Harry Potter: Lost

Woohoo, it's too late to get into the trap. I was shocked to see my wife's article in my briefcase. This article is one of my favorite HPSS!

Big, awesome! This style of writing is so right! Not broken at all! Not dissonant at all!

Oh ho ho... Happiness forever

After reading it, I really liked the first half because the author's writing style is great and the psychology of both parties is described in detail. However, after the emotional line came out, I felt a little tired and felt that there was no transition and it was a bit abrupt. I was so entangled that I almost gave up, but found that I had almost finished reading it. Anyway, give me a big thumbs up

Is there a physical book?

Feipu~~~~~~~~ is back, Nei Niu It's been so hard waiting for you. By the way, if the professor could answer Xiao H directly: "If I love you", then he wouldn't be an awkward professor. Little H, you still need to work hard - the ghost animal loyal dog attack is the ultimate goal of your evolution (poof) Now, my wife, you have to work hard. The written test is just a small test. You must be fine~~~~~~~~\\(^o^)/~

I came here from someone else's recommendation. I read two of your articles, Lost and Starting Over, and the emotional expressions in them made me very depressed. Maybe it was because of guilt, maybe because of deep love, in short, Lily had a place in the professor's heart that no one could replace, so Harry walked on thin ice cautiously. This was not in line with the love in my heart. Anyway, I can't express that feeling. If I were Harry, I would rather not have this kind of love. Isn't it tiring to be with a professor and always have problems like this? In these two articles, I can't feel the professor's love. I can only see Harry's pursuit of the professor. Very unfair. Sorry my language may be a little confusing, but my intention was never to criticize either article.

After finishing reading Lost in one go, I finally felt relieved a lot from my stomachache due to the ending of the original work! But when I saw the last extra chapter, I felt a little depressed again. Maybe it was because I read the entire novel at once, but the extra chapter seemed a bit loose. The most important thing is that I didn't quite understand what the year Harry was fighting for was like. Do you hope that the professor will give him a year of running-in period so that he can believe in his love for himself? Because that sentence about the timer ending now makes me feel confused and I can't let it go~ So I'm here to ask for an answer~ As for the second part, like others, I think it would be better if the professor had more descriptions~ Harry's love for the professor is more clearly described, but the professor's feelings for Harry are vague, and there is no decisive moment when the feelings turn into love. Or, as you said in other comments, the professor actually awakened earlier than Harry, but he never faced it. Besides, the professor is indeed such a person~ but it is a small pity that he can't savor the change~! And I thought that Harry's process of pushing him to the professor would be more tortuous~ He was welcomed even if he resisted~=V= Also, I think that the professor's salvation should involve more than one person who truly cares and loves him, and I hope to see this person change his thoughts on the professor. That man who has never been able to find a sense of belonging, who feels inferior to his mixed-race self, who does not recognize love and thinks that he has no right to happiness, even if he endured humiliation and performed an admirable act that could be called a hero, after the war, I feel that the man who was too stubborn did not remove these shackles from his heart. He did not Even if he is truly redeemed, he still cannot break the dark chains that have entangled him throughout his life, and it is even more impossible to expect him to free himself from it. Therefore, we can only focus on the second person, and the other person is exactly the kind of Gryffindor who always stands up one step more than he falls down. It is really a perfect fit! If the mutual influence between each other finally makes the professor truly get rid of the haze that has haunted him for most of his life, and his heart can truly grow and be liberated, then I feel that the professor has truly been redeemed~ In fact, in the ending of the original novel, I felt sad about the professor's death rather than because the other person didn't really realize it. If he admits himself at the last moment, overcomes the obsession that really dominates his life, and fights for himself, no matter how miserable the end is, no matter how miserable it is, even if it bleeds from seven holes, is torn into pieces, and his brains are scattered (hey!), I won't be so resentful~ While I hope that the professor will get the happiness he deserves, I also hope that the professor will get real relief and see Severus.

This ending is not bad~

It's perfect~~This is the first time I've seen such good writing about Severus and Harry~~ Whether it's Harry's confusion or Severus' uneasiness~~ they are all described very delicately~~ Harry is really Sif's last happiness~~ I'm also glad that Harry discovered Severus' protection of him~~ Otherwise, the ending will be the worst among the worst~~ Sifu is a very pitiful person~~ I hope Harry can protect this love~~forever~~ I also hope that Sif can let go of Harry~~ Best wishes to Sev and Harry~~