Can a Cyberpunk Omega Fall in Love with a Digital Pet?

After reading it, the whole reading experience is probably: Wow, cyborg human beings, such an interesting setting! ——Super, underground black market, electronic sea and consortium, taste good! So rich! ——Wuwu, who is so handsome with the white-haired tight-fitting mechanical prosthetic body? Go, go, go, if you don't go, you are not going after the Chinese! …But that's it. The setting is great, and I thought so until I finished watching it. However, in contrast, the plot is basically a whole, a single-line story about "retrieval" and "revenge". The prerequisite for retrieval is that it has been lost for many years. I was shocked by Qingdi's powerful mental arithmetic power, and I felt unwilling to empathize with Xiaomei's birth. I imagined in my mind the AI ​​holding the hyacinth scepter, and sketched the omega that would soften at the sound of "Dean". The cat's nest under the weeping willow, the endless falling dolls, the tears falling on the eggshells, the red sun that is about to rise in the electronic maze, the significance of the cat Formeshin, the exiled warship, and a daily email, these can easily move me. The setting is interesting and the fragments are touching, but the main plot seems more and more... Bland. It's just bland. In the whole process, except for Campbell's always changing tricks to make me sick, there aren't many things that are really attractive and retaining. And I often feel like I'm missing something. If I wanted to see the recovery, why would I want to see the fragments of the continent that I spent fifty years wandering around, all my old friends gone, and painstakingly put back together, only to correct a mistake from beginning to end? The wrong start is just due to trusting a villain. Then what? What happened to Eurasia in fifty years? How to save yourself? None of it was mentioned. If I wanted to see revenge, how could I not want to see the villain pay the price? The war was to kill him. I didn't even see him witness the collapse of his foundation, nor did I see him and his family being engraved with shame. Even this couldn't make up for anything, but there wasn't even this kind of plot. Death, what a cheap person, light and airy, what does it mean after being delayed for decades? Live a happy life and then die more than ten years early after all the victims are dead? Why do everyone in the comment section hope that falling off the map is an escape from the invasion of electronic beasts? Because the villain's evil deeds and fate are so unequal. Fifty years later, there is no way to make up for this disparity. We can only hope for a clumsy reversal to make the consequences less painful and to vent the evil spirit of revenge. Seeing Qing working hard all the way, no one was willing to criticize him harshly. But such a childish reason has such terrible consequences. The deep-diving teammate who dissipated into the blood-red code, the sunken Eurasian continent, the villain who lived for at least seventy years, and rested on Qing and Anna's spinal cord bones and blood for decades. The price paid by the evildoer is only death, so how can the person who was killed by him be comforted? This main line, whether it is recovery or revenge, to be honest, it has nothing to do with happiness, it is just a feeling of depression that has nowhere to dissipate in my heart. Although there are many good people, those who have special meaning to Qing are basically dead. Fidgety, scratching the table, wanting to beat up Campbell. It's a pity that even the death of AI only hurts the surface of a huge group. Qing tried his best to be like a tree-shaking earthworm, but from beginning to end, he couldn't relieve the boredom in his heart. In the past, when I read cool novels, I always watched the villain break his defenses while forcing a smile on his face, feeling helpless and furious inside. When did you end up being so incompetent and furious? Okay, I don't want to say any more. Watch something else! Such as group portraits! One thing to say, the fleeting supporting characters are very well created, splicing the most convincing corner of this bizarre cyber city. The most exciting part of the story is always the people, I am honest! But he is not happy, after all, Qing, he is just a lonely soul wandering in another world... I like dolls, masked men, red foxes, and nuns in red dresses... But I only like them face to face. Qing, he will be helped by some supporting characters, but on the road to revenge, no one can accompany him except the cat Fermeshin. Did the masked man avenge her, and what happened to the scientist in the vat brain? I wrote it, but I didn't write it completely. If I wrote too much, it would deviate from the main line. On this road, there are only passers-by, no like-minded fellow travelers. There was once, but unfortunately the old friend is gone and only appears in the memory. Both parents died, and the country was destroyed. What kind of suffering in the world? It hurts so much! Let's not talk about group portraits, let's talk about something that is not uncomfortable, character growth, and rewards from killing monsters! For Qing, if retrieving memories counts as growth... Forget it, Qing Emperor starts at full level, let's talk about it later. For Mei, it's not like she hasn't grown yet… Is it okay to go straight from infancy to full body? No one can say that one step does not count as growth, right? No, no, no, no, there are really people who don't pursue a sense of layering when reading novels, right? Ah this. Just, well, who said abnormal development is not a growth line? To put it this way, there are still many gestures, and the integration is also very cool! Who did Qing Di pretend to be by reciting poems and improving his mental arithmetic skills? He was exposed while filming a promotional video, and he denied it and read poems as if nothing happened. Who is laughing to death? Do you understand? At times like this, it just needs a little poem to make it interesting! Highlight a utterance (x), step by step (?), Chinese style aesthetics in the opera poem Modo Modo. It's pretty cool, but would it be too offensive for me to say there's still no growth? The distribution of growth in the early and late stages feels very strange. If I had to evaluate this article completely, it would be more like a cyberpunk adventure, a special effects action personal movie with a locked-in perspective. The past intertwines with reality, leaving the figure of the white-haired young man vividly visible, leaving a rich silhouette in the hearts of both the author and the viewer. From this perspective, this article is undoubtedly a success. After all, saying goodbye to Qing makes people so sad. But this couldn't dispel my devastated mood when I discovered that the main story was over as soon as the boss died, and there were only three extra chapters. The wonderful and self-consistent setting, the stunning characters, the jumpy and difficult-to-read writing, the depressing and long middle period, and the hasty ending all together constitute this article. Its excellence is due to the author's imagination and writing power, but as for the plot... Let's put it this way, judging from online literature alone, I have never seen one where crushing the villain's conspiracy and revenge are the main storyline, and the plot is very enjoyable. There are so many cool articles that start high and then go low. In the early stage, it's fun for the protagonist to grow up. It's fun to pretend to be cool. It's fun to win. It's fun to help the supporting characters gain rewards at the same time. It's fun to upgrade the golden finger... As soon as the world view is decrypted or the boss is defeated, it's not fun at all. It's not fun at all. Boredom is almost a common problem in the late stage. Expanding to more is almost the same. The revenge line runs through many parts of the novel, but the staged successful growth and acquisition are still the main elements of the excitement. On the contrary, it is difficult not to be depressed. Fifty years of slumber allowed Qing's loneliness to emerge on paper, and the plot basically officially left the category of cool novels... This is difficult to comment on. Basically it depends on what the author wants. As we all know, it is difficult for ordinary people to have both. Then the requirements for plot design are very high. I am writing this long review. On the one hand, I am really surprised by the setting of this article and Qing's outline. On the other hand, I am so beaten by the plot that I am full of the desire to complain. But overall, it's a book I won't regret ordering. I hope it won't offend the author too much.

A very novel and interesting world view... The whole story feels like it can be expanded into at least another hundred or two hundred chapters, and I still have more to say...

The setting is cool! The final ending is also great. When I watched it, I felt that Qing was like a passer-by in this abo world. I didn't know where he could go after taking revenge. Even if Xiaomei is with him, Xiaomei is still a wanderer and is always very bleak. But now in this ending, Qing has returned home, and Xiaomei's dead hometown has also received a bright hope through the Poké Ball.

My wife can actually expand her writing, her writing skills are very good, and she can keep up with the settings and writing, so you don't have to worry about being criticized. I really haven't seen enough! I also really like the protagonist's journey of search. It's a two-way journey with the flower grower. Hehe.

In fact, the setting of this article is really novel, and I feel like it can expand a lot of content. Unfortunately, the ending is a bit rushed, and the two protagonists don't get along very much. The relationship came so fast, like a tornado, that I couldn't react. However, judging from the book of Evil God, the author has made very rapid progress in both the plot line and the emotional line. I wish you can write more and more good articles (sympathy)

Yes, the abos on the market are just pure erotic literature that does not conform to the objective development facts. When I read the first few chapters, I saw the male protagonist complaining that it took hundreds of years for humans to evolve into animals that can be in heat 365 days a year. It was so enlightening. I used to be disgusted with the estrus setting in abo stories. , Isn't that an irrational pure beast? It's very sweet to appear in a pornographic novel, but if it is mixed with the main plot, the human rights issue cannot be bypassed and cannot be solved [laughing and crying], it is a very novel setting, I like it, but because it has been completed long ago, I just skipped the chapter to read the ending. It is a good ending [Spread your hands]

It's a pity that I was born in Jinjiang. Alas, Xiaomei is the kind of attacker I like that has a detachable electronic controller!

Maybe it was because my mouth was red, but my nickname was cleared. When I saw the message, I checked the time and found that it was probably a comment under this article. I hope it didn't affect the article itself. To be honest, I still don't understand it. It's just a comment on an online article. Does clearing the nickname erase the traces? But why don't you just delete an inappropriate comment directly, instead of just asking me to find this person? If it turns into a bunch of numbers, it won't be remembered by others. I don't insist on being remembered, but it's fun to communicate with friends I don't know across the Internet and time and space! If I turn it into a number, they won't remember me, right?

I really think it can be watered down... Da Da's thinking is more active, which is reflected in the text that readers have to read carefully. If you skip a line, you may miss the details...

Uh ah, why is it gone... I only completed the main plot, so why are the branch plots that can enrich the world view so much? I feel so sad...