[Demon Slayer] Unbelievable

These few lines of scrapped manuscript are also very wonderful... Echoing the ritualistic text of Tong Mo in the previous article. But the one who left the most vivid impression on me at the end was Tongmo. I obviously came to see it for Yiyong... Damn it

I have read this book three times and am now commenting on it for the fourth time. Speaking of which, this book was written a long time ago. It always feels like things go by so fast. More than 4 years have passed in the blink of an eye. The first time I saw this book was on the recommendation of Hongshu. At that time, I was particularly interested in Giyuu's writings. I saved a lot of Demon Slayer fanfics, but I almost forgot about this one. Only when I read it later did I realize that the text is very attractive. And this character is not OOC at all. The two people get along very naturally. I really feel so happy that I want to cry. The emotions are very delicate. I will see some comments saying that I don't understand the heroine, but I think. After all, we are in a place like the Demon Slayer Corps where you can die at any time. Promising something casually is indeed irresponsible to others because you love me so much that you can't imagine the other person dying but keeping your promise. My heart hurts so much. It hurts so much. The other thing is the description of Zenitsu. It feels like a very attractive character description. Many people will not understand that night, but my understanding is that Zenitsu was half asleep and half awake. Not afraid, but very courageous (refer to the time when killing ghosts), so I can face my heart and say those words. Normally, I would be timid and withdrawn, so I think this is very reasonable. In addition, Giyuu is a person who is not good at expressing himself. He is very afraid of losing, just like Qiu Usagi and his sister left, so both of them have this kind of personality. They are dull and misunderstand each other's meaning. Sometimes they can't help laughing. And about the part that finally made me happy and then separated due to an accident. It was a particularly painful part. It really made me cry endlessly while watching it in the middle of the night (the music played was wodderful u). The music was playing randomly at the time. When I saw that part, this song happened to be played. I am a very emotional person and I really couldn't help crying. By the end. I really feel a bit withdrawn. After reading it, I felt like I was lost. It's empty, but the ending is still very touching. It's like a journey through thousands of rivers and mountains, with the feeling of being rewarded after all the hardships. I'm so happy that others want to cry. But originally, I was looking forward to it because there was a sequel. But the ending is not bad, it's really touching. This book can be said to be my top book in Jinjiang. Some of the psychological actions and other descriptions are really immersive (why does it feel a bit like a Chinese language test? Just kidding), but it still feels like time passes very quickly. I found that many of the articles were written five or six years ago. I don't know how to describe this feeling. Maybe I am a sentimental person. I always feel an empty and uncomfortable feeling. Time just slips away quietly. I will think about this when I am in a daze. It's a bit far-fetched. Anyway. I like this book very much, and this is the first time I write a long review (by the way, I can't find a review yet, and I searched several software before I found [Joker]). This book was also written a few years ago. I still think it's great and beautiful, so I wish you all good luck in life, be happy every day, and all the best. I also wish the author a good life in reality, and be happy forever. There are many, many more things to say, but I can only say one thing: life goes well. Yiyong and Yi are also happy, so that's all. See you next time [waving hands] To my dearest author and all readers like me [Fireworks]

Super pretty! Very full of emotions, I read a lot of fanfics, but when I read this one, I felt like I had walked from the river to the sea.

I revised some of the previous chapters, but not a lot. I deleted some nonsense and fantastic metaphors. There is really a lot of nonsense, but I was reluctant to delete it when I was revising it. After all, it was a detour I had taken. When I wrote this book, I didn't know anything about writing techniques. I had no skills and relied entirely on emotion. I also had many problems when I was writing this book, whether it was the work or my mentality. Anyway, I really appreciate everyone's criticism and tolerance. By the way, if you like it, you can give it a five-star rating (hey

My wife is really good at writing... This is my second review. This article is one of the few that I have read that can make me cry with true feelings. I will always wait for my wife to give Xiaoyin and Yuyu a happy ending...

I cried from beginning to end... Really, this is the first time I admire an author's writing style so much.

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I read the article a long time ago, and I still feel a touch of happiness when I read it again. Although it was a little awkward in the early stage, it makes it seem so real and ordinary. People who love each other will eventually meet [touch head] [hug]

Finished spreading flowers! Thank you for your hard work, madam! Looking forward to meeting you next time!

I thought Tongmo would come back to provoke me