The Wilderness Beyond My Backyard

From the moment the protagonist started to change magic to cultivation, the plot became more and more ridiculous. I felt that the author also wrote it perfunctorily. No matter the plot or wording, he just added it to the article without thinking at all. In the early stage, although the character of the protagonist showed that the writing was not mature, at least it was done carefully. What will happen in the later stage? Will the circle come back and be replaced by a dog-tailed marten? . Really, the author should be more serious and don't focus on weight rather than quality. What's the difference between that and a code machine?

After watching it, I feel that since Gong came to Earth while others were in danger, the emotional and plot lines have been like a sports car without brakes on a mountain road, running in unexpected directions and making big turns from time to time. I feel that if the first hundred chapters are a stage, then the next forty chapters will be expanded into two hundred chapters, which will be more coherent. Attack and Shou → Write a paragraph about the upgrading of Shou → Write a paragraph about changing the cultivation system → Write a paragraph when you find a problem with your mood → Write a paragraph about a new task → Discover a contradiction in a system task → A paragraph about the secret in the new task → Find out the secret and discover part of the truth → A paragraph about getting along with Attack and Shou and the relationship becomes warmer → Return to Earth to deal with things → Continue to do missions to improve strength → Discover the final truth → Become enemies with Gong → Continue to do missions, fall in love and fight, and the relationship will heat up → Shou is in trouble, Gong rescues, and learns the truth → The enemy escapes, Gong takes over → Shou returns to Earth to contact relevant departments → Start a holographic online game → Enemies act like monsters → Small battles turn into big battles → Victory. The author just writes too hastily and wants to write out all the settings in just a few dozen chapters, which makes people feel that the plot is like running on a three-wheeled mountain road, jumping all the way. It can also be seen that compared to the previous article, the following paragraph has no outline. The author just writes wherever he goes. It is a streaking style of writing. So this plot, this emotional line, this power system, all collapsed. It is still difficult to master a long novel. The author's imagination is good, but his writing skills need to be improved. I hope the author can write better next time.

. . . I feel lonely after watching it

"Cheng Haohan, Chai Yufeng and their family members Shen Mingda" is the setting here that Chai Yufeng and Shen Daming are a couple? Another unopened book is written by Chai Yufeng and Cheng Haohan?

To be honest, I only like the beginning of the game where the protagonist fights monsters and upgrades himself, and then joins the attack force. Not very watchable

Remember, they were the first people the protagonist met and saved them

I feel like this pair of deputy cps. . . Although I am cute and love each other and kill each other, I am not cute like this.

I really hope to see flower growers have holographic games in my lifetime.

So Chai Yufeng and Shen Mingda are a couple?! Then the next pre-competition pre-receipt article is going to be aborted⊙▽⊙After all, the CP has been dismantled...

Fine! I like my wife's imagination! I am also very happy to read my wife's articles~ Come on, madam!