Venerable Yao

Dragon head and snake tail, I really love Da Da, and I also feel that there is a little... Um... Lying in the snow, a woman half-covered by a transparent red gauze, I saw her unzipping her clothes, oh, it felt like she was wearing a three-gun cotton sweater and pants. Although I know it's to keep warm, it just feels like... Well...

The writing is really good, even if it is unfinished, it is like a piece of Kunshan and Guilin, which is superior to all the vulgar fans.

The relationship between the two protagonists is too bland and anticlimactic. I can't feel the depth of the relationship between the two protagonists. Especially Ah Yao, who seems to be a little interested. There is no ending to Dashu Yuye.

This article really started high and low, and some parts were pretty good. By the end of these chapters, the plot felt like a wild horse running wild. I came here to see Emperor Qin, and I was a little disappointed.

It does feel like reading an outline later. It develops so fast that I feel dizzy while watching it.

As soon as Su Yan's setting came out, infrastructure and other things were just like floating clouds, meaningless. No wonder the author felt that he couldn't write it back and couldn't control it.

It does feel like it starts and ends but I always have great ideas. I hope I can write better and better~

In fact, I came here for infrastructure. The first few chapters particularly poked me. However, there is not much written about infrastructure later on, and the content later becomes more and more grand, to the point where it is a bit ungrounded. Both the characters and the story are very thin. I couldn't see how deep the relationship between the protagonist and Chen Zi was, nor how deep the relationship was between Lao Long and Yan Zun. Dashu and Yu Ye also passed by in passing. After reading this book, I didn't know what the main plot was about. If it's about saving the world, then after a long time of development, the boss at the end is his biological father? I didn't do anything, and I felt empty after reading the article. Neither career nor relationship seems to be well discussed. My favorite is "Regardless of Wei and Jin". Everyone is engaged in business and infrastructure construction, although it is strange to force Wei Jin to get a cp.

So what, can it be cut off and rewritten? It doesn't mean that just because it's written on the platform, it can't be modified at will, right? Once you've made the changes, replace them all. Of course, I wasn't the one who did it, so what I say is irresponsible~ It's better to start the next article as soon as possible, if you have ideas.

I've finished watching it, but I feel like it's not over yet. Can you please take the time to make a sequel?