The Daily Life of a Cultivator on Campus

As soon as the plot unfolded, it was over. . .

The pacing at the end was too fast, and I always felt that at least a hundred chapters were missing [crying] which should have been a full-length novel, which was a pity.

After reading it, I found that the author's ideas are very good, but each story is written very quickly without in-depth description. I don't know whether it is because of the inability to write details or because of the writing style. Furthermore, there are a lot of typos and omissions.

This ending is actually a new story.

Sad 💔, the author did not correct the typos, and the plot fell apart at the end. A normal cultivation of immortality can reach five or six million words, and it ends half and half, so the collection of 20,000 is about the same, and this 40,000 is still too much

There is obviously a better way to end it, but it really took a turn for the worse as the person downstairs said.

Beibei and Lingling will be together forever [Sanhua Cat Head]

There are still holes to fill! The boss behind the mission system has never appeared.

That's it? Many of the hooks I buried before have not been recovered.

Ahhhh, I still haven't finished it, I feel like I can start writing more! [Crying]