
The Overpowered Hero's Feel-Good Plot Has Completely Fallen Apart
龙傲天爽文剧情全崩了
by Mountain Mist in Wine (山岚入酒)
Synopsis
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[First published on Jinjiang. Next up: the Infinite Flow novel Nightmare Forbidden Zone [Infinite], the xianxia novel The Demon Lord's Character Can't Crumble [Book Transmigration], and the fantasy romance After Cultivating, the Lazy Female Supporting Character Transmigrated Back. Please add them to your collections!]
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The Demon Ancestress Lang Yao is the most popular member of the harem in the male power fantasy novel The Revered Path of Immortality.
A legendary demon beast, powerful and noble, with an icy beauty.
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The male lead, a power fantasy hero born to commoners, punches the great immortal sects, kicks bloodthirsty demons, and has confidantes all over the world.
According to the novel, Lang Yao has slept for ten thousand years. After drinking the male lead's blood, she devotes herself to helping him ascend.
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But when the day Lang Yao awakens arrives...
Lang Yao: ...Who am I?
Having lost her memories and changed her personality, Lang Yao promptly leaves.
The reborn original male lead: ?
The transmigrator with a System, here to steal the male lead's destiny: ?
The original "demon" whom Lang Yao has bound into becoming her blood bank: ?
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After unknowingly changing nearly the entire original plot, Lang Yao decides to take her leave, her work done.
The demon, handsome and gentle on the outside, grabs her. "You've bitten me so many times. Isn't it time I collected a little interest?"
Lang Yao lowers her head and thinks for a moment, then decisively kisses him.
"Demon" Jian Songyue: ...Isn't this backwards?
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A passing transmigrator, eyes wide with shock: ?? Wait, who? And who?
The reborn male lead, passing by too: Thanks for asking. That's my former harem member and my old nemesis.
The System, with a cold expression: [Don't ask. The harem, heavenly treasures, villain, and nemesis plotlines are all completely wrecked.]
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The unlucky "Demon Lord" who always takes the blame x the clever, eccentric little demon beast
Actually pure-hearted beneath his lazy, easygoing exterior x socially clueless, blank-faced, and direct
A fussy, all-talk-no-action softie x a sweet-on-the-outside, black-hearted killer with words
Quietly gloomy x openly mischievous
Jian Songyue (Chi Jian) x Lang Yao (Liu Shuye)
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[Anti-piracy ratio: 50%, duration: 48 hours. Much love!]
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◎Reader's Guide
1. This is not a level-up story, a smooth-sailing power fantasy, or an invincible-protagonist story. The male and female leads are both native to this world. The female lead is the Demon Ancestress, but she's no power fantasy hero; she won't be max-level and cutting down low-level monsters. The System is in a male supporting character, as stated in the blurb. Everything serves the comedy and plot. One-on-one romance, happy ending.
2. The female lead starts out with amnesia and no cultivation, and has a rather gentle personality. Her personality differs somewhat before and after she loses her memories. (She regains her memories in chapter 24.)
3. In chapter 41, the female lead fights an opponent above her level, gets suppressed, and loses. She's just that "weak." If you can't accept that, please don't read it. (It gives me a headache.) You'll be upset, and so will I.
4. Overall, it's lighthearted. The author and every major and minor character have peculiar thought processes. Logic is dead; this is not traditional xianxia, and the worldbuilding is wildly unconventional.
5. This is my first xianxia novel. It seems to have a bit of a wuxia flavor. I'll do better next time.
6. The everyday scenes are rambling and long-winded; the story is slow-burn, silly, and not very rigorous. Humor is subjective, so don't force yourself to laugh. My writing skills are limited. Maybe we'll meet again if fate allows. Stay or go as you please, no need to tell me. Click the X to show yourself and others some care. Much love.
7. The author's notes will occasionally feature silly, out-of-character skits. Try not to miss them!
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[The silly, bubbly modern school romance Sleep, Sleep, Today Is a Good Day is complete and ready to read.]
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◆, Synopsis: Nightmare Forbidden Zone [Infinite], ◆
Wen Ling has been unable to feel emotions since childhood.
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Then the "Nightmare Sickness" breaks out, pulling countless people into deadly games in their dreams.
Her utter coldness and detachment make Wen Ling, a member of the Dreambreakers, the most unshakable and formidable operative.
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In the dreamscape, heads thrash wildly, white flowers bloom among bones, the backs of children blur into chaos, statues flee in the night, and demons born of sin and desire reach out their hands toward
"You're all too noisy."
The expressionless young woman grips a long blade and cuts down every ghost and monster.
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Wen Ling has always worked alone, but someone forces a temporary roaming partner on her: Nan Ke.
Nan Ke's fighting ability is inversely proportional to his looks, and monsters are always chasing him. But he has an incredibly strong intuition and can easily detect the unknown corners of every Nightmare Domain. Wen Ling has no choice but to bring this deadweight along with her every day.
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As everything nears its end, Wen Ling enters the final Nightmare Domain.
But the Nightmare Emperor is nowhere to be found on the throne of bones.
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Wen Ling looks thoughtfully at Nan Ke.
The young man blinks. "I didn't do anything."
I just left, that's all.
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Wen Ling x Nan Ke
Odd and emotionally numb x good-natured, cheerful, and mysterious
Operative x Rover
The real powerhouse x the fake weakling
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◆, Synopsis: The Demon Lord's Character Can't Crumble [Book Transmigration], ◆
Mu Xizhao transmigrates into a xianxia novel as the early-dead, beloved white moonlight. But this white moonlight is actually a major villain: the lord of the Primordial Demon Realm.
The Demon Lord hides her identity early on, moves among the various powerhouses to steal secrets, and fakes her death after getting what she wants. She accidentally becomes the white moonlight in the hearts of the male lead and his male supporting characters, setting off a tragic substitution romance in which they transfer their affections to the female lead, Liu Pianpian.
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But at the point when Mu Xizhao transmigrates, the powerhouses have only just started to suspect the white moonlight's identity. And although Mu Xizhao has a huge reserve of spiritual energy she can't use, she hasn't inherited any of the Demon Lord's skills. She's basically a giant power bank.
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Mu Xizhao: ...I'm doomed.
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But an artificial idiot System has come along with Mu Xizhao. It forces her not to derail the plot: she can't reveal the white moonlight's identity early, and she has to keep up the Demon Lord's image and act cool. Otherwise, it zaps her with lightning at the drop of a hat.
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And so
A young swordsman hoping to challenge the lord of the Demon Realm: "Draw your sword, demon! If I defeat you, I'll be a hero!"
Mu Xizhao, eyes cool: "Young man, those who lack resolve are bound to lose. You only have one life."
The hand holding the young man's sword trembles slightly. How does she know what his master told him before he died?
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A beacon of the righteous path, hoping to turn things around: "Draw your sword, demon! I lost last time, but this time I brought a newly cultivated magic treasure. I'll make you taste defeat!"
Mu Xizhao, calm and steady: "That magic treasure is nothing special."
The beacon of the righteous path falters. She's so arrogant. Could she have cultivated some new technique?
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The male lead and his male supporting characters, trying to uncover the white moonlight's identity: "Wait, I'm not here to fight this time. I just think you look a little like..."
Mu Xizhao lets out a cold snort. "Like? Like who? And who is that woman behind you?"
The male lead and his companions' faces crumble. "No, Pianpian, don't cry yet! Hear me out!"
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A newly initiated disciple of the Demon Realm asks one of its seniors, "Is our Demon Lord powerful?"
The senior smiles proudly. "I feel like the Demon Lord has become even more powerful in recent years. I haven't seen anyone make her draw her sword in ages!"
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The fake lord of the Demon Realm hasn't found a worthy opponent in ages.
The real lord of the Demon Realm is desperately venting her frustration on a fluffy fox she picked up somewhere.
"Ahhh! It's over, it's over! Did I give myself away today? What kind of garbage am I? Have they figured out I'm not a real powerhouse? A Ci, help, help, help me! Ahhh, wahhh!"
The fox, A Ci: ...
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At last, once the plot reaches the point where the Demon Lord is supposed to be killed, Mu Xizhao successfully fakes her death with the System's help. But then a fox demon youth catches up and grabs her.
A Ci's smile is gentle, but his eyes are cold.
"Zhaozhao... where are you going this time?"
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Mu Xizhao jolts.
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Wait, wait, wait!
In the original plot, the nine-tailed celestial fox demon emperor who kills the lord of the Demon Realm is called Su Su Su Su... Su Jun-something!
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A Ci: Thanks for asking. My name is Su Junci. :)
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Mu Xizhao x Su Junci
Lord of the Demon Realm x Nine-Tailed Celestial Fox
A chatterbox with a ton of inner monologue, a drama queen who runs at the first sign of danger x gentle on the outside, yandere and obsessive on the inside, fluffy
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◆, Synopsis: After Cultivating, the Lazy Female Supporting Character Transmigrated Back, ◆
A companion story, of sorts! It follows Qiong after she returns home. Some details and settings have been changed.
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Bai Qiong is lazy as a fish.
She was lazy in the modern world and stayed lazy in the cultivation world. She only put in a little effort because she needed to cultivate enough to return home.
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But after coming back, Bai Qiong realizes that she seems to be living inside a book.
She's the beloved white moonlight from the childhood of domineering CEO male supporting character Jiang Yinghang, and she'll die of stomach cancer in a month.
Afterward, Jiang Yinghang, overcome with grief, hires the female lead and brings her into his company so he can look at her every day and remember the woman he's lost.
The female lead, Cheng Xiaoxiao, is a ruthless woman with no feelings. She uses him for money and resources, then, once she's made it big in show business, decisively dumps Jiang Yinghang, whom she's thoroughly exploited. She also finds her wealthy maternal uncle, and after a series of bickering-and-banter encounters with the top-tier star male lead, gets her perfect happy ending.
Meanwhile, Jiang Yinghang falls for the female lead as they spend more time together. His attempt to win her back fails, and he ends up dead. After getting drunk one night, he dies in a car accident.
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Bai Qiong looks at the newly appointed CEO beside her, Jiang Yinghang, who has just revealed that he's an heir to the throne. She feels conflicted.
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But...
She may be lazy,
But she's a master alchemist,
So what's this thing called a plot? Stomach cancer? Tell it to get lost!!!
Bai Qiong x Jiang Yinghang
The original female lead is a villain because the plot needs her to be. There's no deeper meaning.
Theme: Exploring the butterfly effect, and how different initial choices lead to different outcomes.
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Click your paw after reading this. It's the feeling of lovers finally getting married, it's quite special It would be great to see a different one among the white and black male protagonists everywhere in Jinjiang It also slightly fulfilled my wish that the male protagonist is a miracle doctor. Not bad, not bad
Looking back at that dream, I feel so miserable.
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Suddenly I saw the lonely thank you in the text, and thought of the author who racked his brains and worked hard to update the article. It was a bit bitter (I covered my mouth and felt like crying and laughing jpg, haha, forgive me for being unkind). Keep up the good work, Aoli~~