My Partner Isn't Human [Keyboard MMORPG]

(The comments are just personal opinions. I am a rough person and my expression may be wrong. Please do not criticize) How should I put it? I discovered this article a long time ago. I hadn't finished it yet and didn't read it seriously. I just thought the early content was interesting. When I saw the turning point, I suddenly realized that this article was not as simple as I thought. I read it again. Speaking from my limited Chinese literacy, this book made me laugh and cry. The relationship between the two protagonists really touched me. I don't mean it was shocking, but it brought warmth to people little by little. I don't know how to evaluate it. After I watched it again, I discovered that there was actually some foreshadowing in the early stages, and some of the content was very innovative. It's a pity that due to the influence of common routines, I didn't see the world behind this story for the first time. This book brought me many indescribable feelings. I read the last thirty chapters several times, and each time I had a deeper understanding. I'm really lucky to have discovered this book. Although it may not be necessary, I still want to apologize for not taking this book seriously at first and completely misunderstanding this article: I'm sorry. After all, every book is the author's hard work

I'd better write another long review. I gave it a five-point rating, which doesn't mean that the author's writing has indeed reached a level that I'm satisfied with. But after thinking about it, I estimate that there will be very few people besides me who will rate it again, and this book is indeed outstanding, so I give it full marks in the hope that people in the future may also discover the treasure? I rarely provide writing guidance or criticism, so please forgive me if I offend you. I really don't want to offend you. This article is indeed a pity. Judging from the performance level of the last few chapters, the writing is too bland and there is a lack of continuous foreshadowing in the writing. It should not have existed as an "online game novel" because the protagonist in the online game did not obtain anything that a traditional online game novel should have. From the choice of the structure of ff14, it was destined that it would not have the rare equipment, special abilities, and legendary experiences that traditional online game novels have. It would even be impossible to have a three-dimensional character besides the protagonist. Because the entire world serves the protagonist alone, this kind of story is exactly suitable for such a narrow world view. But it happens to be an online game article. In the first ninety chapters of the article, fictional online games occupy a large proportion in most chapters. However, these online game contents that occupy a large space are not really digging into the interesting parts of the game, but focusing on the players. The story that should not be made into an online game worldview is written into an online game worldview, and in the online game worldview, the online game is just a background board, with nothing else except the mechanism. These are the two biggest failures of this article, and it is these two failures that cover up all its highlights, making it look ordinary and even boring. The only eye-catching love line is still hidden in the background of a large number of top teammates looking for trouble, which is really a pity. The author's intentions can actually be seen, because in almost all boring daily life, there are hidden foreshadowings, so when the article takes a huge turn later, it does not give people the feeling of being illogical and unreasonable. Including why the protagonist is so mediocre and unremarkable, including why the background of the world is simplified to only the current scene, and why every time the male protagonist thinks and guesses, everything will come true in the end. In fact, it all makes sense. In fact, there is no lack of highlights in the article, from the starlight jellyfish that started to be praised in the online game world to the huge recognition that the protagonist suddenly received when completing a small thing. The romantic details are accumulated little by little, so it never feels like there is anything wrong with the two protagonists being together. In my humble opinion, if the main plot of Lin Sheng's awareness of something wrong with the world is buried in the online game at the beginning, it is shown through the plot of the online game and the wonderful landscape of the online game world. Qiao Yichen is not only his assistant and his friend, but a comrade who has experienced everything with him in the game, and is the mastermind behind the scenes who guides him step by step to discover the truth in reality. This book will definitely be wonderfully written. When reading the last thirty chapters, I used the deepest concentration, because the attractive factors are linked one after another. When I put down the book and finished it, I certainly felt that the trip was worthwhile. But looking back on the past, if I hadn't followed through the mountains and rivers chapter by chapter during the serialization, even if I look back now and want to read it again, I will feel tired. Unfortunately, just like the original star jellyfish, the beautiful pearl was buried under the gravel. Those who dug it were pleasantly surprised, but lamented its rarity. Most people lost interest early when they saw the layer of soil.

I want to see the sweet love line at the back OvO Make a real body for Qiao Qiao or something?

Do you suspect that Lin Sheng is the one who is in a coma? Upload realized that the Internet helped him generate this world, and Qiao was here to wake him up.

Good luck, take it! Does your wife have a scarf?

Help, scheming 1

Lose money! Must accompany the money!

After it's over, do you still want to watch the extras? 😳🤩🤩 I hope Shengsheng and Chenchen can live a happy life without so much suffering.

Are you jealous, hhh?

Isn't it possible that Qiao is a classmate who has a crush on Sheng since college?