We Were Made for Each Other [Full-Dive VR]

Readers who have come a year late feel this: In fact, the wonderful plot of the game is also a big advantage of the author. I have also read some other games, and I feel that the distribution of emotions and games is handled very well. The overall game is more game-oriented, and the emotions are also very sweet as an embellishment. This one is relatively sweeter. Reflection can also tell that the author has done some splitting. Of course, you can't tell when reading the article, because it is really sweet and I enjoyed reading it. The shortcomings of Noble are also in the emotional line. The emotional line is there and has a strong sense of presence. It is sweet, but not enough, so I feel more like a group portrait. This book has a slight improvement, but in fact I feel it is supported by the sweetness. In fact, compared to the later period, the early stage feels better, because the author writes a lot about the game. Emotional enhancement is originally related to the game, and the feeling of doing tasks together in the early stage is good. I feel that the crux is that the author's game structure is too big. The other game articles I read, not to mention the names, don't have many big scenes and events like those in these two game articles, including factions versus large-scale guild competitions. To write such a plot, it is inevitable to add people. The author has written this aspect of the plot very well, but while the factions are fighting against each other, he also wants to adjust the plot. It's difficult to adjust the focus. When I saw the server confrontation, I really wanted to see a big scene and a big formation. The author did it, but if it was written like this, the protagonist's love life would be separated by many things. I can feel that this camp confrontation is not as well written as other factions. All I can think of is that the author can try writing smaller scenes, or two real-life lines, although it may not be easy to adapt... After all, if you want to write a sweet story that focuses on emotion, you have to sacrifice something. For example, in this book, at the end of the first big event, the two of them can actually talk, and there is no need for a big camp event. At that time, you can slowly change the direction of the plot and take a route that focuses on love. The above are some of my thoughts. I don't mean to guide writing. I just want to help the author a little bit... Although it is a bit late, I may not have found a solution... And I really like your gaming articles! I like this book as well as other brands! But the author seems to have higher aspirations hhh, Come on! I'll give you a lot of heart!

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Great every day! Although I personally think your writing is very smooth, if you can realize your own problems and work hard to improve, I believe you will become even better! Make progress with you!

Hahahahahahaha The horror game suddenly stopped being scary. It was so fun.

Hahahahahahahaha Is the fifth personality also played this way?

It's really beautiful! Don't doubt yourself, baby

I think it looks great!! So cute and sweet!! Thank you, my wife, for not giving up and giving me a lot of joy in snickering under the covers!

No!!! This article is so beautiful!!!!!!! Since I can't write game fan fiction, I haven't encountered such a satisfying article in a long time!!!!!

The author is super awesome

Very nice! I like! Keep up the good work, madam! Compare your heart!