such a huge gap. Such a wonderful, hilarious and touching little plot cannot support a complete and mediocre plot, nor can it be strung together to form an ordinary and reasonable story. I just feel sorry for the author, who is definitely capable of writing a mediocre but complete and smooth story. Unfortunately, perhaps for various reasons, you did not choose to do this.

The xp of Chinese people is white hair

It's all over, but I'm still a little disappointed that I didn't get to see Tian Tian's daily love life in the extra episode.

We didn't even get to kiss him until the end! (Pamon stomps his feet)

Wow, this word is so cute.

In fact, the married life of Shangshen and Ali can also be written a little bit (dog head holding flowers in his mouth. Jpg)

So what is the name of the divine king? The extra story only shows the appearance and personality, but does not mention the name. You can't split it between the names of the three slices.