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Blurb:
Hello, and welcome to the [School Escape Game].
You must find the school gate before the time limit set by your task expires, or you will be trapped here forever.
Please obey the school rules and motto. The game begins.
The players realize that one of them is quite unusual. A girl named Song Run wears a full set of bunny pajamas. She may seem lazy, but she keeps coming up with bizarre tricks.
While the players struggle to memorize their lessons for clues, Song Run chats with her desk mate, who has no eyeballs, about which milk tea shop by the school gate is best.
While the players clear the playground of scattered limbs to figure out where the school gate is, Song Run is being shown around campus by a newly befriended young security guard, whom she recruits as her underling.
While the players work hard to pass their exams and uncover the final password, Song Run says, "Oh, let's go. I know the password. The classmate holding their head told me."
The players: ...So why can you communicate with those NPCs?
Song Run smiles shyly. "Have you ever heard of being a social butterfly?"
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The female lead and the main cast grow over the course of the story. They don't face everything alone.
There's very little romance, so please keep that in mind.
The hymn of humanity is a hymn to courage, solidarity, and never giving up.
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Blurb for Take That, Extra from a School Romance!
Liang You is the designated background character in a sweet school romance on a certain web-novel site. Her usual duties include:
When the school's belle makes her entrance, introduce the heroine's backstory in a tiny voice everyone can hear;
When the school's delinquent hero makes his entrance, introduce his exploits in a tiny voice everyone can hear;
When the hero pins the heroine against a wall, "happen" to show up with a few other background characters and "coincidentally" gawk, exclaiming, "Ah! The school delinquent is pinning the school belle against the wall!";
In the author's words, Liang You is never given a name. Her labels are "a girl," "a student watching," and "someone."
Liang You has always been quite happy with her easy, risk-free job. She's only a background character, but she has parents and family in this fictional world. She needs to study hard and prepare for the college entrance exams!
But her peaceful life is disrupted.
One day, Liang You discovers that several new people have suddenly appeared in her class: a handsome, expressionless, icy top student; a delicate, sweet, and pure transfer student who just arrived; another delinquent whose family is obscenely wealthy; and a beautiful, cool, and confident top student...
Liang You has a bad feeling about this. Have several school romance novels merged together...?
Doesn't that mean her workload and hours are going to double?!
You lousy author! Give me back my freedom!!!
Blurb for Empty City [Apocalypse]:
After the apocalypse arrives, Ji Xing is the only person left in the entire city, though perhaps there are others. She just hasn't met them.
The city is lifeless. There are no living people, and not even any animals.
So Ji Xing dodges the man-eating mutant birds that dart around the city while gathering supplies from dusty shopping malls and supermarkets.
She usually lives in a loft on the edge of the city. She grows vegetables and flowers on the balcony, and her window overlooks the road leading out of town.
But the nearly deserted city is enough to drive anyone mad. It's so lonely, unbearably lonely.
As Ji Xing reinforces her doors and windows, she thinks, Please, someone come. I want so badly to talk to someone.
One day, Ji Xing spots a frail boy in a worn-out trench coat from her loft...
From then on, there are two people in the empty city.
[Everyday life after the apocalypse: gathering supplies, living quietly, and dealing with domestic affairs. The population has plummeted, so one person in an entire city is perfectly normal.]
Theme: Growth itself is a form of success
Finished with flowers~
I haven't found any bugs, but there are a lot of illusions in the volume of Resentful Ghost Middle School, and the correlation is not very strong (maybe I read it too quickly and didn't digest it well), which made me feel that a fantasy suddenly appeared on several occasions.
In terms of writing style, I feel that this is a common problem among many online writers. They always make some small mistakes in punctuation and word usage. I hope you can review it and polish it every time you finish writing an article.
In terms of character design, I feel that this is a common problem in Infinite Flow web novels. There is too much focus on highlighting the protagonist and flattening, marginalizing or even subduing other characters. There will always be people other than the protagonist who are wiped out, or the team is almost wiped out but the protagonist saves the day. Like the Resentful Ghost Middle School Volume, according to Yu Ranran, many groups of players have come to this world, but only the protagonist group bravely stood up to help her, which I can't accept. Personally, I think that although there are not many people who are kind and can maintain their original intentions, they should not be so small that there are only four protagonists among many batches of players.
In addition, every time I leave the dungeon and enter the dungeon almost immediately, I feel like I am just telling the story of the dungeon, with almost no involvement in the system world. In the Study Travel Train volume, many eyes and light patterns appeared again, and I finally connected with the previous copy. I thought I was going to solve the mystery of the system, but unexpectedly I just completed the task and returned to the real world. I hope the next part can clarify why the system pulls people into the game world... If there is such a setting.
Looks good. I want to know what will happen to Qianqian and Mr. Liang.
Will we meet Su Qian and Mr. Liang in the next book? I want to see them continue to fight together
It's that woman, I say! Many people died at that time, and she didn't stop at all. Haha, this kind of person should die.
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah! But I actually entered the workplace escape game hahaha okay. Dad Song and Ms. Liu are so cute? Thanks to the author! See you in the next book!
Finished reading! Wonderful! Thank you madam for your creation~
Oh my god, I feel that the author is serious about this book, because I actually order one story at a time. Every time I read one, I will order another one. There may be shortcomings, but it is enough to attract me. Thank you to the author for the world he has greatly constructed. I am here with Mr. Liang, the sister of Runrun Jian Lai Qian.
Laughing to death, isn't the smell of pickled cabbage in Laotan scary?
I really like the setting of developing a protagonist, and the plot is also very attractive to me. But there are some places that would be better to write about in depth. I thought the last scene where the android from the fashion college captured the heroine was some kind of foreshadowing, which could lead to the existence of these colleges. There was also the Ruan Yuanyuan in the Oasis. After she fainted, there were no monsters anymore. I thought she was a mini-boss. Now there is a sense of disconnect between the stories of each college. Maybe the author has something to add later. . But this is the last story, I still feel a lot of regrets
After the Apocalypse, He Came to Ask for Training.
Growing Pains
After Handing in the Cosmic Giant System
A Group of Ancient Towns Travel to a Different World of Zombies
The Heroine Mary Sue Just Wants to Get Rich
She Is in a Game with the Gods
This Performance Is Billed by the Second
Why Is It so Difficult to Find a New Husband?
Help: How to Turn in the Space-Time Gate?
Hand over the Magic Pen Ma Liang System
After Handing in the Mobile Phone Predicting Natural Disasters
Do You Know What Time You Get Off Work? [Unlimited]
Finished with flowers~ I haven't found any bugs, but there are a lot of illusions in the volume of Resentful Ghost Middle School, and the correlation is not very strong (maybe I read it too quickly and didn't digest it well), which made me feel that a fantasy suddenly appeared on several occasions. In terms of writing style, I feel that this is a common problem among many online writers. They always make some small mistakes in punctuation and word usage. I hope you can review it and polish it every time you finish writing an article. In terms of character design, I feel that this is a common problem in Infinite Flow web novels. There is too much focus on highlighting the protagonist and flattening, marginalizing or even subduing other characters. There will always be people other than the protagonist who are wiped out, or the team is almost wiped out but the protagonist saves the day. Like the Resentful Ghost Middle School Volume, according to Yu Ranran, many groups of players have come to this world, but only the protagonist group bravely stood up to help her, which I can't accept. Personally, I think that although there are not many people who are kind and can maintain their original intentions, they should not be so small that there are only four protagonists among many batches of players. In addition, every time I leave the dungeon and enter the dungeon almost immediately, I feel like I am just telling the story of the dungeon, with almost no involvement in the system world. In the Study Travel Train volume, many eyes and light patterns appeared again, and I finally connected with the previous copy. I thought I was going to solve the mystery of the system, but unexpectedly I just completed the task and returned to the real world. I hope the next part can clarify why the system pulls people into the game world... If there is such a setting.
Looks good. I want to know what will happen to Qianqian and Mr. Liang.
Will we meet Su Qian and Mr. Liang in the next book? I want to see them continue to fight together
It's that woman, I say! Many people died at that time, and she didn't stop at all. Haha, this kind of person should die.
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah! But I actually entered the workplace escape game hahaha okay. Dad Song and Ms. Liu are so cute? Thanks to the author! See you in the next book!
Finished reading! Wonderful! Thank you madam for your creation~
Oh my god, I feel that the author is serious about this book, because I actually order one story at a time. Every time I read one, I will order another one. There may be shortcomings, but it is enough to attract me. Thank you to the author for the world he has greatly constructed. I am here with Mr. Liang, the sister of Runrun Jian Lai Qian.
Laughing to death, isn't the smell of pickled cabbage in Laotan scary?
I really like the setting of developing a protagonist, and the plot is also very attractive to me. But there are some places that would be better to write about in depth. I thought the last scene where the android from the fashion college captured the heroine was some kind of foreshadowing, which could lead to the existence of these colleges. There was also the Ruan Yuanyuan in the Oasis. After she fainted, there were no monsters anymore. I thought she was a mini-boss. Now there is a sense of disconnect between the stories of each college. Maybe the author has something to add later. . But this is the last story, I still feel a lot of regrets
Hahaha, the two copies merge just right