I Have a Book of Good Deeds

It feels like it's finished so suddenly, wow, wow, I can still read another hundred chapters! ! ! I feel like there are still a lot of details, such as what happened before descending to earth, how I descended to earth, things about Stele Spirit 1.0, Etc. I can continue to talk about it.

Suddenly it was marked with a completion mark [question mark] and it felt like there was a lot that was left unfinished.

Long review, contains some spoilers, read with caution Light fantasy, light suspense, simple, good and evil are rewarded, in line with simple values. The relatives and friends around the protagonist are generally more vivid, and the characters who do evil are also sharp and sharp. The good and bad, good and evil are closer to real life, and the characteristics are refined and displayed, but they are not treated too facially. Therefore, it is more attractive for readers to continue reading. In addition to following the protagonist's judgment and actions as a big data processor, they can also be curious about what choices and behaviors the characters involved in the incident will have. To be honest, there are many points where when I read the author's previous sentence, I couldn't help but worry that the characters I liked/sympathized with would fall into eyebrow-raising (herein refers to the tension that an ominous omen is about to come true) direction. For example, the school sister turned into a ghost and just avenged her revenge, and the next second the sky thundered. It doesn't matter if people harm others. The evil ghosts are demanding their lives. Heaven's justice is here immediately. If you take the evil ghost path, you can't go back/It's not clean/You have to be saved/Stop it, senior sister, we still have time to reincarnate/Then let's say goodbye properly. Wait, wait (please choose your offline lunch box); For another example, the Kangkang family went through many twists and turns in their revenge, and every twist and turn directly led to a worse fate and a worse ending in the next second. The "HE" line Kangkang appeared and put down the butcher knife. From beginning to end, it is just a one-man show in which the Zhao family prefers to be sheltered or exiled. Reader: I am not happy. The TE line is all about revenge. Killing for life seems to be satisfying, but the murderer is like this. As long as he lives lightly, the victim has to bear a lot. He bends down and swallows tears to save his family. He is unrecognizable and is willing to be trapped in the shadows. He tortures himself with tooth for tooth. The big revenge is avenged in the end. Reader: Bad hands return to winter! BE line... There is no obligation to continue guessing about BE line self-abuse. People will feel pain and it will hurt. Fortunately, the above includes other big and small characters and events in the article, and all the endings that make the poor readers "I feel a lot uncomfortable" do not happen in this main world line. Regarding this point, the author must have considered the direction of the plot every word, otherwise every person/ghost, every joy, sorrow, and hatred would not be so stable. The solution is often a combination of Arigato's soft-hearted god (who makes fake accounts) + reliable relatives, friends and companions + just the right timing, goodwill + the protagonist of the incident who is constantly striving for self-improvement. In this regard, it can be said that the author's intention and consideration naturally lead to the comfort and enjoyment of the readers' perception. After talking about the comfortable characters arranged in the plot, let's briefly talk about the feelings about the world view. Obviously, this is not a "big production" article. The core setting of the identity of the attacker and the receiver is thrown out and lingers all the time. The magnificent heaven or underworld outside the human world cannot be fully glimpsed. The characters in the book, regardless of their positions and supporting roles, are the only windows through which we can see through the world settings. Because of the protagonist's special identity, we learn, experience, and understand the world the most through him, and reveal the most about the world. But that's it, no more information. The beginning of this story is very ordinary. There is no narration introduction that unfolds the map, and there is no span of years like the white hair is three thousand feet long. The text follows its owner, just like the heart of the heaven and earth monument is thinking about human life. This article does not write drama and create tension in a large frame and background, but actually spreads out the world, with the protagonist as the center of the detector, connecting the characters to tell the story and depict the environment. In addition to the lively human fireworks, the article intentionally shows two unique and interesting ecologies. One is the colorful ghost circle on campus. The way ghosts entertain themselves is exciting enough. Thanks to the innovative development of the merit track by senior Xiaoqing and breaking through the barriers between humans and ghosts, this school has unknowingly achieved harmony between humans and ghosts, and is even more capable of fighting crime. It forces everyone to be harmonious; firstly, the various temples that Taishan visited have a strong atmosphere of righteousness. It seems that through the words, you can see the busy civil servants, watching them classify and approve people's numerous expectations and wishes. Although the current situation is not easy, the economy is in recession, and even the gods are worried, but we can see that the hearts of all people are the same, regardless of gods and humans. In general, the presentation of the worldview of this article is not about how complete and profound it is, but it fits the protagonist and theme very well. The atmosphere and tone of the whole article are consistent, which is to simply do good, punish evil and eliminate harm. The characters, plot, and world view are all unified under this theme. As I write this, I can't help but praise one more thing: the relatives and friends around the protagonist are really cute. The most impressive thing about the whole novel is the roommate group and the senior group that appear in the first half of the book and basically run through it. In comparison, the shaping of Gong and the depiction of emotional lines are relatively average, not so vivid and interesting. Based on my experience since reading the article, generally speaking, the emotional line is either a matter of skewing the length and effort, carefully arranging events, conflicts, explosions, etc., To fully display the subtleties of the character's inner heart, emotional ups and downs, mood changes, etc., Or it may be broad and wide, slow and steady, or other styles. The more detailed and moving the author's writing style is, and the more skilled he is in this way, the more he can mobilize the reader's emotional feelings, making people immersed in the emotional atmosphere of the two people, and the joy, anger, crying and laughter are closely connected with the protagonist; Either the mode/attribute/feature comes first. To put it simply, it means first deciding on the CP type/core scene/single point, etc., And then come up with a set of classic combinations that are praised by the public or a flavor that you are particularly good at cooking, and carefully present the cuteness/sugar points/sexual tension/hormones, etc. Of the combination. It directly stimulates the senses and makes readers instantly go to the top, shouting "xx feelings/xx attacks/xx settings are shocking and delicious". The author's xp is released and written, and the readers are also happy to follow the group in seconds. Overall, the emotional line of this article is not long, relatively loose, has a simple structure, and has no twists and turns. The emotional changes and development of the two people are basically independent of each event (herein, the event itself hardly affects the relationship between the two, and the consequences of the event, such as intensifying the petrification of the protagonist, will affect the emotional line). In other words, it is not strongly related to most of the plot of the full text. This means that when I want to mobilize my impression of the emotional line, even if I recall the rough origins and endings of each small incident, I am still confused about the emotional line and can't quite remember what happened. From this point of view, the two-person world part of returning to the orphanage and traveling to Taishan in the middle and later stages of the article is indispensable. It is not only the result of the development of the plot, but also the pinnacle chapter of the emotional line of this article. Without this part, my impression of Gong would always be that he awakened the protagonist in the beginning, and then continued to accompany and protect him, recalling his past loyalty and favor from time to time, and he would not yet be able to evolve to the point where he is the protagonist. In addition, the CP model of this article is close to the long-running (pseudo) old man and woman type. The two have been together for a long time, and the emotional foundation itself is sufficient, but it lacks the opportunity for transformation and clarity. This kind of setting needs to be deliciously written, and it requires a lot of writing and plot design. I personally think that the ideal effect is to reach the point where the moment it is revealed, it really makes people "heart-thumping" while reading it. The shaping of this article is relatively dull. When reading, instead of "I've hit it", I feel more relieved that the two of them finally "we are in love". There are no excessive emotional fluctuations due to the relationship line in the whole process, including the plot where Gong temporarily leaves for a while near the end and the story is finally concluded. It is all calm and calm. Anyway, there will definitely be no breakup or be. As far as this article is concerned, the main CP did not step on my cuteness, and the shaping is quite satisfactory. There are no outstanding memory points or famous scenes, but it is not rigid or too dull. All in all, it is an easy short story suitable for reading. The reading feels smooth and effortless, and the experience is comfortable and effortless.

Is it finished? Why is it not marked as finished or updated [question mark]

After saving for several months, I finally had the guts to read it in one go. This is one of my favorite books by the author that I have ever read! I hope I can collect the physical book, and I want to give it to every friend! The subject matter, characters, and writing style of this book are all very attractive and relatable! An interesting, meaningful and energetic one! It just feels a bit unfinished. It would be nice if it was longer. I don't want to be separated from the protagonists and their stories... I like the male protagonist so much, and I also like this kind of life where I can personally experience punishing evil and promoting good, and doing brave things for justice! The withdrawal reaction after reading it is very obvious [laughing and crying] There will always be a "merit account" popping up in my mind from time to time, hoping to save the people and punish evil... When I see good people and good deeds, I automatically add "+ (number)" in my mind; when I see evil people, I hope to deduct his merits and exchange them for good people to extend my life [laughing and crying] Could it be that I also have the same "occupational disease" as Lin Xia?

Not enough. Please update more.

I like sentimental writing. The emotions are very delicate, the narrative is very logical, and the most important thing is that the three views are correct. I have been a fan of yours for many years and have read many of your articles many times.

Huai Su is no longer my favorite reader. His writing quality has also dropped due to his poor quality.

What a great write-up! ! ! ! Nice

Great author, do you have any more?