[Dream of the Red Chamber] I'm Just a Rough Fellow

Again my comment. I first thought that what I was watching was a dispute over the back house, but later it might be about a feud in the court (probably not counting the palace fight), but in the end it turned out to be a legend of the world. Hahahahaha

It's really well written. I haven't read an article like this in one sitting for a long time. Comment on what I think is well written and what I think is lacking. Contains extensive spoilers. First of all, in the plot, the protagonist Jia Zhen finally inherits the title and becomes the actual manager of the Jia family, and the several power struggles in the court are well written. For example, the plot dealing with Jia Zhen and Prince Zhongshun. The plot development is reasonable, and the language and behavior of the protagonist and supporting characters are reasonable and consistent with the identity of the characters. The protagonist is not only powerful and intelligent, but also has an innocent heart. The author took great care to write about the little things the protagonist did, such as giving the little eunuch money to compensate and buy clothes. I also like the way he handles Qin Keqing, Jia Zhen, Jia Rong, Jia Baoyu and others, he is affectionate and principled. Gong's character and emotional descriptions were a little one-sided in the early stage, but in the end he did a good job of supplementing the plot of the killing of the Supreme Emperor. Only after seeing the conversation between Prince Liang and Emperor Qian did I feel that Gong's character development and emotional line were tenable. Several supporting characters have distinct and impressive personalities. For example, I think the character of Emperor Qian is well described, complex and multi-faceted, with both sentimental and ruthless sides. I even think he is the most three-dimensional and impressive character in this article. Personally, I think there are many shortcomings. For example, Zhao Yi did not participate in most of the plots in the early and middle stages, but the Crown Prince participated in almost every chapter. Is this supporting role too aggressive in claiming the throne? Moreover, some of his words and deeds towards the protagonist seem to be better than those of ordinary brothers. I will not give examples one by one. I don't know what the author's intention is in describing this? Secondly, the final change in the palace and several assassinations of Jianghu people all depended on the protagonist's personal heroism. All the rebels were settled by the protagonist's force alone. The emperor, the potential king, the protagonist's subordinates and brothers, civil and military officials, and all the military seemed to have the only role of finding and feeding ginseng to the protagonist. I felt that this plot design was unreasonable. I felt that the author was in a hurry to finish the story and sometimes rushed to promote the development of the plot and lost some logic. The concept of Jianghu that appeared inexplicably did not have any foreshadowing in the early plot. Overall, I think it looks very nice. Nowadays, it is rare to see such well-founded plots on JJ. Writing this kind of plot requires thinking, but now many authors are too lazy to think and will only write plots that confuse readers.

Wow, it's so well written, I can't get enough of it. I also want to see Xichun Daiyu get married, Lin Ruhai's master and apprentice meet, the six princes grow up, and Baoyu completes his studies. The original text briefly mentions the suppression of bandits and the unification of the martial arts world, which is very imaginative. The daily life of Emperor Qian Emperor Zhou Kai seems to be happening forever. The plot is so heart-wrenching and the characters so vivid that I can't let it go for a long time. Xiaowan really has a charming personality. He respects and protects his love, but does not use love to bite others; despite his vast skills, he is still an honest and honest gentleman; when he sees the suffering of others, there is a distant pain in his heart; he is an invincible weapon and becomes his own god of war. Thanks to the author for the chance encounter.

Wan'er is a very, very charming protagonist, and the emperor and his best friend are well portrayed. I really can't stand this character design, so I won't comment on it. The conflict design of the plot is not bad in online novels, but the transition and advancement in the later stages are a bit abrupt and abrupt. I feel that the author's mood has changed due to the huge changes in life, and it is not easy to finish it, so I won't be harsh.

The article is well written, but as I read it, I realized that it was different from the cool article I imagined. At first glance, it seemed quite enjoyable, but when I looked closely, I felt that I had already passed away with a sudden crunch. Is there anyone who cares about it? I am only sixteen years old, and everyone around me is unreliable, useless snacks. In turn, I have to be protected by this teenage child, and I am constantly injured. It is really tiring both physically and mentally. I can understand the current twists and turns in the author's writing. It's generally good. The characters are lively and vivid. The plots in most of the previous books are relatively rigorous and compact, which makes people want to read more. There are many highlights. Putting aside the frustrating parts, Sister Su can be included.

... After reading it, I felt very unhappy. Maybe it was because the protagonist's sense of sacrifice was too heavy. Maybe I don't think it's worth all the effort he puts into it. I never thought that a modern person would die serving the emperor. Maybe there are too many parts where the protagonist is too miserable and sad, but there are too few exciting and exciting climaxes. Forget it, that's it. Anyway, I've finished reading it.

It's really super pretty! ! ! Oh my god, it was so enjoyable to read it in one sitting. It's hard to imagine that this is actually a fanfic. It's so beautiful. It feels like an ancient novel. The white space is also very good. My wife is really amazing! ! !

Belated flowers. My wife's writing is really great. The struggle between the Supreme Emperor and the Emperor is really exciting and tense. I really like Jia Wan's character of being able to take things and let things go. He looks lawless but is actually clean.

I feel that the postscript at the end is suitable as a background for a martial arts game. [Sunglasses] The novice mission access points are all there.

It's good to watch, but the ending feels a bit rushed () and it feels like there's a lot of unfinished information!