My Heart Turns to Goodness [Voice Actor Fans Assemble: The Grandmaster of Demonic Cultivation Fanfic]

The writing is actually quite good, but I think there was a little problem at the beginning, because they knew early on that saccharin and eggs were consumed at the same time. I think they should have investigated the oil in advance, right? Maybe it's because I over-deify them? In my opinion, the difference between this article and the original work is probably that the original work is very, complicated? The difficulty of this article is relatively simple. The clues and suspects are clear at a glance, but this can also be regarded as a small case. After reading the comments, I feel that the author does not need to make too many comparisons. After all, the original work of P is very long and complicated. This is just a short story. I can still see the intention from some plots, and I can also feel the character that I am trying to maintain. In fact, my level is also very limited. There are some things that I find strange, but I can't tell where it is. Just think of me as a stickler (desire to survive).

It doesn't ruin the character at all, it's so well written.

The author's writing is pretty good, but it's a bit short [doge]

It's a bit embarrassing that no one has commented, so I'll make one myself. I didn't think much about it at first. I came to participate when I saw the event. Then I looked around at the original books that I could choose from, and finally I chose "Silent Reading". Because my favorite among them is "Silent Reading", the intricate cases really touched my point. So I thought, can I write a story like this? It turns out that my level is indeed limited. I consulted a lot of information during the writing process, but the final product was still not satisfactory. There are some small bugs in many places. I can see them, but I can't fix them. This is the difference between me and the great god. Regardless of writing style, plot, plot design or characterization, there is a huge gap between me and the great master. For such a small case, I went over and over again and revised it five or six times, but in the end I was still not satisfied. I know that my level is here now. Although this work is not perfect, it is indeed the result of my best effort. I have written so much and I don't know if anyone will read it. It doesn't matter if no one reads it. This passage is actually more for my own reading. I hope that one day, I will be able to write a work that satisfies me. When I look back, these are the footsteps of my progress!