After Curfew

Prince, stop playing around and learn to handle government affairs. You are already five years old!

After reading the entire article, I rarely subscribed to it. The pace is relatively tight, not procrastinating, not wordy, and not frivolous in order to make up the number of words in chapters. It is not difficult to write long articles nowadays, but the difficulty lies in how to tell a wonderful story in the least amount of space. This is the high quality and precision. The plot of the article is about seeking power and calculation, although some links cannot withstand scrutiny, but the fictional background does not need to be studied too deeply. Then there is the character design, the description of inner conflicts, and the emotional release and relaxation. Although the plot mentioned good luck all the time, many casual character profiles also emphasized that there is not so much "good luck" in the "world". Although there is the aura of the protagonist, it is not too obvious. The mistake of being out of control just shows that this is a "person". This should not be considered a character failure, but it would be better if the character's personality was more distinct.

In fact, Shen Huan is the most pitiful. He really didn't do anything wrong, but he was tortured by an origin he couldn't choose all his life, and he didn't end up well.

Finished Spreading Flowers ~ Will you consider making a spin-off about Shen Huan o(≧v≦)oI quite like him

Can Mud roll around on the grassland for a few days and nights?

After reading this article, I think the writing is good and the money is well spent. However, based on my many years of experience in reading articles, I still want to give you some suggestions. Don't scold me. You are right. First, I feel that the characters and plot of this article are relatively good. The omitted ones, like the love and hatred of the characters that appeared, only exaggerated the atmosphere and did not explain it clearly. I still found out by reading the comments section, so I was confused when I read it. If it is a separate book, I suggest you explain it all. Let us It seems a little easier. Of course, if it is a series of articles, I didn't say it. You can suggest the order of reading in the introduction. Secondly, I feel that the protagonist's character is vicious and I can understand it, but it still feels a little bit unfair. It feels that the death of the supporting characters is not smooth enough, or even just a bad fate. It is easy for readers to think about the problem from the standpoint of the supporting characters, and thus feel that the halo of the protagonist does not have this justice. I will save my personal feelings and express them.

I want to see them stay together for a longer time, but they are always in a hurry, which makes me sad.

Looks good! I like to see young couples getting sticky~~

Don't you want me to do some extra drama?

I want to see the sticky daily life of two people.