Making Money in the Interstellar Era to Buy Back Earth [Livestream]

In fact, the story of my younger brother can be opened as a separate file. Mainly, I want to see how Green Tea Lotus carries water (*^▽^)/★*☆

The writing is good, but too short. I just wrote about one of the protagonists, and the description feels like a quick brushstroke. At least I explained a little bit, but the rest is not detailed, such as the reason why Tiandao destroyed the world, the reason why other planet masters helped Liuliu, the origin of the secret broadcast, and the group behind the secret broadcast. Weaving, meddling in the hypocritical peace organization, and the game of building the earth ended too suddenly. If the earth is short of food, then what is the point of turning the earth into a game? It's not that there are no other ways, right? The reason for choosing this method is just that the protagonist thinks that the game is the best of all methods. You can write more in depth. When the protagonist returned to Earth, he said that he wanted to redeem the Earth, but there was no redemption process or negotiation. He only briefly described it. Because Xiaodai deceived the Second Highness of Planet xx, suddenly no one was in charge of the Earth. It made people feel that the pattern was a little narrower. It turned out that the Earth was just another civilization. People who are not rulers carry out this matter with a dispensable attitude, which makes the whole central idea (redeeming the earth also dispensable). The earth's elite live broadcast on a harsh planet, more than 100 people died, what they went through, and how most people failed, are briefly mentioned. How did the two young ladies succeed? I also wrote a little bit about it. There was no description of communication with the earth throughout the live broadcast. The earth could only wait passively. It even made people feel that there were so many countries and so many people on the earth, and they only relied on a few hundred people to save them. Or even just relying on these people to save them, without doing anything on their own. , The outer planets can't help, and there are no descriptions of struggles inside the earth, against mutated plants, or strategies to combat the xx civilization, etc. It is obvious that the elites we prepared were not selected, and all the selected ones were ordinary people. So, will the better people do nothing on earth and wait for these 10 or so ordinary people to be saved? And the boss fight is too easy. Who are the invaders who attack Tiandao? Why did they invade Tiandao? The description of Tiandao makes people feel that it is the main god type, but how did Tiandao, the main god type, get involved with the planet? What did Tiandao get by destroying the evil ghost star and the mechanical star? In what way? Is this the God of Light? Then why can't I fight against the law of heaven? And are the law of heaven and the God of Light a combination of Chinese and Western things? This book could obviously be a long novel, but it only describes two abandoned planets. It is said every time that it is difficult to get hot searches in the entire interstellar, which proves that there are many planets in the interstellar, and other poor or backward planets can be expanded. Since there are so many planets in the interstellar, are there any interstellar rules? Who takes the lead? How did Liuliu become a hot search for the first time? Each planet has different definitions and different characteristics, but everyone is human-shaped? The interstellar background frame has a relatively small feeling. Even which stars are high-level and which are low-level are up to the readers to understand. It was obvious that His Highness cooperated with others from the beginning. It felt like it could have been written as a novel, but the author instead wrote it as a short or medium-length novel. It could have been a serious drama, but it turned into a sandbox style, with inspiration in the sandbox. However, the author's writing is quite good. You may consider re-editing it and sorting out all the buried threads. It should be rich and rich. Determine your own and believe that the author will improve it and it will be more readable.

0 Birth rate and 0 death rate. Hahahaha. They are all ghosts. What can they do? The birthrate is unreliable, but the death rate can still be given a try. Hahahaha.

It's very well written. After reading it, I felt that a demining comment in the comment area before I read it didn't seem to be an article... I don't know if the author has overhauled it or something... Anyway, the plot written in the comment is quite mindless, but every point in the article actually makes sense...

Not surprised, not surprised, not irritated, not moved, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

A shiny ball? Lord God?

I was so anxious that I wanted to run to Hungry Ghost Road to hide.

It ended a little hastily.

Still curious about who killed Tiandao?

Hahahahahahahahahahaha