Blade of the Sky

Ah... It's really nice in the front, but it feels so abrupt in the back and the ending is a bit unfinished...

After reading it, let me tell you my thoughts. It's a free purchase. When I read it, I didn't expect the article to be quite short. To be honest, I felt it was just average. Although the Wen Ye tag is added, the Wen Ye plot appears a little bit. It is unnecessary to add this tag, and it can easily confuse readers who search for the Wen Ye tag and want to read Wen Ye. The appearance of Natsume Soseki also felt unnecessary and a bit superfluous. Akutagawa also used a lot of words to describe him. If he said it was important, he was the heroine's childhood sweetheart in another world. If he said it was not important, he didn't appear at all after that. The heroine never thought of looking for him, so she was very confused. The second one is the emotional line. Maybe it's because I don't read much about the first-person point of view. Although the heroine said that she has deep feelings for the Demon Slayers, it's hard for me to get into her feelings. I feel that something is missing. I always feel that she has deeper feelings for Muzan and the original sister and younger brother. This is an extra point. The author said that the three CPs also feel that there is no special emotional basis. The three people were chosen just because they appeared a lot, and the length is short. It might be better if the CP was confirmed early on to focus on the description. There is also a discrepancy between the direction of the plot and the plot. It was previously said that the younger brothers would meet in Wenye and Kuwashima would not die. However, the heroine was offline for too long and nothing happened, and there was basically no Wenye plot. . . . The above are some of my thoughts. The heroine's character description and ability setting are very good, but if it is described from a different perspective and more other people's psychological activities are added, it may be better.

How can this be finished just by keeping it?

Time is caught off guard

QAQ, Damn, I can't find any text about Big Brother's sex.

Hey hey hey? ? ? ? ? Why did the group disband? ! ? ? ? ? ? ?

Hey, hey, even though the literary hero's appearance is a bit unexpected, it's very nice! Although the development suddenly became faster, I was a little disappointed that I couldn't see the move to break through the zero point... But I was still very touched! ! ! ! !

I'm in love with you all night

If you keep it, it will be over/confused, but this ending seems to be perfect for the big brother (?) I like it very much~

?(?òωó?)? Brother, thank you for your hard work. Online classes have exhausted all my enthusiasm (???ω???). I hope you will be a good mother.