How to Go Undercover Under My Brother

Personally speaking, this ending is unfinished for me, as if it was forced. I always thought there could be more chapters. For example, why the protagonist showed up at the orphanage, why his brother couldn't investigate, and why he became an owl was not described. I had worked so hard to figure out why the protagonist became like this, but when I saw this ending, I didn't know how to describe it. It was like preparing to eat a big meal and opening it to find that it was boiled radish.

It feels like Xu Feiyu is just using Son of Dawn. . . And it does not reflect the connection between the various vests. . .

Although Feiyu and his brother both quit their respective organizations, But I feel that as long as the leaders of the Sons of Dawn continue to adhere to their ideals, there will still be hope for society in this world.

Isn't this just be, if people's hearts are not dead, the War of Dawn will always come, and the difference between Xu Feiyu and his brother is not limited to the organizations they belong to, but more of their own positions. If his brother cannot understand Fei Yu, one day they will still split.

The ending is too rushed, and it can be seen that the author had a hard time writing intermittently... Although many things are not explained clearly, at least it is not unfinished... I also like this ending, but I am still a little regretful.

It's clear that everything is not over yet, the darkness is still nakedly exposed, and it doesn't even bother to hide it. It seems that the ending of he seems to be getting better, but it seems that nothing has changed from beginning to end. Don't be fooled by that false harmony and stability, it will come back sooner or later. I really can't see it. I'm almost depressed. The world is short of revolting people. It's really rotten to the core. Let's just destroy the world and start over again. What I see is the inaction of the rulers. Where does the so-called fairness and justice go? When the judiciary cannot uphold justice, is an individual's "just behavior" just? The perpetrators are at large, and the victims have nowhere to go. Their rights and interests are not protected, and they have to be harmed again by the perpetrators. That's why the Sons of Dawn exist. Yan Ze in the article is also the representative of "the boy who slays the dragon and turns into an evil dragon." Can the Children of the Dawn see the dawn? Parasites are also an issue worth discussing. They have extraordinary abilities and are a great hidden danger to order. They may harm others out of control. This has nothing to do with personal good or bad, but should we not regard them as human beings because of this? They should also receive human rights protection. They are also human beings and should not become cold experimental subjects. They should also be respected spiritually. Some people clearly have not done any bad things, but their identity has become the reason for bad people to maliciously harm them. Ordinary people have blind discrimination and incorrect cognition. And I suddenly thought of a question: Where does the source of alien beasts come from? Anyway, I really have a lot to say, and this article shouldn't end here.

It's okay to stop here. So far, the author hasn't written too deeply, so it doesn't feel particularly heavy. But in fact, just like the last chapter, there are always people who take pleasure in the suffering of others, but there are always people who look forward to being rescued and stop those who do evil. In the end, the government and the Children of the Dawn maintain this balance together, until the government does not need the Sons of the Dawn at all, and the 'Children of the Dawn' will always exist if the evil is not reduced. That's it. Just relax when reading the article. When you're older, you don't want to read the article until you have snot and tears.

The main part is good, but the ending feels a bit rushed and unfinished

The setting is really good, but the author didn't write it in depth, and it felt like it stopped abruptly.

It's finished, but it feels like the author hasn't finished writing a lot of foreshadowing, and the protagonist's situation hasn't been explained clearly. . But the setting is really good, and the conflicts between the characters are generally good, but some details are still not perfect, but it is really a good article! ! It would be great if I could be more patient and perfect the background and foreshadowing. I can afford the wait! ! ! The ending of the characters is indeed quite consistent with the characters, but the story between Menghuai and Jiang Ruixue in the end was a bit rushed. Why did Jiang Ruixue tell the truth? What's the benefit to him? He still wants Sons of Dawn to disband, maybe I didn't look carefully hahaha I really like how the author writes about the conflicts between several camps! ! It would be even better if it could be improved a little bit! ! ! Come on come on!