A Harry Potter Fanfic: Family

First of all, this is a novel written 12 years ago. There is no need to criticize it so harshly. That era was the era of Mary Sue and Qiong Yao. Secondly, the character design is indeed broken, but I feel that the author's story and logic are very clear. Although it is bloody, I quite like the emotional line? As for the character design, different people have different acceptance levels. However, the characters of Narcissa and Ginny have gone very far in this article. It can only be said that this story belonging to the author needs an original character to be the villain. But it can be seen that the author really doesn't like Ginny, and I didn't like it 10 years ago. But looking at Ginny now, Ginny in the Chamber of Secrets is so stupid. She also has some Slytherin qualities? But I have to say that Ginny in the later period of the original book is a real Gryffindor. Generally speaking, I can accept the author's use of Ginny as the boss, but I also hope that everyone will have their own understanding of the character's image outside of the fanfic. Some people like it and some people don't like it. Some stories destroy the character, and some stories just deviate. But in fact, they all start from different authors, that is, different people's understanding of the characters. I think fan fiction is just a matter of reading it. There is no need to criticize it. It is really difficult to grasp the character. Even the authors of many original novels wrote that for the development of the plot, they would not be able to control the characters' personalities. Secondly, different people have different views on characters, and fan fiction is written based on their own ideas. There is no need to impose the reader's views on the characters on the author and ask the author to write how to write. Just like the author feels that Draco's character has weak parts, there are indeed some, but it does not affect Draco's own charm. It does not affect the author's writing of his own articles. This is just like the Black Lion Academy or the Black Snake Academy. It is a common problem in old novels and it makes no sense.

As a German fan, I feel it is necessary to express my attitude

To be honest, the beauty of this article is that it deeply captures the readers' hearts. Very good, even though Draco died in the end, it was not too abrupt.

I don't know how many times I have rewatched it, but I still shed tears when I saw it at the end...

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The writing is good, but I just don't know how to say it.

I've watched it many times, and I've looked it up again and still like it very much.

Maybe it's not to my liking, and I don't like some CPs either.

This is my first comment. I would like to thank the author for making me read it so happily. I just feel happy reading the article.

This is the first heart-wrenching HP article I've read... I'm still scared, and I haven't dared to read it a second time... After many years, I found that it's not so sad anymore... It's really sad