The Cloud I Could Never Catch

Regarding the crematorium article, I personally prefer that the factors that separated the two people in their previous lives must be broken down and explained clearly. Here are a few points I think need to be explained: ①In the past life, the male protagonist's mother sent a blind date text message, asking how they were going with the girl they were dating. If the male and female protagonist does not come up with this explanation after rebirth, I will assume that he and the girl on the blind date have already met and known each other for a while, or that he went to meet the blind date even though he has a girlfriend. This is a neglect and disrespect for the female protagonist. If you didn't go, you should explain more. ②The male protagonist has been cold-blooded and violent towards the female protagonist for a long time, and basically does not reply to the female protagonist's messages. If this is a love contribution on Weibo, I suggest breaking up. There is a character problem. ③The female protagonist heard the male protagonist chatting with others and found out that the male protagonist was with her because he confessed to the wrong person. After rebirth, when she was considering whether to get back together with the male protagonist, she should bring this point up and confess that she was the wrong person. Why didn't the male protagonist explain? And based on the character of the male protagonist before and after his rebirth, he doesn't seem to be the kind of person who is overflowing with compassion and is willing to sacrifice himself for others and take care of others. And he didn't really seem to take his mistakes to heart, and he was very indifferent to the heroine in his previous life. It was like "I confessed to the wrong person and ended up with you. You like me so much. Being with you is already compensation. Don't even think about being emotional and considerate." ④Finally, I would like to talk about my personal thoughts. After the heroine is reborn, I actually hope that she will have another happy, normal, and equal love experience. Even if she breaks up in the end, she will know what a positive relationship can bring to her, instead of being directly pursued by the male protagonist who has psychological problems after rebirth. In the end, she is moved to put aside the past and get back together. The male protagonist keeps inquiring about the heroine's whereabouts. It is scary. As long as he is not the protagonist, I will call the police. (Pretend to be a junior and send text messages, inquire into the intimate relationships of the heroine's life at any time, and have a good track record)

Really, the free chapter is really well written. Later, when the male protagonist is reborn, his feelings for the female protagonist are very abrupt. The male protagonist's attitude toward the female protagonist before he was reincarnated really doesn't show that he likes her at all. The state of the male protagonist after the death of the female protagonist, I feel that the author did it just for the sake of torture... Then the image of the male protagonist is whether he is cold or a sunny boy, the context conflicts, there are many plots worth developing, but they are not expanded, and the female protagonist accepts the male protagonist too quickly. Isn't she really guilty? The heroine's feelings for the hero after her rebirth are also a bit baffling. The male protagonist and the female protagonist became friends at school. Wouldn't their friends and school classmates discuss it? (Maybe it's because it's a key middle school) I feel like there's a lot to write about, but the author hasn't written it yet, so it's easy to read and develop very quickly. These are just some of my small opinions. It is already very good for the author to write this first book. Good luck, author! ! (In the end, I just couldn't help but say a few words, letting the heroine be reborn on her own, and it would be nice to be with others. I feel like the hero is...)

After all, it is a novel. If you encounter this kind of man who abuses himself for love in daily life, no matter how much you love him, please stay away from him. This kind of love is really suffocating. Don't think of yourself as a saint who saves love, or you will be backlashed.

I need more extras! Not enough. I haven't seen them get married yet.

It's pretty good-looking, fast-paced, the heroine is loveless and light-hearted, and the hero is tortured just fine. It would be nice if there were more plots where the male protagonist is dark and cries and feels ashamed [Lop-eared Rabbit Head]

It's rare to see an honest article on Jinjiang. It's well written.

Girls who like to read are the most beautiful

In fact, the writing style is very good, but it is a bit stiff in some places. I feel that the author will polish it and form his own self-defeating formula, which will make it even better.

Woohoo, I want to see more extras!

I still want to watch their extras!