First, here's the original text of Deception by Lin Lun.
Then, I bow deeply three times.
This is my continuation of Deception.
It's about Cang Yu being reborn and going back, but one step too late.
The ending is a happy one.
I set out to make the scumbag top suffer.
A few rambling thoughts:
I've been reading for years. I have a low threshold for angst, but I still love angsty stories. I've come across quite a few stories that left me dissatisfied with the ending, and at the time I always wanted to add a better ending.
But writing is exhausting and takes so much time and effort. It's nowhere near as easy as letting my imagination run wild.
Sometimes I feel like it's rude to walk into someone else's house and redecorate after they've already finished renovating it, but more often than not, I can't help imagining what I would do.
This is just something I wrote for fun. My goal is to make a little story that cures "angsty heartache."
My writing has its limits, so just give it a read.
Thank you. I bow.
Theme: The scumbag top gives up this life and is reborn to make up for the past
I thought I could see him breaking into a prison and using a sewing machine... He's selling D. Is it okay to just wash his hands of it like this?
The comments were different and scolded. We are not just here to read his continuation. We are here to heal the heartbreak that happened many years ago????
Does this make it clear? At least I should let Shou find someone else and let Gong watch him be happy all his life while feeling uncomfortable at the same time. This happiness was not brought to him by himself.
The author writes so well (*??╰╯`?)? This tone is really great
After many years, it was finally complete.
I especially like this sentence: If you love me, spend your whole life in exchange for it! Great!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh use so so good writing. It really saved my life. I have no regrets. The original text is only a few thousand words long and is really cruel as hell 😭
I would like to ask which article "Lake Green Article" is? [Let me be healthy]
Ahhhh, it's very well written.
Okay, okay, complete