My Script Seems a Little Off

[I'm not really in the mood to fill in this story for now. If I start writing again, I'll change its status to ongoing.] From the gong's perspective: My name is Bazzong. My surname is Ba, and my given name is Zong. You can tell from my name that I'm an overbearing CEO by profession. I'm worth hundreds of billions and wield tremendous power. Before long, I'll meet someone I can't get enough of. They will run away while pregnant, and later we'll reunite on a beautiful day... But he has a problem right now: why does he, Ni Gu Bazzong, already have a child? Bazzong: I feel like this plot isn't quite right. From the shou's perspective: My name is Qingnian. My surname is Qing, and my given name is Nian. I've embraced new ideas, and my greatest dream is to become a glorious teacher and educate the future flowers of our motherland. But after I met Bazzong, that dream was completely shattered. Me, a New Youth, how did I end up with such a big child? Qingnian: Studying the humanities can't save people. (Angrily switches to medicine.) Little skit: After they get together: Qingnian: Where did this child come from? Bazzong: Didn't you give birth to them? Qingnian: Wasn't it you who gave birth? Bazzong: (Falls silent.) Qingnian: So you really did cheat on me. [Congratulations to Bazzong on winning a week-long hospital stay.] #To this day, we still don't know if Qingnian was cheated on# A mysterious CEO x a New Youth with new ideas (?) Gong's perspective, first-person narration (important!) Written on 4.13 Theme: My script isn't quite right