Transmigrating as the Concubine's Daughter

The plot of concubinage is actually quite boring, it doesn't advance the plot, and it wasn't considered a big deal under the circumstances. Let's not talk about whether the master, an old fox who has been an official for a long time, will compromise so easily. Just because she is a good friend of his daughter, the daughter's reputation must be considered in this matter. The plot arrangement is really inappropriate. It makes people feel aggrieved for Liu's sake, but she has little to do with Xinshan, her daughter, and Xinshan has no fighting ability at all. Let's talk about the heroine. Xinshan is a heroine who has no characteristics or much wisdom. Her mother has a high IQ and EQ, but it seems that words and deeds are of no use. I think that if you want to write a novel about sweet pets, you don't need to travel through the plot, just the indigenous people. In this context of time travel, I believe that most readers want to see a strong and wise character who has the ability to change destiny, rather than a little girl who is no different from us in reality but has a better life. And the young master of the Wang family is not too outstanding. Are these two really the hero and heroine... I feel that the author has put more care into the creation of other characters. Isn't this the author's true love? The general in the article is much more memorable. I hope the author can work hard

I think the author arranged this plot very badly. A businesswoman shows off her carriage and asks the heroine's father to let her in. Regardless of the identity of the hero's father, this is all forced. No matter how far-fetched it seems, this is far-fetched.

Cheng Xinyue really couldn't figure out whether it was true that he didn't care about his mother. At this time, you didn't stand up for the madam and only thought about your own little emotions. The madam was not bad to you, so no wonder you were noble and lonely.

The general is the hero, right? He doesn't take concubines, and he hates classmate Wang's age. Not less than ten to eight years, but also three to five years.

Do we really want Xu Wenlan to be assigned to his father? It's really annoying.

I feel like the ending was written in a hurry, and the last few chapters suddenly grew up.

It's quite beautiful. There are so many children in the heroine's family and the male protagonist's family. There are seven girls and four girls in a while. It kind of imitates the taste of Red Mansion.

Where can female pigs go to enjoy the weather? The writing is good, but the logic is somewhat inconsistent and somewhat haphazard. One is that Aunt Shandong is a huge loophole~~A girl with a deep mind, a business, and money~~The female pig family has good conditions~~How could she make such a low-level mistake? A female pig has a skin problem~~I only see female pigs being pampered~~Where does the wind and sun come from~~the bad skin~~is rough? These two loopholes are too big, especially the former. It's like a completely different person~~The logic is completely unreasonable~~The character collapsed.

Mantou is not the name of the female pig brother~~The servant is also called this?

I like your writing very much and look forward to your next work! Come on!