The Heartless Dao Venerable, You're OOC

Jiqingdao means loving to the extreme, hahahaha

Xiaoqiu's sadness overflows the screen

Xiaoxia and Xiaoqiu... Hey, do they count as one body and two souls?

Perfect, sprinkle flowers! However, it's better not to write more about a story that has reached this level of concentration. Read the last few chapters patiently. No matter how good the other plots are, I will start to get irritated again as soon as I get back to the plot. How can I put it this way? You can't cook without condiments. It's hard to say it's delicious if the condiments account for half of it.

Sprinkle flowers Now that it's over, let me make a small suggestion (hit me woo woo) Regarding the ultimate villain god system of this story, it is recommended to create a character with a clear personality in the setting stage. Although the mechanical setting is that the main god is as ruthless and ruthless as an AI robot and can only perform tasks mechanically, but it still feels a bit boring to see the development of conflicts in the later period, and the part of resolving dramatic conflicts also seems delayed and far-fetched. (I don't know if it's because of insufficient argumentation for plot contradictions or whether the later writing went beyond the outline plan?) Specifically, the main god of this system has not dealt with the problem well. Not only does it have to delete a virus to start, but also asks why a system consumes energy to maintain the existence of countless small worlds. This is something that the main god system itself needs to understand - what is the core of the main interest of the system? Does a small world that is inconsistent with the original setting but full of love completely fail to provide the positive energy for the natural development of the small world? Gu Jingyu, who stubbornly wastes a lot of energy to delete Qiu Zhaoye's main god system, and Gu Jingyu, who unconsciously loves Qiu Zhaoye who fights against the "retarded original plot", and Qiu Zhaoye, who is full of love for Gu Jingyu, whose behavior is more logical and consistent? Who is more harmful to the overall system? And who is more like a harmful virus? The main god keeps wasting resources to fill a bug black hole without expressing enough necessity to do so. This can be said to be the logical inconsistency of the main god system behavior (energy cost deficit, imbalance of income and expenditure). Therefore, when the protagonist group fought against the main god system, I felt that in the end they still failed to attack the breakthrough point of this logical attribute (the bug of the main god system's own behavior was not solved), but only used the logic that is close to the death of a stone as the ultimate weapon. In fact, it feels a bit far-fetched. Therefore, the final stage of reading felt very tiring, a little dragging, and not enough to relieve my anger... Of course, in terms of completion, the author is very conscientious, thank you! (Of course, this may be due to the author's inexperience in the setting stage, because after reading the latest article, I feel much better about this issue. Come on!)

This article is pretty good! Although the extra content is a bit unexpected ~

Uh-huh, I thought Xiaoxia would be able to kiss her

After finishing it, I really can't get enough of the rebirth plot, and although some of the plot connections are not smooth, the writing is really surprising. I think this book will be popular in the future! Come on, madam!

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Both Xiaoxia and Xiaoqiu are doing well! Alas, it obviously belongs to one person, why are they "two people" again?