Trapped in a Shura Field with Four Disciples

QAQ I want to see the world after the sweet reunion. Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

I want a sweet extra, and I want Laochi and Xiaochi's doi after they reunite.

Whether it's the ending or the extras, there's a feeling of an abrupt end, which is hard to put down, but overall it's still very good. After all, it's rare that I can fully subscribe and read a chapter without finishing it, but it's still a bit regretful.

So the other four people didn't merge in the end... Then they were just fooling around... Although I like the leader very much, this point should be added to the copywriting, or a setting should be added where the split soul returns after the ball mission is over.

God created the so-called world for himself, treating all living beings as nutrients and absorbing them at will. To put it bluntly, it is Cao Ying's human life. Chi Fengxian's own sea of ​​consciousness was full of corpses. He was not a god, he was evil. He never learned to respect Xianqiu until the end. He had no regrets at all until the end. After reading this article, I don't have a full order tag because I haven't ordered a sequel and I find it boring. By the end, I didn't feel that the protagonists were in love, that they were in love and meant nothing. The first half of the article is all about the apprentices, but in the end the apprentices just come out for a formality. There are so many slices that I don't know who to write about. The system is also a slice, and the chaos is also a slice. The most outrageous thing is that I was forced to have sex, and I fell in love with him and took the initiative to kiss him, awesome. Even if he finally finds out that the world is just a joke, finds out that he has been deceived, and finds out that the person he thinks he loves the most only treats him as a reserve food, he doesn't care. The title of the article says apprentice, but in the end you will find that the protagonist is the master, and the apprentice is just a supporting role in the later stage. However, the master, who is the protagonist, also plays a supporting role in the early stage. The upper and lower parts of this article are like splitting. Slicing is not a reason for not focusing on the key points. It may be because the author can no longer grasp the key points. The author's writing style is actually good, and I didn't feel too dramatic when I read it. The characters are still very clear. The only unclear thing is the protagonist Chi Fengxian. The plot setting changes him from a cold master to a murderous maniac, and a doting maniac to a peerless scumbag. This kind of transformation actually requires many small copies to support it, but the author just hastily used Xianqiu's perspective and memories of Xianqiu to induce these changes. It was not an introduction, it was just a change. The whole text feels too fragmented. When I read it to the end, I felt it was so abrupt when I thought about the previous plot. In the end, a lot of things were not explained clearly, and it felt like I hadn't read it after reading it. The above is just my personal opinion. It does not represent anyone else, and I do not expect to be recognized by anyone. A thousand readers have a thousand Hamlets. This is what I thought after reading this article. This article has been completed and there is no writing guidance.

I think this ending, alas, the emotional lines of the other four apprentices are not very clear.

Why does it end like this. . . It feels like the internet is down and the content cannot be loaded. . . Neck. . Quack quack

So... The ending is two worlds, and the slices are not merged: the remaining apprentices in one world continue to take care of the world of cultivation until the spiritual energy declines and the princes and generals become kings and ministers. The other world is the pension world, where Master Chi and Xianqiu pension.

My feeling is that the author did not write according to the outline he originally set. The whole text is running wildly in the direction he wants while writing, which makes the whole text feel very fragmented. But surprisingly, this rushing direction is really what I like... What a coincidence.

Big! It's hard to calm down!