Black and White Intertwined

Oh, I can't bear to part with it. Which book will I open next?

What a coincidence. I actually heard about Tian Mingcheng's case last semester when I listened to the murder case in the middle of the night. I really watched it all night, hahaha, there's still an early morning tomorrow, Xiao Hanhan! It's very well written. I didn't expect Duan Shen to write it in such a way at first. . Resurrection??? How should I put it? It's a late compliment!! What a great little girl!

Finished spreading flowers! So exciting!

Is the point about brain transplantation?

To be honest, I didn't expect that the article with such a low collection (no offense intended) is actually quite good. The writing style is excellent, the logic is smooth, and the writing ability is excellent. Although it may not seem like a lot of praise, as a new author, it is already rare. I personally like this article very much, otherwise I wouldn't have spent so much time and energy writing this long review. The biggest highlight of this article is the two reversals. To prevent spoilers, I won't go into details. The author handles these two reversals and the foreshadowing of the previous article very well. It not only has a sense of surprise that belongs to the reversal, but also has clues that have been buried for a long time. It is not too abrupt and can make readers have the reading feeling of "I expected it, it is true! But it is really true!" Li Xiao, Duan Shen, Tang Yucui... They are not the Shura Triangle, but they all have connections that cannot be made public to the world. This article has a very good grasp of "suspense". Although the writing is still immature, it already has the beginnings of a very good control ability. The author's arrangement of the plot is really ingenious. I like the plot line of this story very much. The love under the casual relationship is as deep as the sea, the manipulator behind the simple case, the hateful person of the big boss must have pitiful qualities... It is enough to make people shine. Of course, this article also has considerable flaws. I hope I can bring it up so that the author won't take it as a joke. I hope you will read my long review carefully. First of all, although the author's writing style has some grammatical errors (such as grammatical errors), it is harmless and the flaws are not concealed. Generally speaking, it can be read without feeling unbearable. Of course, I also hope that the author can work hard to improve himself, because from the perspective of writing style, I think you are mediocre, with no achievements or mistakes, and no finishing touches. Of course, such suggestions are based on your previous writing skills. If your writing skills are too low, going all out to write sentences that seem to be very philosophical is nothing more than imitation - I think you have fully reached the level where you can go further! There is a shortcoming that cannot be improved in a short period of time: the author's writing level is very balanced in terms of literary talent, ideas, etc., But overall it is not very impressive. And this requires long-term writing experience accumulation and progress to get better... Secondly, although the logic is relatively smooth, some expressions are far from "fluent" - at least smooth and natural - there is still some stagnation between plot connection and scene transition. Of course, this requires more practice, observation, and study. In terms of character portrayal, apart from the main characters, other people in the police station are actually somewhat stylized. The two women's personalities are almost confusing, while the men's are almost the same. Firstly, the author's characterization of the characters is not deep enough, and secondly, among all the characters - the protagonist and the supporting characters, the ink is a bit too balanced, so that everyone seems to be "lost to all living beings". I mean, each character should have a distinct personality, just like the bosses on a snack street will be very different. It is recommended to strengthen the shaping of the characters to make them more three-dimensional. Furthermore, the description of the police force is not realistic enough. I pointed this out specifically because I have a friend who is a criminal police officer who knows a lot about the police force. However, I suggest that the author should read more about the police force. I remember seeing it shared in some forums. After all, excellent criminal investigation articles are very well-tested. I wish the author will continue to make progress and his articles will be seen and liked by more people!

?? I was stupid in the first few chapters. I thought Duan Shen and Tang were the same person... So much so that when I saw the "substitute lover" gag, I really thought it was just a gag. No matter what the reason is, the name you call out in bed when you are drunk is the one you love deeply...

Finished spreading flowers!! So stunning!

I checked it out, it smells so good

I'm so reluctant to end it

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