Returning to Ancient Times With a Game

The ending was a bit too hasty, especially when the emperor was poisoned. The heroine only focused on crying. She knew how to buy red pills to add blood, but she completely forgot about preparing a lot of gold ingots two days ago to buy the Nirvana Pill. It was too far-fetched. I was especially present. The rest of the writing was pretty good and quite novel, but the ending was not tied well. Alas

Very suddenly, the heroine's performance was very exaggerated. I never expected that it would end in such a hurry, with this sudden ending

Emmmm... Don't know what to say I still can't feel how much the heroine loves the hero I even feel that this chapter is extremely character-breaking I even saw the heroine crying and wanting to laugh...

It was too rushed. I thought the story was just beginning. The beginning was very interesting.

The story is very good, great~ I don't know if I will refine it in the future. I would like to suggest that the emotional scenes can be written more delicately, so that others will not think that the relationship between the male and female protagonists suddenly heats up~ It's great. I have read novels for so many years, and your novel is the only one. It's an app that makes me willing to spend money to open the app countless times a day and wait for updates. What really attracts me is the storyline, the characters' distinctive personalities, and their attitudes and solutions when facing difficulties. It's really real, and it doesn't give the male and female protagonists an aura of omnipotence, making them extra down-to-earth. From pen pals to games and back to ancient times, I can feel that Dada's overall view and the logical line of the full text are very complete. Although Dada has some lapses in writing, it is not harmful, because readers can understand the deep meaning that Dada wants to express, and readers will make progress together with Dada and understand each other ~ Come on Dada (???_??)? Another: I am looking forward to Lingquan very much. I believe I can see a different Dada. I don't know when Dada will publish the article. I'm excited!!!

In such a hurry... I saw a loneliness

This ending is too hasty!

Um... It turns out that the system is offline

Come on!!! Why did the system bind her? I feel like the timing of the poisoning is too coincidental and not quite right. It's probably a ruse.

The extra is so short ~ QAQ